[Denied]dbhar's App number 2 Improved

[dbhar 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:[dbhar]

-How old are you?:[16]

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: [united States]

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:[Yes]

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:[im an A student, i have excelent manners, I do what im told, and i help anyone who asks.]

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:[30 to 40]

-How long have you played minecraft?:[1 year]

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:[Role playing is putting yourself into another world creating yourself as how you see it. I play WoW and a little Dungeons and Dragons]

-What do you expect this server will be like?:[i expect this server to be an amazing experince and a great oppertunity to let my inner RP out]

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:[Legandary Craft. It got to laggy ]

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:[Yes]

-Name the 4 races on this server.Human,Elves,Dwarfs,Orcs.

-How did you hear about us?:[Youtube.PertiDaGamerNerd]

-Did you vote?:[Yes]

-What was your favourite Law?:[No Greifing]

-What was your least favourite Law?:[None]

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?[dbhar]

In-Character:

-Character Name:[Grygore]

-What is your Race?:[Human]

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:[dbhar]

-Biography:[it was a stormy night when grygore returned home from getting fire wood like his father had asked him to. When he entered upon a group of the undead with his lifeless father upon the floor. His mother and brother there lifeless to. After that encounter he seeked help from the villigers but he soon realized their fate matched his famil's aswell. There was one suvivor, an old wise man by the name of deadgar. Deadgar took Grygore into his home and taught him the ways of stealth and the ways of the blade. After deadgar passed away grygore had nothing. He now seeks out his vengence on the undead.]

-Character Age:[23]

-Character Appearance:[Assassin]

-Character Personality:[Quite, very Content]

-Your ambitions:[Grygore's ambitions are to avenge his family and take down the undead and all that is evil]

-Can your character read or write?:[Yes]

-Can your character mine?:[No]

-Are you a capable builder?[Yes]

-Can you wield a sword?:[Yes]

-Enjoy Farming?:[No]

-Does your character have any special skills?:[Fighting with sword and stealth]

-A screenshot of your skin:[http://minecraftskinspro.com/default.asp?action=readreviews&link=27035 cant post screenshot]

-Other Information:[No]

[dbhar 0]

sorry about posting this twice i had to fix some major errors on my first one.

[Sagwort 833]

Declined

Here are some possible reasons why you were denied

Your bio was too short and needs to be in more depth

Your character does not fit the lore of Aegis

Your skin link does not work

You need to tell me more about rp

You need to answer all the questions

Note- These are only possible things that went wrong I’m sure by this list you can figure it out, please do not pm about why you were denied

Here are some links that might help you:

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[dbhar 0]

My bio is longer than most others, i have answered all questions,the skin link works, i have told all i know about rp, and the name is from midevil times! I dont understand why i got denied.

[dbhar 0]

My bio is longer than most others, i have answered all questions,the skin link works, i have told all i know about rp, and the name is from midevil times! I dont understand why i got denied.

Never mind i just read over my app again. It sucked. Im working on a much better one now.