WolfWithWine 0 Share Posted July 29, 2016 Quote What’s your Minecraft account name?: WolfWithWine How old are you?: I am 13 years old What timezone are you in?: CEST Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): I am Have you read and agreed to the rules?: YEs What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The no cyberbullying rule. Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): Nope How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I searched "Roleplay servers" Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): None Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes Definitions Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial of your application! What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is acting like a (most of the time) Made up character, When most of the time with a bigger group acting like you are in that world. What is metagaming?: You are metagaming When you use information that your character wouldnt be able to know What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Power emoting occurs when you say "Jason falls of a bridge and causes a fire" When you should say "Jason falls of a bridge and there is a change a fire can start" So power emoting is forcing another player to do a specifick action. While not letting the others choose for it. In-Character InformationNow you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play. Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Sharok Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Elve Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 25 Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): Sharok is quite an old elf. Because of his young age he hasnt really traveled alot. He was born Exactly 25 years ago (Today is his birthday) So this means he is halfway to grown up! His father has died and his mother lives very far away, The elf tribe found him and raised him, Sharok itself doesnt know the elf tribe arent his real Family He lives with the wood elves and because he has always loved nature, he has never been to any othere tribes. He has dyed his hair in many diffirent colours, but decided to change it back to its original state. Although he should be in his puberty, he isnt. Noone of the tribe knows why because they dont know the race of the parents. Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Sharok is really clumsy, This is why he loves making Clothes that help him climb! he really likes bird and other flying animals but HATES being laughed at because he is only 5 feet tall. Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) Sharok wants to be the King of the forests one day. Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) sharok is really good at fighting and Strategy.. Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) He is not good at running away or having to do things really fast. Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) He has blue eyes, Blonde hair, No visible scars and is only 5 feet tall. Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bvie 1754 Share Posted July 29, 2016 PENDING Your application is pending due to the following reason(s):Your power-emoting definition is weak and vague. Please expand on this. Your biography does not contain 3 specific pieces of server lore. Your biography's first and second sentence contradict each other. Please address this. Elves are now 'tribes'. There are three sub-races. Please address this. While Elves are culturally seen as being children until 50, they physically mature at the same rate as a normal Human. Please address this with your mention of puberty and such. Here are some links to help you resolve the above issue(s): Power-Emoting: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting Vailor(Current Map): https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor Elves(General Lore): https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Elves Wood Elves: https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Wood_Elves You have twenty four hours to make this edit - you do not need to make a second post! Just edit it! Please be sure to PM me once your edits are complete. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bvie 1754 Share Posted July 30, 2016 DENIED Applicant did not make changes in the time allowed. Please remake your application should you wish to join our server. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bvie 1754 Share Posted July 30, 2016 This application has been denied. Moved to the Denied Applications forum. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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