[Denied] [Pending] SleepingPandas Application

[Sleepingpandas 1]

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: SleepingPandas

How old are you?: 26

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree with the forums rules section speaking about respecting each other, including language, this leads to a more professional environment and keeps drama out of the RP unless it is intended to be there.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): None.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: My brother

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is "pretending" to be apart of whatever game you are playing, you are that character and you are speaking as that toon.

What is metagaming?: strategy or method transcending the games ruleset

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: forcing someones actions onto another "god moding"

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Orthanav

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Orc

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 670

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) Born on the eastern Isles, Orthanav, would some day become a high end ruler of Vailor. When he was young, Orthanav's father taught him to be a brave warrior. In hope that some day orthanav would bring destruction among the land. As a young orc, Orthanav had many challenges, facing dragons, elves, and humans. Each challenge orthanav faced only made him stronger. He traveled the realm of Vailor in search of his brother, together, they would rank in the land of the Orc.

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Eating his toenails, dislikes small creatures.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) A Warrior leader

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Fighting, scaring innocent children, Cooking

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) people skills, eating friendlies.

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) Black hair, scars on face, 6'3

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

[Readicti 902]

Your application has been put on Pending. Look at the comments bellow and make the necessary changes. You have 24 hours to make changes. Message me when you are done to notify me to look at this application again.

• Expand on your metagaming definition
• Your character's age is a bit high. I recommend changing it to be younger. It'll be easier to roleplay as your character won't need to know every event that he would have experienced on the server and he'd be.... very old. He would have most likely died in a fight long before now. If you want to be older, look at being in your 100's. 
• Your biography lacks lore. Look at our wiki pages to find lore that you can use. Your character at the moment would have been born in Aegis, however if you change it to be in the 100's, look into being born in Anthos.
• In your biography is also a little short. Try to include some interesting life experiences. Why does he want to one day be a ruler? How did he fight a dragon? When did he fight elves and humans? Try to tie these experiences into the lore and past events. 
• Expand upon your weaknesses, eating friendlies isn't exactly a weakness.

Overall, do a little expanding upon your biography to include lore and change your character's age. I also recommend you reach out to an orc player so that you can get a few tips on speaking Blah, the orcish language. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message me and I'll get back to you as soon as I can.

You have failed to make the necessary changes and reach out to me within the given amount of time and are being denied. You may re-apply in 12 hours. Take this time to work on your application and go over the critique above. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message me.

Edited April 1, 2016 by Readicti

[Readicti 902]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.