My application.

[Jaez 1]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:Jaewonz

-How old are you?: 13, I will be 14 in July

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: PST, United states of America.

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am currently a student in middle school, slowly going through school and surviving classes. I am doing well in school and i've got several A's and B's, and i finish all of my homework during school. So i have a lot of free time when it comes to going on the computer.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Probably 5 Hours. But i can go on more if i am not busy with anything else.

-How long have you played minecraft?: I've played since alpha, and i have a alpha account to prove it.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I've been roleplaying in Warcraft 3 and Starcraft brood wars. Roleplaying is where you take a role of a character, and act as him/her instead of your own being, roleplaying is when you can be shape your character into something you act into.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: A great home for my friend and I to play on, i would love to roleplay on this server, as roleplaying in minecraft will probably be a rare treat for me.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: The Plague, the management wasn't good and the gameplay just got too easy for me. I play on Utopiancraft which i run with a friend, we decided to play on Lord of the Craft as a place we can get away for admin life.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes i agree to the rules, and the lore. To prove i have read it i will tell you of some of the rules. 1. No 1337 talk, which i agree is obnoxious. 2.You must play in character, no questions there. 3.No use of hacked or modified clients.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Human, Dwarf, Elf, and Orc.

-How did you hear about us?: Browsing through MC forums for Roleplay servers.

-Did you vote?: No but i plan to if i manage to actually get in this splendid server.

-What was your favourite Law?: No 1337 talk as i agree that could be obnoxious

-What was your least favourite Law?: None, i agree with all of them, and all of them are fair.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Jaez

In-Character:

-Character Name: Ansrmah. (Rune mage in elven) http://www.angelfire.com/rpg2/vortexshadow/names.html

-What is your Race?: Elf.

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Jaez.

-Biography: Ansrmah was adored when he was young, his parents loved him and so did his siblings, slowly they perished in front of Ansrmah's eyes. He watched as they were slaughtered by an orc, he quickly sprinted out of his home and watched as it burned down, he lived outside of the kingdom which explains why his home and his family members were killed. Which meant there weren't any guards or walls to protect his village, so Ansrmah and his family had no protection nor any weapon to face the orc murderer. After the incident Ansrmah hid in the woods for a while isolating himself so he couldn't listen to the moans of his family, bleeding onto the ground where the blood painted the ground like a canvas..

After a few weeks of staying alive in the woods feeding himself berries and the minor sustenance he manages to find from corpses from which we're picked dry. One day he was strolling across the forest, he found a tome that had inscriptions in it, he read the title and it he figured it was a magician's tome, he looked up and sees the body dangling on a rope, it seems to have been a trap a orc set up. The anger burned inside of him, he swore upon vengeance that he would try to kill the orc that has slaughtered countless amount of his people and his family. He then continued to train his talent with this new found knowledge which he luckily came across, he tried to conjure water several times and was successful. After that he knew that he could become truly powerful, so he left the forest and onto the kingdom.

As he came upon the kingdom of the elves, he was a young fledgling, he couldn't get a profession easily to pay for his survival, he would live out in the streets and play a flute that he got when he was a baby, a gift from his grandfather. He could be seen fishing or managing a farm somewhere. While he was resting upon the leaves up in a tree where he rests, he thought of an idea to get more powerful with his talents, he could easily cast a few spells of this tome and so he decides to extend his knowledge in the arcane. And so he scoured the land looking for a expert magician to become a adept and learn the destructive capabilities of the spells he will use against the orcs.

-Character Age: 432

-Character Appearance: A young man who has a robe that hides his face, he has gotten this ragged robe from his grandparents as a child. A tiny green jewel is socketed into the back of his robe which he adores.

-Character Personality: A lonesome person, he was adored when he was young but quickly despised for his actions, he cares for himself and believes that the strong survive but the weak diminish.

-Your ambitions: Ansrmah wishes to become a magician but he can only become one by becoming a adept of one.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes, he taught himself to read and write with his mother.

-Can your character mine?: Yes but it is hard for him as he lacks in some strength, so he could hardly swing his mining pick, but he still has the patience to learn and get stronger.

-Are you a capable builder? Yes, his father was a carpenter for the kingdom and so his father taught him many things and tricks for his profession.

-Can you wield a sword?: He can hardly wield a sword, his strengths are his intellect, if he needs to wield a sword to defend himself he tries his best but swords seem too hard to swing or wield for him.

-Enjoy Farming?: Indeed! It is one of his many hobbies.

-Does your character have any special skills?:] He has some arcane potential which explains his name.

-A screenshot of your skin: http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/14/20111124160059.png/

-Other Information:Nope.

Thanks for reading

[Pliz 66]

DENIED

Alright, I see potential, but you have a large amount of grammar mistakes EX: some of your answers were bold, which made it hard to read. Your bio needs to be a bit more descriptive, and I don't see how your ambition comes in. You never mentioned wanting to become a magician in your biography.

Please wait a minimum of 48 hours to re-post an improved application.

[Jaez 1]

DENIED

Alright, I see potential, but you have a large amount of grammar mistakes EX: some of your answers were bold, which made it hard to read. Your bio needs to be a bit more descriptive, and I don't see how your ambition comes in. You never mentioned wanting to become a magician in your biography.

Please wait a minimum of 48 hours to re-post an improved application.

Can you help me out? A large portion of my freaking app decided to cluster, any idea why its doing that?

Nevermind i fixxed it somehow o-o.