My application

[Daman58 2]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Daman58

-How old are you?: 13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: eastern standard time

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a very responsible person. I have many friends that I like to socialize with and many of them play on the server.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: About 5-7 hours weekly

-How long have you played minecraft?: For a year.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: Ive been roleplaying for 3 years. Ive played games such as Guild Wars and Graal. I know its about staying in character and acting as they would. I know its illegal to metagame.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: An amazing adventure and experience, full of new people and scenarios. I cant wait to enjoy what it offers and contribute to it.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I used to play on Two Dollar's sever. It was a server for freebuilding and surrvival. I left it because it was getting boring when nobody was on

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes and i really liked both. The rules were fair and easy to understand and the lore was deep and complete.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Human, Dwarf, Elf, and Orc. The two advanced races are the Undead and the Ascended, which come from the Aenguls and Daemons.

-How did you hear about us?: My friend Dez1320 told me about it and strongly recommended it.

-Did you vote?: yes I voted

-What was your favourite Law?: I think that no griefing is the best because then people can't go around destroying everyting

-What was your least favourite Law?: I think that all of the laws are fair.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Daman58

In-Character:

-Character Name: Damean

-What is your Race?: Human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Daman58

-Biography: I am an abandoned child trying to survive. I started out as many would, with friends and family that took care of me. Then the village got attacked by a group of rouge ghasts. I lost my parents and my village was destroyed. I have survived for five years now hoping that i can settle and relax. I've been living as a nomad for all that time, thinking of what happened to my friends and family in the village. As i traveled, i saw many things. I learned many things, like how to craft and fight, defending myself throughout the long months. I made many friends throughout my travels. All of them helping me and supplying me with food, water and supplies. Never, have i weakened during these travels. I have become stronger, both mentally and physically. Now here I am, looking for a village that will accept me so i can become stronger and tell them of my travels.

-Character Age: 16

-Character Appearance: My character is wearing an orange cloth on him. He has blue eyes and face-paint

-Character Personality: My character is capable of a lot of things such as farming and fighting. I am vary modest about many things. I don't like to brag unless its to someone i don't like. I can be very funny at time.

-Your ambitions: My ambition is to join a village that i can fight for and build. I want to create a new type of thinking that will improve architecture and fighting.

-Can your character read or write?: No

-Can your character mine?: Yes

-Are you a capable builder? yes

-Can you wield a sword?: yes

-Enjoy Farming?: yes

-Does your character have any special skills?: I am good strategically.

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information:

[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

DENIED

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge upon World [ ]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [X]

Powergaming [ ]

Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Status [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Needs Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [X]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

One. Your skin doesn't exist. Post a link to a screenshot. Load it onto imageshack and paste it into the application in two days.

Then, your biography doesn't include lore, and has incorrect lore. Ghasts don't exist in Aegis, although they do in the Verge.

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account!

<3

You come to Aegis to Develop a Character, not have one Developed already

Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before.

Don't post another application in a period of two (2) days. It ruins our organisation methods.