Luna_ 0 Share Posted September 2, 2016 Out-Of-Character Information Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication! What’s your Minecraft account name?: Luna_Galaxy_Fox How old are you?: 13 What timezone are you in?: Eastern time zone Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): I am aware Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes What’s the rule you agree with the most?: "Cyber-bullying", through repeated harassment or any other means will not be tolerated. Those partaking in or promoting such will be severely punished. Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I looked up Medieval roleplay, I am very interested in roleplay and medieval times Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): yes I have, the server is beautiful. Definitions Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial of your application! What is roleplaying?: roleplaying is when you pretend to be a character that you made. What is metagaming?: metagaming is when you know about something that you shouldn't know at the time What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: powergaming is when you force another character to do something In-Character Information Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play. Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Luna Character’s sex: (male or female?) female Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) human Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 18 Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Luna has no clue where she was born or when, so she does not even know her birthday. When she was 3 years old, her parents died and she was left in the forest. She was found and raised by foxes because of her fox ears and tail. The foxes found her on June 1st, exactly at midnight, the reason they named her Luna. She claims that her birthday is June 1st. Her ears and tail give no benefits to her except for appearance. She hides her ears and tail, simply because she thinks that everyone else will judge her. Her favorite color is purple. She enjoys fishing. Is shy. Dislikes shoes Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) she is not sure Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) farming, fishing Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) baking Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) Luna is 4 and a half feet tall, she has silver hair, brown cloak, green shirt, green gloves, and leather pants, and no shoes. Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Argontum 153 Share Posted September 3, 2016 Greetings applicant; Your application has been denied, but do not fret! This does not mean the end. The reason for this denial would be the inability of your application to meet up to our standards. If you follow and complete the changes I lay out for you, your next application might get accepted! Your powergaming definition is plagiarized. This is your first warning. Plagiarize again and you will be banned from applying for one week per plagiarized item. Your definition of metagaming definition is vague. Feel free to use the thread below to help get more information about it. But remember, please do NOT copy from that thread, we'd love to hear it in your own words! Some parts of the application is not formatted properly. I request you to format your application in the correct way next time you apply. The format can be found here; Your biography is missing 3 specific references to server lore. Use the LotC Wiki to find out more about the server and incorporate it into your biography, such as places and events. You can find them in the wiki; https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page Your strengths, talents, weaknesses, personality traits, and ambitions are pretty one-sided and vague. The AT request you to expand more on each of the following. This has to have a connection with your character's biography. It would be highly unlikely or impossible for someone to have fox ears and tail. I advise you to change or remove this in your next application as it doesn't fit our theme. We want to make sure that new players understand our concept and the server theme. Please choose a skin that better fits your character. Having fox ears and tail doesn't fit our lore and server theme. LotC is a medieval roleplay server and I advise you to change your skin to fit our server. You may re-apply in 24 hours from the point of this denial. Do not hesitate to contact me if you need help or have any questions. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Argontum 153 Share Posted September 3, 2016 This application has been denied. Moved to the Denied Applications forum. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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