Gerard Car'lisle

[Marc-Alecai 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: MarcAlecai

-How old are you?: 15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: 0 GMT

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I am from England and speak as if from the 1930's

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a student a rednock school in Gloucestershire and have been playing minecraft for some time. I enjoy Larp, and D&D also am a furry (some people hate this)

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: at a total maybe 10-20 hours a week although may be offline for a little while soon.

-How long have you played minecraft?: i have been playing minecraft for about 18 months.

-What do you know about roleplaying?: Role-play is essentially taking on the role of a character and fulfilling their persona to its full by completing tasks and interacting as they would.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: a world of people who enjoy role-playing and fantasy fun as much as me.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: this is my first apart from that of friends.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: of course, rules are never made to be broken.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Elves, Orcs, Humans and dwarves obviously the best fantasy races, also the ascended and undead.

-How did you hear about us?: My best friend told me and ever since I've been in awe!

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Marc-Alecai

In-Character:

-Character Name: Gerard Car'lisle

-What is your Race?: Human, from another distant land.

-Biography: Gerard had always watched the stars. When he was young at the age of 4, his father an esteemed Imperial general, bought him a telescope so he could gaze in disbelief at their infinite glory, when he was 12 his father taught him to fight with a sword, he became ever great with a blade. at 18 was drafted into the Military as a blade master and during his time at the front fighting hordes of enemy soldiers he was split from his regiment. he soon found his way home after his dire conscription, he left the armed forces and went to university and studied the strange galactic rock known as redstone and soon became a redstone engineer specialising in defences he became qualified and built defences for his kingdom until there was to be corruption, at 29 years old Gerard's father accepted a bribe from the enemy and changed his political view, Gerard and men rose up against him in parliament and he was cast out when his father won. He took a ship and crew and sailed for 7 weeks. aboard the ship they were raided by an undead ghost ship and looted of provisions he fought bravely and got burned by an oil fire aboard. He managed to steer the boat away and only 2 days later came to port in Aegis a new already inhabited land and his injured crew was tended to and went their separate ways to make a new life.

-Character Age: 30, young soldier previous rank captain, esteemed redstone engineer

-Character Appearance: Wearing blue and red dress uniform burn on face from oil fire. brown hair.

-Character Personality: optimistic, determined, wants revenge on his family, enjoys sparring.

-Your ambitions: Would one day like to become the personal engineer to the kings and queens of aegis and become as well known here as he is in his home.

-Can your character read or write?: yes he's a university graduate

-Can your character mine?: yes but tends not to, more of an intellectual.

-Are you a capable builder?: Redstone engineer and builder of defences.

-Can you wield a sword?: Was a previous military sword master.

-Enjoy Farming?: no focuses more on technology.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Intellectual and can give extremely powerful speeches, good swordsman.

-A screenshot of your skin: http://marc-alecai.deviantart.com/art/Gerard-264078478

[Jadles 85]

Your answers are too short in places.

Your Character Biography is too short.

Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthe...od-application/