[✗] Risingflame09 Whitelist Application 2

[Risingflame09 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?:Risingflame09
How old are you?:11
Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):Yes.
Have you read and agreed to the rules?:Yes.
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No abusing glitches.
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No, I think all these rules are easy to understand!
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was looking through a list of RP servers, I enjoy these types of servers.
Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/146040-denied-risingflame09-whitelist-application/

Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!
What is roleplaying?: Playing as a charactor who you make up, taking him/her on a journey.
What is metagaming?: any strategy
What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: interacting with games or game-like systems.

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?): Risen
Character’s sex: (male or female?): Male
Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.): Human
Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!): 18
Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.): Risen was born in a mansion, but at the age of four, the house was burned down, his parents, desperate to to keep Risen alive, died saving him. He began his adventure at 6 years, for the two years he was alone, he survived on apples and other kinds of fruit, and trained to learn magic. At 6, he knew some weak magic, and he carried on learning and getting stronger as he explored. At the age of 10, he met a dragon, and fought it to train his magic, and so, he got his scar.

    Risen, now a master of fire magic, began to find a place to stay. He searched for many years, feeding off fruit until me made his way to a nearby village. Looking around, he found a map of the nearby area, and, following it, He came to Felsen
Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?): usually happy, easy to please, quiet
Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?): A fire warrior (a warrior, who uses fire magic and his sword only).
Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?): Swift use of his sword.
Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?): His rage
Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?): His hair is red and spiky, and he has a scar made from a dragon's claw. He is around 1.8 meters.
Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.): I could not upload the skin screenshot, so I will leave a link to the skin. :http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/9221109/medievil-boy/
NOTE: sorry for the slightly different look, I worked on this on a notepad, so the colors and links didn't save.

Edited July 28, 2016 by Risingflame09

[EdgyMagey 787]

 

Greetings Applicant;

Your application has been Denied for the following reasons:

 

• Your definitions of Powergaming and Metagaming are incorrect. You're free to use google to learn about them, but please do not copy-paste the exact definitions, please write them with your own words;
• Your biography states that your character has started adventuring at the age 6, and taught himself magic. This is quite unrealistic and you cannot possess magical arts before joining the server. This process is done by finding a willing magic teacher on the server. Please write your biography according to this information;
• Fire warriors aren't in the server lore on the Lord of the Craft;
• It is quite unlikely that your character would be able to fight a dragon at the age of 15, please change your biography accordingly;
• Your appearance states that your character has spiky hair, which is not very appropiate to the general theme of the server;
• Your character's strengths and weaknesses are vague. The application team would love to hear about what your character is good and not-so-good at doing;

 

You may re-apply after 24 hours.

 

Please do not hesitate to contact me via Forum PMs, which can be accessed from my profile page for any questions or concerns you have. Good luck!

[EdgyMagey 787]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.