Shawn820's Application

[Shawn820 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:

Shawn820

-How old are you?:

20 8/20/91

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Pacific timezone, CA.

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I solve problems more than create them. I just chill at home and play minecraft when i got time i work on the weekdays so i cant really join then.

Just write about yourself:

I just play minecraft to pass time and have some fun.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

I'm usually on during the weekend so i guess 11-13 hours

-How long have you played minecraft?:

Around the beginning of alpha

-What do you know about roleplaying?:

Its about giving your character a story, his life, you are just one guy, not a god. I know that you have Fears and that you cant just run into battle head on.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

Being a Serious roleplay I expect a good time and some fun, Cant wait.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I go around on server's that my friends put up and talk

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes, and I understand them.

-Name the 4 races on this server:

Elf's, Orcs, Dwarfs, and Humans.

-How did you hear about us?:

I was told by my friend.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

Shawn820

In-Character:

-Character Name:

Dave Fotia

-What is your Race?:

Human

-Biography:

He was a cheerful child but throughout the time he became more silent and serious. It turns out he was Trained from birth to join in a war he did not want to fight, He was trained to be more of a Blacksmith on the battlefield. He tries to keep peace but if he must, he fights. He left home on a path of shame being a lone person who did not want to fight. After many run in's, he finally got attacked by thief's, they stole his money and left him with nothing. He walks the lands in hopes of finding a place to stop and

-Character Age:

22

-Character Appearance:

A Bearded, Bigger man.

-Character Personality:

A Quiet man, Keeps to himself most of the time.

-Your ambitions:

Just to help those who need help.

-Can your character read or write?:

learned to Read and Write.

-Can your character mine?:

a bit, he is cautious in caves

-Are you a capable builder?:

Yes

-Can you wield a sword?:

Yes he can.

-Enjoy Farming?:

No

-Does your character have any special skills?:

A better Perspective, He can see more around him than others.

-A screenshot of your skin:

Sorry about picture size

-Other Information:

He seems to stop and think about something at moments of Peace.

[NairOG 1]

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

-Contains elements of meta-gaming.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been.

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthe...od-application/

Also, do NOT contact me in order to view your new application.

[Shawn820 0]

Could I get a reason to why I was denied?

So i may try to fix it

[Shawn820 0]

Sorry if there is something against double posting, But i have altered it. I hope i can join the server.