[✗] test application 1

[littlesnowdream 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: littlesnowdream

How old are you?:10

What timezone are you in?:England timezone

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):yes i am

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes i have

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:that you have to have a friendly rp skin

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: youtube

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):yes i have

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?:roleplaying is where you have took the role of someone else

What is metagaming?:have fun not be yourself but someone else

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:the point of roleplay is to have a inact of your character and have fun while doing so.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?)snow

Character’s sex: (male or female?)female

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.)wood elves

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!)300 years old

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) character was born in a dark forest witch was evil but she left that city and trained to be a good elf that was when she became a wood elf she was born in 1885

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?)my quirks are i love reading and learning new stuff my dislikes are evil magic and evil people

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?)love to be a magic elf

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?)fighting

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?)staying focused

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?)she has blue hair her skin colour is peach they are 15 feet tall

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

[Bvie 1754]

DENIED

 

Your application has been denied due to the following reason(s):

 

Your three definitions are all definitions for roleplaying, not for metagaming or power-emoting.

 

You're missing a definiton for metagaming.

 

You're missing a definition for power-emoting.

 

Your biography isn't 2 full paragraphs long.

 

Your biography doesn't contain 3 references to our server's lore.

 

Your strength is listed as fighting, but you have no reference to your character ever fighting or training in their biography.

 

Your character's description does not fit the norm for a wood elf; their hair, skin color, and height are incorrect.

 

Here are some links to help you resolve these issues when you reapply:

 

Metagaming:

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming

 

Power-emoting:

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting

 

Vailor Lore(Map Lore):

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Vailor

 

Wood Elf Culture and Lore:

https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Wood_Elves

 

 

You have twenty four hours to make this edit - you do not need to make a second post! Just edit it! Please be sure to PM me once your edits are complete.

[Bvie 1754]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.