my first appilcation

[Prutsers 0]

Minecraft name: Prutsers

My age: 16 (10 november i will be 17 :D)

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: I think is was 1+ but I live in the Netherlands next to Germany and above Belgium.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I think I have, atleast my school mark say so. No just kidding I make of course mistakes but that’s why I’m at school to learn English, but I will do my best to make as few mistakes as possible.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I’m stilling going to school 5 days a week (Monday-Friday), I do judo (brown belt), on Saturdays I like to go out and during the week of course minecraft (with nice music at the background).

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I’m almost the whole week available, but when I got a test I have to study for it and when I have training for judo(Wednesdays, Fridays and Saturday) then I cant come online. (in hours total min. 9-10 Hours a week).

How long have you played minecraft?: I have been playing Minecraft for about 10 months.

What do you know about roleplaying?: I think that it is taking on a role of a character, this character being your Minecraft character and playing out your adventure through the eyes of this character.

What do you expect this server will be like?: an epic adventure with a lot of nice city’s and a new minecraft experience you never ever have experienced before.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Completely. No rules no order, no order no peace, no peace and Chaos will rule.

Name the 4 races on this server: Elves, Orcs, Humans, Dwarves. This is not including the subraces and Undead and Ascended.

How did you hear about us?: I was googling for 24 hours 7 days a week until I finally found this awesome server, I’m just kidding found this server on http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/335702-%e2%96%91%e2%96%92%e2%96%93-the-lord-of-the-craft-%e2%96%93%e2%96%92%e2%96%91-enter-the-world-of-aegis-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r/

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: prusters

In-Character:

Character Name: Prusters

What is your Race?: dwarf

Biography: once on a day prutsers as 12 year old boy was playing along with his other dwarves friends, when suddenly the undead came and slaughter his whole family and friends.

Prutsers got away luckily, scared and sad but he was alive. Wandering in the lonely mines prutsers learned him self how to survive. With the revenge of killing the people who destroyed his whole life, prutsers learned him self how to become a master smith and a master of the swords. After decades of wandering he finally was ready to face the people who where responsibility of the slaughter of his friends and family. Will he get his revenge…

Character Age: 24.

Character Personality: Blunt and hard but with a small hart.

Your ambitions: getting the revenge he wants.

Can your character read or write?: nope, no schools in lonely mines.

Can your character mine?: certainly

Are you a capable builder?: yes

Can you wield a sword?: yes, if he have to kill something that’s on his path he has to.

Enjoy Farming?: only when he gets hungry.

Does your character have any special skills?: No.

Skin: is Don Corleon from the godfather if he needs to be changed just say so I will do it (link to skin: http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/the-godfather/ ) when it need to be changed plz tell

[EricderRote 0]

Very short Biography. Please make it longer.

Please don´t post the same application since 3 days. You will get an answer.

[Prutsers 0]

Very short Biography. Please make it longer.

Please don´t post the same application since 3 days. You will get an answer.

i will not do it again posting so early but when people post their application after me and they get reponce before me then i think they didn't read my app

[Ivrae 30]

Common reasons people are denied:

-You're an orphan

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-read-first-chevaliers-guide-to-posting-a-good-application/