CinnomonOats First Application

[Cinnomon 3]

Out-Of-Character: It means to be who you really are in your real life.

Minecraft Account Name: CinnomonOats

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:No

How old are you?:15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:USA

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I'm a teen currently living in St. Louis and I'm looking for a great server to play on. I've heard meany good things about this server. I've been playing Minecraft since 1.6 and have enjoyed every minute of it.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:Every day 3:30pm to 9:30pm

What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?: Role play is when you act like someone you aren't for fun. I've never been on a role play server so I am new to this.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are:

A word used in Role-Playing game that tells real life details or something that goes beyond the limits or environment set by the game.

What do you expect this server will be like?:By watching user uploaded videos I predict this server will be amazing!

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I played on TDMC but it has recently been shut down do to one of the owners quitting.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes

How did you hear about us?:I Googled MMORPG server. That lead to some YouTube videos and now this.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?: Yes I was number 2,545

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:Cinnomon

In-Character: In character means your playing as a character made up of in your imagination or your acting as someone you aren't in REAL life.

Character Name: Cinnomon

What is your Race?: Dwarf

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):When Cinnomon was born his mother died. A week later his father died in a mining accident. He spent his childhood as a runaway and is looking for a permanent home. Currently he is 17 years of age.

Your characters ambitions: Cinnomon's ambitions are to rise and succeed.

Other Information: Thank you for your time! :)

[Rhisereld 317]

1. You need a more detailed explanation on roleplay, including IC, OOC, and how to act out a character. You need to realise that you are creating, playing and developing a character. You are not merely acting like something you're not, you're crafting a whole new person whose eyes you see the server through. This person has ambitions, fears, a personality, and may change during the time you play them. Here are some guides on roleplaying: 1, 2, 3

2. Your definition of metagaming and powergaming is wrong, or at least lacking explanation. You need to look it up somewhere.

3. Your biography is too short and underdeveloped. You need to really explore your character, explore how they gained the skills they have and explore why they chose their ambitions. A series of tragic events is not a biography and does not lead to character depth. This is your chance to make your character shine and really express their values, attitudes and beliefs. Don't throw that away with three sentences.

4. You need a screenshot of your skin:

- Go to your inventory.

- Hit F2

- Go to your screenshot folder, usually in C:\Users\[your user]\AppData\Roaming\.minecraft\screenshots

- Upload to an image hosting website

- Post as link