ggteixeira's Application

[ggteixeira 0]

b]Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:ggteixeira

-Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:no

-How old are you?:14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Canada Toronto

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes i have pretty good grip on the english language

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I am a 14 year old teenager who loves to play videogames when i get the chance to. The game i love to play the most is the game minecraft created by Notch. I also enjoy roleplaying games like skyrim.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:I would usually be able to play 2-3 hours a day.

-How long have you played Minecraft?:I have played minecraft for about 2 years.

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?:I know alot about roleplaying. The main idea of roleplaying is to act someone you are not. I also know not to metagame or powergame because that leads to a not fun roleplaying experience. I also know you cannot use internet speak for example waz up my dawgs :). When you roleplay you must immerse yourself into your surrounding's and you must know of the lore.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:I expect this server to be like skyrim possibly even better.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I have played on alot of servers but none of them i have liked

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes i have read, understood, and agreed to the rules.

-Name the 4 races on this server:Humans,Elves,Orcs, and Dwarves

-How did you hear about us?:My friend ikeyman232 told me about lord of the craft and he said it is a great server with a great roleplaying experience.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:ggteixeira

In-Character:

-Character Name: Arthur Vasile

-What is your Race?: Human

-Biography: I was born in a small village in the nation of Oren. My father died when i was only 6 months old. My village was attacked by a group of multiracial bandits when i was only 11 years old. I was able to get away with some fellow villagers and my older brother named Robert Vasile. Everyone else in my village including my mother died. Eventually me and my brother were taken in by a Human blacksmith in the grand city of al'Khazar.The blacksmith taught me and my brother how to wield a sword and how to forge armour. After a while me and my brother went our seperate ways. I vowed to protect anyone in danger and put my life on the line to protect others.

-Character Age: 29

-Character Appearance: Tall man,with a small brown beard,green eyes, brown short hair, and most of the time in a suit of armour.

-Character Personality: Loyal, Kind, Trustworthy, and Friendly

-Your ambitions:My ambitions is to protect the people of Aegis and Destroy the undead

-Can your character read or write?: No my character cannot read or write because his stepfather never taught him how to.

-Can your character mine?: No he was never taught to mine.

-Are you a capable builder?: No my character cannot build he was never taught to or needed to.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes my stepfather taught me well.

-Enjoy Farming?: No farming is not something I would enjoy

-Does your character have any special skills?:Yes my character can wield a sword well.

-A screenshot of your skin: I am very sorry but i do not have a current scrreenshot of my skin but i ensure you that i will try to add one or make sure that it is correct for the server and roleplaying experience.

-Other Information:I really hope i get accepted this time.

[Rhisereld 317]

1. Please complete all of the questions in the template, including a screenshot of your skin and your ambitions.

2. You need a detailed explanation on roleplay, including IC, OOC, meta and powergaming and how to act out a character. Here are some guides on roleplaying: 1, 2, 3

3. Develop your biography more and keep it realistic. Why did the new king order Arthur, a loyal and valuable subject, to be executed? How did Arthur find Aegis, if nobody has ever found the land he comes from? (There are only two lands, Aegis and the newly discovered Verge which has no king)

4. Your character is overpowered. In my knowledge, nobody in modern Aegis has seen a dragon, let alone killed one alone. Keep in mind that it is better to give your character potential in certain skills and the determination to train than simply make your character awesome before they have even entered Aegis. There is no room for character development.

5. Tidy up the format of your application and make it easier to read. Proofread your answers and fix up your spelling and punctuation, and avoid one word answers.

Please fix this and repost your application in 48 hours. Remember, denial does not mean that you won't ever get onto the server. It just means that your application needs more work!