Cricren2's Application

[Cricren2 0]

Posted Today, 02:13 AM

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Cricren2

-How old are you?: 15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: U.S. EST

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I speak English very well, and have a vast knowledge of grammar.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am kind, patient and loyal. I love to RP and enjoy getting into it. and I don't like griefers

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: A good amount, at least once a day for at least 2 hours (on weekdays) and a good amount on weekends (probably more than 5 hours throughout the day).

-How long have you played minecraft?: since August 2010

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I know much about roleplaying, including how important it is to stay in character. I have been roleplaying for about 3 years, mainly police roleplaying, minecraft roleplaying (this has varied from medieval to Warhammer 40k), and some Skyrim :)

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect a fun server, with good rules, a good community, and good standards.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on eurovaprison.fragnet.net (a warhammer 40k server) and Roleplay Revolutions server (don't remember i.p.). I quit both because they don't have enough to do and had low standards (with few people) so the only people there were very annoying.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes, I agree to the rules and understand the lore.

-Name the 4 races on this server: The Human Kingdom, The Dwarves, The Elven Council, And The Orc War Pack (don't remember if it was pack, horde or nation or something, sorry).

-How did you hear about us?: I was looking around the forums for a cool clan

-Did you vote?: Yes, and I hope it wasn't wasted (looking forward to playing on the server :D)

-What was your favorite Law?: The By laws I don't understand if your referring to the kingdom laws, or the server rules or whatever so i'll do both: My favorite kingdom law is that murder is punishable by death. My favorite server rule is no hacked or modified clients.

-What was your least favorite Law?: that we must use the designated server skin/ idk I guess.... Theft is punishable by death (I like all the laws)

-What is your the Lord Of Craft forum account name? Cricren2

In-Character:

-Character Name: Telka Sorvin

-What is your Race?: Human

-LordoFTHECraft.net/forum forum account: Cricren2

-Biography: I am Telka Sorvin, son of Ulfric Sorvin. My father was a skilled blacksmith whom could craft the finest blade in the town. However, he was also a man of values and didn't believe in sending other people to take the dangerous path to the city to he sell his swords for him. One day after selling a fine iron sword, he was shot with an arrow on his journey home. After his death I was unable to be a blacksmith, as I had never learned how. I took my fathers famous diamond sword, and left my small town in search of a better place. After a long journey, I came across A city of the human kingdom of Oren, and settled down. (sorry if that wasn't good, hard to remember all of the lore and a story thats good enough)

-Character Age: 23

-Character Appearance: tall-ish (around 5'9-6'1) black hair, brown eyes, average build.

-Character Personality: kind, a bit naive, respectful, humble, loyal.

-Your ambitions: Become a warrior/knight for the king/queen

-Can your character read or write?: he can read but never got the chance to learn to write.

-Can your character mine?: no

-Are you a capable builder? yes

-Can you wield a sword?: yes, very well

-Enjoy Farming?: to a certain degree, he doesn't mind it

-Does your character have any special skills?: A skilled swordsman, and a good guard.

-A screenshot of your skin: well, i wasn't sure of what skin was acceptable so is this good? http://s3.amazonaws....52479547125.png

-other Information: I hope this is acceptable :) look forward to hearing from you.

[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

DENIED

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge upon World [ ]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

Power/Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Status [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Needs Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [X]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

Your skin's link is broken. Otherwise, your application is great~!

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account!

<3

You come to Aegis to Develop a Character, not have one Developed already

Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before

[Draconoth 0]

Your Application has been...

DENIED

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge upon World [ ]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

Power/Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Status [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Needs Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [X]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

Your skin's link is broken. Otherwise, your application is great~!

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account!

<3

Excuse me SimonBane, May I ask you something?

Is there something wrong with my app? because I posted mine before Cricren2, and didn't got a reply, so maybe I did something wrong?