My Lotc application

[CrazyBlueBannana 2]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: CrazyBlueBannana

-How old are you?: 13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: PST

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:I would like to say I have good grammar. I know that all humans slip up and make mistakes. Its important to spot those mistakes in order to learn.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I spend weekends raking leaves or mowing lawns, depending on the seasons. When I am at home I like to spend time with friends and play Minecraft. I also play sports in the Spring and Fall.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I will be able to spend about 16-25 hours a week on Minecraft.

-How long have you played Minecraft?: I have played for about 8 months.

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?: I know roleplaying is about acting as a character and playing a role. You can see what he sees and you know what he knows. Roleplaying is when a person(s) Is in a storyline created for that person(s) to live and act as a person that is different then themself. I have had past expirence on roleplaying on a game called Terraria. It is not the best game for roleplaying, but it was fun.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect this server to be the kind of server were you play it one day, and while your at school the next, you won't be able to stop thinking about getting home and playing it.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have been on five servers and left them because they either got hacked or got very boring.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: I have read the rules and understand each one of them. They are all great rules and I agree with them one hundred percent. They are important rules and I hope they will be enforced every day.

-Name the 4 races on this server: The four races, not including the subraces, Undead, or Desended, are the Human race, the Dwarven race, the Orc race, and the Elven race.

-How did you hear about us?: I saw the Youtube trailer by Recreations. It was very good and made the server look great. I also saw that "let's play" by Candle360.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: CrazyBlueBannana

In-Character:

-Character Name: James_Blue

-What is your Race?: My race is mostly Human But a few of my ansestors were Elves. I would be counted as a human, not an elf.

-Biography: His name came from his great, great, grandfather, who died years ago. His name was James_ Mandolf and he married an Elven farmer, thus, giving James his Elven Roots. James was born in the Cloud Temple and moved to a small cabin, with his family, just outside Oren. He was raised with another being, a human, that was called Henry_Blue. James was told that he was his brother. James and Henry grew up as that best of brother-friends. One day, Their cabin was visited by two hooded men that had an erie look to them. They took Henry and used some kind of magic to teleport away. Henry was never seen again and no investigation took place. James had to live the rest of his childhood without a friend, which made him depressed for years. James grew up hearing stories of the lore and the great creation of Aegis. He was told of the creation of Human With the water and lava of the Cloud Temple. He also heard stories, his grandfather told him, about the four nations and the races of Aegis. His father, Jacob-Blue, was a great blacksmith in Oren and his mother, Mary_Blue, was a housewife that tended her rose garden every day. When James was 15, his father died in a small scrimish with a group of drunk men that were fighting and attacked his father. This made James very sad and he has mourned his father's death sence. The day before he died (I just happened to be the day before he died that he had this talk.....), his father had a talk with James and told him he was destined for greatness and gave him his blacksmith aparon. To this day, James is still dreaming of being a great blacksmith, like his father.

-Character Age: 29

-Character Appearance: He is a 6 foot 5 inch human that wears his fathers blacksmith aparon and has a small point to his ears. His short dark-brown hair sits on his head like his father's.

-Character Personality: James_Blue is a kind man. He may seem shady at first but with trust, he is a great friend and will protect his friends and his kingdom when ever needed.

-Your ambitions: James' ambitions are to create a life in Aegis and become a well known blacksmith.

-Can your character read or write?: James can read and write very well.

-Can your character mine?: Having a job as a blacksmith, James must mine so he can get the materials so he can make the tools and armor he needs to sell.

-Are you a capable builder?: James does not have much expirence in building but is a strong, bold, young man that could help build if needed.

-Can you wield a sword?: When it comes to battles, James is always ready with a sword and some weapons and armor for his comrades.

-Enjoy Farming?: James does not enjoy farming and does not want to farm.

-Does your character have any special skills?: James is a great fighter and can hold his own in fights. He is persistant and never gives up.

-A screenshot of your skin: The screenshots are below. There is front and back view.

-Other Information: Even if I am denied I will still try again and again so that I can be in the great world of Aegis. I worked really hard over a period of about an hour and 15 minutes on this. I hope you like it and accept it. Thanks. This is the edited application from my posting before. I took all the advice and did all to edit this that I was told in my last application.

[Mercius 15]

Denied.

Please wait until two days have passed since your last denial.

For the record though it looks well written. I'd like to see you do a few things:

-Add your past experience of roleplay.

-Check your entire application for grammatical errors and spelling mistakes.

-Expand your bio and be more detailed about events and your characters life. For instance your brother mysteriously vanished, how does your character feel about that?