noobslayer654s application

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Minecraft Account Name:noobslayer654

-How old are you?:12

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Untied States EST

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes but I will slip up with spelling and or wrong spaces at times.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:My name is Arik. I am a very friendly person. I can easily make friends.i also love to play minecraft.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:at least 5 hours per day

-How long have you played minecraft?:Since January

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: Rp is one of my favorite generes, I love to stay in charcater. I go very into depth with my rp. I absoulutley love it.I hope to have many entertaining adventures in the land of Aegis.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:Very entertaing and fun.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I hav eonly played on one or two servers for a long period of time and thay got shut down.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:Yes!

-Name the 4 races on this server.Orc,Human,Elf,Dwarf.

-How did you hear about us?:My friends CheeryLi, Boomack21 and Acerbuddy and many videos!

-Did you vote?:yes!

-What was your favourite Law?:No greifing

-What was your least favourite Law?: they seem pretty fair.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?noobslayer654

In-Character:

-Character Name:Andre

-What is your Race?:Dwarf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:

-Biography: My name is Andre.I was born a Dwarf. I fight for my towns and i am a very noble person. Never lost a battle yet. I hope to continue this streak for so as long as I will be put to rest.My village was destroyed as a young child. I was forced to live off the land with nothing.So I set off and found Aegis. It was a wonderful place. I officaly decided it was my new home.So i went to the dwarf king. I was accepted into the main dwarf city. Now i am a member of the dwarf army defending the towns across the land. I soon hope one day i will be the captain. But that day has yet to come. I can only make that my true destiny. I am a dwarf warrior.As a small child my father wanted this to happen. He was caring. But unfortunaetly he was taken prisoner by the attackers. I hope to reunite with him in this land. My mother was a caretacker. We had a small farm as well and lived in the outskirts of town. After everyone was killed I had to survive on my own.As i wondered, suddenly, blackness fell upon my vision. I woke up about a month later. I found my self in the Temple of Aegis. I therefore set out on my new journey.My new life. I am a Dwarf.

-Character Age:14

-Character Appearance:Happy Dwarf

-Character Personality:friendly but if mad, Deadly

-Your ambitions:To be come a Guard and defend my honorable city of kal'Urguan!

-Can your character read or write?:Yes

-Can your character mine?:No as he's only 14

-Are you a capable builder?:At times but mostly only small log cabins.

-Can you wield a sword?:No

-Enjoy Farming?:Yes as he tended in the farm

-Does your character have any special skills?:He can weild a sword very tightly.

-A screenshot of your skin: http://http://www.pl...urn-coalsledge/

-Other Information:None

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Your Application Has Been:

DENIED

Failed to define roleplaying

Application lacks effort

Link to skin doesnt work

Common reasons for denial:

Role Play:

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• Missing Biography
  
• Short Biography
  
• Insufficient Information in OOC
  
• Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play
  
• Insufficient Knowledge upon World
  
• Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore
  
• Powergaming and/or Metagaming
  

Form:

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• Bad Spelling/Grammar
  
• Missing Areas
  
• Breaking Rules
  

Skin:

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• Missing Skin
  
• Skin Doesn't Fit Character
  
• Incorrect Character Description
  
• Incorrect Skin Format
  

Feel free to send me a private message if you have any questions or concerns!

[noobslayer654 1]

bio is NOT short at all

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The bio is a moderate size, but pretty much EVERYTHING else is too short.