[Denied] Application

[Vlaxe 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Vlaxe

How old are you?: 15

Are you aware the server is PG-13: Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The skin one is really smart because I won't run into a batman skin for someone playing as an elf

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?: Not really they all make since to me

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was looking for a rp server on a server list and found this one.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications: None

What is roleplaying?: When you full dive improv where you only act off what your character know and interact with others.

What is metagaming?: When someone acts past the preset game rules or their characters knowledge in role playing.

What is powergaming?: Making a character the best towards something without considering the story or atmosphere of the roleplay.

Character’s name: Zabitur (Last name: Lyklor)

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Dark Elf

Character’s age: 57

Biography: My character was born in Luminaire. Which is also where he lived when his parents were killed. Unaware of how his parents had died the traveled till they found the city of Darkhaven and settle there. Him and his brother became assassins to make money and survive. They were pretty successful till one day he had to do an assassination on his own and failed. Which gave him a scar on his left arm. Him and his brother later found out that his parents were killed by the government when they went to do an assassination in Luminaire and visited their old neighbor who knew their family when they were young. She then told them that they shouldn't be there because ever since their parents were killed they have been after them. They then asked who and why and she told them they were executed for being halflings which made them very upset and then they sought revenge.

Personality Traits: He is funny and love to play around and is rarely serious

Ambitions: My character wants to avenge his parents death

Strengths/Talents: Strength and Agility

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Attentiveness (for example he failed in an assassination attempt by not noticing that their was a guard on a roof of the building across the street and got a scar on his left arm)

Appearance: My character is 5'10" and has white hair. He also has a scar on his left arm from an assassination gone wrong.

Skin:

 

[jamesb 218]

[jamesb 218]

Your application has been put on [DENIED]

 

Unfortunately, this application has too many errors to accept. You are welcome to reapply in 24 hours. Reapplying sooner will result in denial. If you have any questions or concerns, please visit my forums profile, and send me a Private Message.

 

This application was denied for the following reasons,

 

- Your power gaming definition is incorrect. Feel free to visit for HERE help with this definition

 

- The current year on LotC is 1553. If your character is 57 years old, he would have been born in 1493. Luminaire and Darkhaven both existed in Anthos, which the Descendants fled in 1457. In short, with your characters current age, he could not have been born in Luminaire or lived in Darkhaven. Either change these, or make your character at least 96 years old.

 

- If Zabitur's parents were halflings, he would be one as well. In this way, having Zabitur's parents executed for being halflings doesn't make much sense.

 

- Your biography needs a bit more lore. You may visit LotC's wiki HERE for help in finding some. And remember, your biography needs to be a decent two paragraphs long.

 

- The ambition "vengeance" is rather cliche. Please try to think of a more creative one.

 

- Expand upon your strengths and weaknesses. Try to find some that aren't combat based.

 

Do not make a new post, simply use the “Edit” button to modify your current post.

 

You have 24 Hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

 

Good luck on your next application!

 

[jamesb 218]

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