[Denied]Shamera's application

[Angela 7]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Bigalow40

-How old are you?: 15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Central Time Zone

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I have some troubles with spelling every now and then. Other than that, yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a freshman in High school. I love working with animals and being out doors. I also enjoy reading. My favorite book series would have to be Guardians of Ga'hool by Kathryn Lasky.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Probably around 10-15 hours

-How long have you played Minecraft?: 1 year

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?: It is taking up the roll of a character and playing out your adventure through that character.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect it to be full of adventure and journeys. the map is great and from what my brothers have told me the people are too!

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I play on 1 other server: minelife.tk. I am an admin on it, and I love the community. as far as I know, I won’t be leaving it any time soon.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes, I agree with them completely.

-Name the 4 races on this server: elf, human, dwarf and orc are the main races

-How did you hear about us?: My brothers started playing on lord of the craft and told me that it was a lot of fun!

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Shamera

In-Character:

-Character Name: Shamera

-What is your Race?: Elf

-Biography: at 2 years old, little shamera sat in her play room watching her parents plant new trees in the yard. Unbeknownst to her, an undead attack was about to take place. It all happened so fast, her parents didn’t have any time to react. It was over before it started and Shamera was now an orphan. She then went to live with her grandmother who taught her to read and write, and everything else she knows. All she had left of her parents was her mother’s necklace. Her grandmother owned a small shop in Oasis which young Shamera loved helping her run. She mostly did the small jobs, but if her grandmother ever had to go visit someone, or bring some milk to our neighbor, she would let shamera work the shop. Shamera also would help collect the items that her grandmother sold, and she soon learned quite a bit about business. Saddly, due to the small amount of travelers in Oasis, her grandmother was forced to shut down the shop. Shamera has now set out to the city of Larlin in the hopes to set up her own shop so that she can support her elderly grandmother.

-Character Age: 179

-Character Appearance: she wears an outfit she bought from a traveling sales-man, and she wears her mother’s ruby necklace around her neck.

-Character Personality: Shamera is funny and out-going. She is very trustworthy and a great friend.

-Your ambitions: To own a shop in Larlin.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes, very well

-Can your character mine?: not really. She likes to stick to above ground work.

-Are you a capable builder?: Nothing too large, but smaller buildings she can design and build quite decently.

-Can you wield a sword?: She tries to avoid conflict. She doesn’t like battles or war, however if the circumstances call for it, she can do some damage with a sword

-Enjoy Farming?: Yes, she used to spend hours in the garden with her grandmother when she was young


-Does your character have any special skills?: Nothing amazingly special. She is good salesman and knows how to make good business

-A screenshot of your skin: my avatar is the pic of my skin

-Other Information: None

[Slayer15855 3]

Denied.

You need an extensive and indepth character. That means you need an awesome biography (you need to develop your biography a bit more) and also an indepth analysis of your characters ambitions, personality etc... Also you need to explain your character traits in terms of your character, why can he mine? why can he fight or not etc... You character is the entire point of this game, you need to put a huge amount of effort and detail into it. It is basically a second person. Make it fun and interesting but not ridiculous, and always within the lore and restriction. Then once you finish reworking repost it after the specified time (48 hours or so), if you are looking for inspiration look at some other apps or the examples pinned.

[Angela 7]

ok, thanks for the feed back!

[WaldoOfWhere 0]

Its not really feedback its just a copy&paste message he puts. Your app was way better than mine and I got the same reply. I think he just doesnt like people.

[Angela 7]

lol, it's better than some I've seen

"denied" <---thats it

anyway, I'm rewriting it, and I like my new one WAY better :) I have an awesome bio now.

now I just have to wait 2 days to repost..... :unsure:

[Dirteh Mouse 1]

AWESOME at least someone posted on yours :S cause I'm still waiting :P

[Angela 7]

if it has been more that 3 days sense you posted it you can PM a application person and they will tell you what to do. they had me repost mine. the biggest problem is that your app has like 13 comments. (sry for commenting. at that point I didn't know they checked them from least comments to most :sad: )

[Dirteh Mouse 1]

if it has been more that 3 days sense you posted it you can PM a application person and they will tell you what to do. they had me repost mine. the biggest problem is that your app has like 13 comments. (sry for commenting. at that point I didn't know they checked them from least comments to most :sad: )

lol :P its ok i dont mind i love <3 talkin to people and its always nice to make new friends maybe sometime when we are both members we can meet eachother and hang out i will tell the dwarves to back off and to not attack you :P

[Angela 7]

lol, thats ok, my new person is trained in the art of the sword =) hey, we should probably cary on this conversation in PMs I feel like we're spamming the app forum.