[Denied]Chrisebob's Revised Fourth App

[Chrisebob 6]

Out-Of-Character

-Minecraft Account Name: chrisebob

-How old are you?: 13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: London (GMT)

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am very witty and a very quick thinker i am sometime sarcastic and i have a dry sence of humor. i also enjoy sandbox games like minecraft and tycoon games but most of all i like playing minecraft.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I can be on this server most of the time i do have school till 4 O'clock weekdays though.

-How long have you played Minecraft?: I have been playing Minecraft since the early Alpha stages.

-What do you know about role-playing?:I think role playing is a chance to get away from the real world and is a chance to have another life in a fantasy world, i also know that in role play you must allways stay in charector unless you are in the OOC channel.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I have been to this server recently as a wandering soul and by far, this is the best server I have been to! I have been to other servers but the size and complexity of it is just amazing.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: mainly because of dumb greifers or spoiled and ungreatful admins who dont care about others.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:yes, Definetly.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Elves, Humans, Orcs and Dwarves.

-How did you hear about us?: I have gotten suggestions to a great server from a friend of mine nammed Ben his in game name is Corpien

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: chrisebob

In-Character

-Character Name: Knight_Blaze.

-What is your Race?: My race shall be the bold and very mighty Humans.

-Biography: My parents were burned on the stake when he was the young age of 4, they died by the evil undead warrior's, luckly my uncle took me in (Captain_Treyarc) and we both grew up together in age and Sorrow. But now, now i am ready to make the change and furfill my fathers destiny of eliminating the undead. Hopefully i will be able to give children the life i never had, that is if i have children. On the other hand being an orphan has an effect i was brought up in a bad city named Argos which is a very long way from where i am now in Aegis. Argos was where my parents lived, died and were buired. Hopefully some day me and my uncle can travel back to my parents graves.But not all of my life was sorrow i had some good times when i was young like running in the gardens of abberfourth, and learning how to make my own basic tools like picaxes, swords, hatchets and spades.

-Character Age: 20 years of age.

-Character Appearance: A Hench build with a strong mass, ruffly 300 pounds but all muscle.

-Character Personality: A Tough and bold warrior but a Sweet friend, he loves attention when it is rewarded.

-Your ambitions: Knight_Blaze wants to furfill his destiny by killing the undead emperour.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes, my uncle tought me when i was 7.

-Can your character mine?: Yes me and Captain_Treyarc used to mine and dig for resources however we were never succesful.

-Are you a capable builder?: Sometimes i can build forts and strongholds however i was never brought up to be an archetect.

-Can you wield a sword?: Training at a young age has it's affect, i am master at the blade and can strike down any enemy. And thats one of the reasons i am ready to take down the undead, its showtime.

-Enjoy Farming?: Due to his lack of patience, he sadly does not have the time to farm.

-Does your character have any special skills?:No not other than his Slashing ability.

-Other Information?:he does not have very much money at the moment, as he is very poor as a person. but hopefully now he is grown up he can get a job.

Picture:http://s1207.photobucket.com/albums/bb469/chrisebob/?action=view&current=2011-10-17_191901.png

[Samson Option 9652]

1. Even with urgency, you MUST stick in-character, if you are about to die with a properly roleplayed situation, take the death and know that you have been carried away by monks and brought back to health. Revise your RP Definition.

2. Biography is a block of text, make it sound more believable and more substance.

Contact Me or another of the App Team Memberbase for assistance or enter our LotC Teamspeak Channel and politely ask for help!

[Chrisebob 6]

i dont understand i never died

you asked me to make my bio bigger i have done it? :(

[Samson Option 9652]

Well then help me in explaining what you meant by: "i also know that in role play you must allways stay in charector unless its urgent."

Also, if you added more substance to the biography, please do put them into paragraphs.

[Chrisebob 6]

ok thanks please re review it i have changed it.