8th application

[Dwarven_boy 1]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:

The_little_dwarf

-How old are you?:

18

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

GTM London

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am a student of 18 years old in Paris, I play Rugby, I like to play RP games, They are the best=)!!!

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

4-5 houers

-How long have you played minecraft?:

since 1.4

-What do you know about roleplaying?:

Computer role-playing games for short or a computer RPG genre. Characteristic of RPGs is that players take on the role of a character or group of characters, and the development of the characters is an essential part of the game.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

I think It's AMAZING!!!

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I made a server with my friends but I wanted more to explore!!

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes, and I agree

-Name the 4 races on this server:

Human, Orc's, Elves and Dwarves

-How did you hear about us?:

I saw your trailer on youtube.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

Dwarven_boy

In-Character:

-Character Name:

Bartok

-What is your Race?:

Human

-Biography:

Bartrok is a nobel human, born in The great Kigndom of Oren, he had a small family 2 kids and a mother, his mother always said his father died in an fight against the most evil power in the world!!He travelled across the land of aegis, searching for adventure! He came across some evil but he resisted. He survived many attacks, but one day he got cursed, he was unconscious for two entire years, he did training to become a fighting-machine, for about tree years and now he searches the lands of Aegis to find this man that cursed him. He was searching for an antidote but he didn't find one!! He fighted, He became a hero while searching for that evil man and after a while he found out more people where cursed, he assembled an army of powerful man and elves to fight against the UNDEAD!!!!!! Now he is still wandering in the lands of aegis to protect it from the evil, he doesn't now what awaits him in the future more evil will come!! He will grow to one of the most powerful humans in the entire lands of aegis!! But what he doesn't know is that his father is an evil man, The one That CURSED him!!!!!!!The soul of his father was gone long ago when he died in the battle against the most evil power of Aegis, so it was not his father!

-Character Age:

18 years old

-Character Appearance:

a knight on an iron armor with golden and blue edges

-Character Personality:

I am a kind person, but if you make me angry (for a reason ofcourse) I will kill you!!!!

-Your ambitions:

Make the world a better place!

-Can your character read or write?:

yes

-Can your character mine?:

yes

-Are you a capable builder?:

yes

-Can you wield a sword?:

yes

-Enjoy Farming?:

no

-Does your character have any special skills?:

No nothing special at all, just willpower

-A screenshot of your skin:

http://imageshack.us/content_round.php?page=done&l=img231/7012/20111019152223.png&via=mupload&newlp=1

-Other Information:

No other information

Greats, The_little_dwarf

[terorek 1]

If you whant to now your Biography is good. but some answer are to short. I don't think dit is good enough.

[Hunter (sckolar) 50]

Some information is missing, and your answers are too short. The site expects a HUGE biography, like two or three big paragraphs (this is key), but when they have yes or no questions, don't answer with just a yes or no, explain why your character can, and can't do this and that. Don't make your character perfect in everything, for example, my character can't read, but he can mine because he has big muscular arms to swing the large axe as it crashed against the ore. Be more detailed in your descriptions, and say more about yourself, and your character. Don't try to seem perfect either. The GMs can tell if you are trying to sound great, everyone has errors. Like i have good grammar, but I am not perfect. I'm no professional obviously :D, but i do know that the GMs are very professional about your application, and they expect it to be perfect. Kind of like an essay. They look at every single question, and if one is not answered correctly, or you miss something, or you simply don't answer it, they will decline the application. They like nice long answers, But don't make it seem like you are just trying to fill up space, make it meaningful.

I hope i helped you, and good luck

-Sckolar