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[TheSkullKnight 0]

A highlander human comes down a rocky mountain, only having the villagers noticing his armor. As he watched them laughing at him, he slides down the mountain. He was stopped by a villager, "Sorry, but we take in refugees." When he was smiling, the man spoke. "Who said I was going to live here and I'm not a refugee. Also, go die in a hole.", he said so calmly, but the villager tried to strike the man. As he slash, he noticed he was bleeding from the he strike with, now noticing the man had a dagger in his hand. Finally, the man left and that man was Azu Hollow.

In-character:

Name: Azu Hollow

Sex: Male

Race: Human, Highlander

Age: 32 years old

Biography: A highlander human found to be talented to a bow and dagger, but was nearly murdered by his brother, Luke Hollow but he wasn't murder and Luke was dead by a soldier. The soldier trained Azu to become an assassin. Now being an assassin for 12 years, having a bounty of 10,000 gold due to murdering over 50 men/women with bounties. During this time period, he was assumed to be already dead.

 Now knowing people he was dead, he went on with his journey only to noticed a man with a bounty of 6,000 gold he follows him. When he walked in a cave, Azu took a dagger and sliced his neckle only to know to claim his prize, the gold. Then, he was killed by a demon as in karma. Soon, a enderman appeared right in front of him. The Enderman but a curse on his heart to kill what needed to be killed. Other people.

Personality Traits: Cocky, Pissed

Ambitions: To find his Mom's and Dad's corpses only to destroy them with fire.

Strengths/Talents: Bow and Arrow; Hunter; Stealth; Works in the shadows; Kills anyone with a bounty; Has over 50 kills

Weakness/Inabilities: Teamwork; Sleepy; Witches and Wizards; Warriors with Shields

Appearance: Blue eyes, Blonde hair, Skinny and slightly muscular, 138 Lbs, 6'1"

Skin: http://www.minecraftskins.com/thumbnails/skullknight-8515683.png

 

Out-Character:

Account Name: TheSkullKnight

Age: 14 years old

Aware of the server being PG-13: Yes

Did you read and agree to the rules: Yes

What rules do you most agree with: All

Confussing Rules: No

How did you find out about this: A youtuber show the server and how cool it is

 

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?: The action of pretending to be another person, fictional or nonfictional

What is metagaming?: The act of using outside knowledge to influence your character's actions

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: The act of a character doing an action that would be impossible to do for them

Fixed verison

[jamesb 218]

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[jamesb 218]

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