jamo1997's application

[jamo18716 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: jamo1997

-How old are you?: 14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: singapore

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I am still in school so I may make a few mistakes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I got to school every weekday and whenever I turn on a computer it is to play Minecraft or do homework I stated playing Minecraft because my friend suggest it to me

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: may be about 10-20 hours a week sometimes less

-How long have you played Minecraft?: about 1 year

-What do you know about roleplaying?: it is playing a character of which you create in your head and bring him to life like in acting but the person you make up also has some relation to you

-What do you expect this server will be like?: a new experience of Minecraft I have been on many role playing servers none as good as this one though

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: plenty manly because they closed down or some greifers

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yeah I have read the rules and I think there fair

-Name the 4 races on this server: Elves, Orcs, Humans, Dwarves not including Undead or Ascendents

-How did you hear about us?: I saw the trailer on youtube which made the sever look epic

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: jamo18716 shown name while jamo1997 is actual

In-Character:

-Character Name: Taun Dother

-What is your Race?: Elves

-Biography: a young Elf brought up with a family of highly ranked humans learnt to speak, walk and talk like them but he never really believed in their religion he just thought it was a bunch of mumbo jumbo and ignored it he then later moved to the Elves homeland to learn his native ways and to find his parents and a meaning of the life he has been forced to live. he wishes to join the army though and become a great genreal and lead the armies to victory against the evil that is arising

-Character Age: 20 a young one

-Character Appearance: a high elf because the family he was brought up in (the human one) believed in only the best and gave him high elf cloths

-Character Personality: brave, friendly and loyal to anyone he trust but to others he hates he is tyrant like, lethal and blood thirsty

-Your ambitions: he wants to find his family and become rich beyond his wildest dreams

-Can your character read or write?: very well in both

-Can your character mine?: yes he has been taught to do anything to survive

-Are you a capable builder?: no he can build basic structures but is studying to become a great architect as a backup plan

-Can you wield a sword?: very well indeed he has learnt many ways of fighting but always shows some compassion to those who he is fighting

-Enjoy Farming?: no he hates the thought of standing and waiting a lot but has been taught to be patient well sort of anyway but he will do it if it means survival

-Does your character have any special skills?: fluent in all 4 major race languages and can use a sword with precision cuts and great speed

-A screenshot of your skin: http://www.minecraft...Elf_by_Achilles

-Other Information: please accept me even not I like the look of you server and wish some day I could join it

(my votes don't work because the thing thinks a i use a proxy and made my character bio longer)

[James Undercroft 129]

Your application has been: (Denied)

I'm sorry to say it, but your application just didn't make it :(

Here is why:

Your biography is too short, and includes some mis-information about the lore of the world. Your character is also a very very young age for an elf and would be considered a child by elven standards.

Please expand on your biography; what did your character do while growing up? Did it know it's parents, who did it live with? What did it do when it was young? Any jobs? Also please at least try to incorperate some lore and/or place names and people. The link can be found here: http://lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php/Main_Page

Elves can lift up to thousands of years (around 1000 or more) but that also means that they grow up extremely slowly. Chevailer said:

Elves: Below age 200 is considered not fully mature; age 1000 is

considered relatively old. Note: A 20-year old elf is comparable to a toddler.

Good luck :)

Do not post another application within 48 hours or that application will be skipped.

Here is some further reading material that can help you get accepted:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/13144-petyrs-guide-to-accepted-server-applications/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/9868-an-extensive-guide-to-the-world-of-aegis/