[Denied] Peliville1's apply

[peliville1 1]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Peliville1

How old are you?: 15

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: War rules.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: My friend told about it.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable)

What is roleplaying?: Refers to the changing of one's behaviour to assume a role

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is an out of character action where a player's characterr makes use of knowledge that the player is aware of but that the character is not meant to be aware of

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:  Power emoting describes the abuse of this system when player use emotes to describe an action that takess away the ability of another player to respond or prevent it.

Character’s name: Algersnop Algamis

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Halfling

Character’s age: 43

Biography: Algersnop born in Willow Hollow in year 1520

Personality Traits:Algersnop dont like cats

Ambitions: Master cook

Strengths/Talents: ' Chef

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Combat

Appearance: algesnop is 2ft tall and his weight is 40lbs he dont have a scar he have a brown hairs

Skin: cant but screenshot becaus is size is 8,16kt but here is link to my skin http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/bilbo-baggins-the-hobbit-1808980/

ps.

[Skylez 870]

Your applications is denied for the following reasons.

 

- All three of your definitions are plagiarized.

 

- Your biography needs to be at least two paragraphs long, as stated in the format.

 

- The biography also needs to contain at least three points of lore.

 

- Personality traits are not what you like, they are characteristics such as being brave or determined.

 

- Your character's ambitions, strengths and weaknesses all need to be expanded on.

 

- Your skin that you linked needs be more original than Bilbo Baggins, as your skin represents the character you will role play as and should be more unique.

 

This is your fifth denied application, meaning you are now banned from applying for one month.

Applying before this period will lead to an instant denial.

You may re-apply on July 9th.

If you have any questions or problems, feel free to send me a PM through my forum account.

 

[Skylez 870]

Moved to Denied Application Forum.