Cinnomon's fourth application

[Cinnomon 3]

Out-Of-Character: It means to be who you really are in your real life.

Minecraft Account Name: CinnomonOats

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:No

How old are you?:15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:USA

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I'm a teen currently living in St. Louis and I'm looking for a great server to play on. I've heard meany good things about this server. I've been playing Minecraft since 1.6 and have enjoyed every minute of it.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:Every day 3:30pm to 9:30pm

What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?: A game genre, most often associated with titles like 'Final Fantasy' or 'Diablo'. This also includes heavy titles such as 'Baldur's Gate' Series and Zelda. Most of these put you in the eyes and boots of some other character, generally prefabricated. Most of these have a main quest to complete, but also have a certain amount of open endedness. Despite popular belief, Diablo and it's off spring Diablo 2 are barely Roleplaying games. The 'Truest' Roleplaying games allow you to play a role you make on your own, generally by a Character Generation, as seen in AD&D Games (generally) and in other games like Morrowind. Basically, any game that puts you in the shoes of another character, gives you a world to explore, and causes the players to make 'life' changing decisions. When you are roleplaying you are IC witch means you are acting of a person who you aren't. OOC means that your out of the character you are playing these are 2 very important terms.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are:People who Powergame usually RolePlay's things which may be impossible to do, leaving the other player no chance to fight back. Powergaming people usually focus most on his own character.Here's just a little example of someone Powergaming, let's say the Powergamers name will be... John_Wollie.

EXAMPLE:

John_Wollie : Hey, come in my car, let's go to my crib! You'll get some cash.

Jack_Shang : Uhm, okay... I'll come with you in one condition...

John_Wollie : No, get in!

John_Wollie grabs Jack and throws him into car.

John_Wollie ties him.

What do you expect this server will be like?:By watching user uploaded videos I predict this server will be amazing!

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I played on TDMC but it has recently been shut down do to one of the owners quitting.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes

How did you hear about us?:I Googled MMORPG minecraft server. That lead to some YouTube videos and now this.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?: Yes I was number 2,545

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:Cinnomon

In-Character: In character means your playing as a character made up of in your imagination or your acting as someone you aren't in REAL life.

Character Name: Cinnomon

What is your Race?: Human

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):When Cinn was born in south London his mother died. A week later his father died in a mining accident. He spent the majority of his childhood as a runaway. One day as he was walking down the street an old man dropped his bag. Cinn went to help him. After he helped him the man said "Thank you". From that moment on the old man; Mr.Lionel taught Cinn about life, he taught Cinn how to succeed and strive. Four years later Mr.Lionel died of a seizure. Cinn was devastated but didn't give up. He worked to become the best of the best. He built his own colony and raised to the top. Then he turned greedy and tried to take over the world. He was defeated and now he is 35 and lives his life as a villan.

Your characters ambitions: Cinn's ambitions are to rise and succeed.

Picture of my skin: http://img812.imageshack.us/img812/8523/20111130180707.png

Other Information: Thank you for your time!

[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

DENIED

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [X]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge upon World [ ]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

Powergaming [ ]

Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Status [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Needs Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

Hello~! I loved how you correctly defined roleplay, but sadly, you application is much too short. I'd add a few more points as to where he was born, and some occurrences in his life. I'd very much like you to read the lore of the server to get an in-depth perspective to the world of Aegis.

--Simon

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account!

<3

You come to Aegis to Develop a Character, not have one Developed already

Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before.

Don't post another application in a period of two (2) days. It ruins our organisation methods.

[Cinnomon 3]

I modified it if you would be so kind to give it a 2nd look. :)