matty998 second application

[matty998 0]

minecraft account name?

matty998

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?

no i did not.

How old are you?:15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence?

time-zone utc+2:00.

country:finland

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?

i have pretty good grip on english and grammar is good too.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself?

i play much minecraft and like to work, fight and built with peoples.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?

about 20-40 hours.

What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?

in roleplaying you need to make your own character and make him story.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are?

metagaming is about making decisions and discussing topics based on information that your character would realistically have no way of knowing.

powergaming is is successful without giving the other player character the freedom to act on his own prerogative.

What do you expect this server will be like?

i think it will be fun and i expect to learn much from roleplaying.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?

murocraft: left because it was boring,nothing exciting never happened.

topica:because it was shut down.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?

i have readet understoodet and agreed the rules.

How did you hear about us?

i was looking minecraft servers and found this.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus?

i havent voted.

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?

matty998

Character Name: Dwalin

What is your Race?

Dwarf

Biography:Dwalin is 20 years old dwarf who used to live in the distant land of ironforge,but it was invadet by hordes of orcs.Dwalin used to be a miner but now he has began to train his battle skills.He is dwarf who is not afraid and wont back away from the fight.Dwalin is skilled miner and good fighting with axes, he has no skills on farming.

He loves mining and enjoys good food.

Your characters ambitions?

Dwalin seeks to avenge the dead of his family and friends,who were killed on ironforge.

also he want to find new home where he can mine and train battle skills.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits.What does your character do?

He will go help the elf and then continue his journey.

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner.What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?

hello. ill have iron picaxe and bread please. thank you

screen shot from skin:

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Your application has been:

I'm sorry to say it, but it isnt' the end of the world yet! You have 2 full days to revise and review your application to make it the best, most epicly awesome application out there! I will give you all the tools you need, just make sure you use them. Here we go:

At first glance it seems to me that you just haven't put the effort into this application. You just wrote really breif answers and skimmed through the entire application. Please expand on EVERYTHING in the in character section. Write full sentences and paragraphs where you can.

You are not allowed to make up lore, you must use pre-made lore with your application. Also such things as "Ironforge" from world of warcraft are not acceptable to put into your application. Please read the lore and incorperate it into your biography. You can find all about the lore of Aegis here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Main_Page The age of your character is incorrect lore-wise. Please fix this up and take notice of this quote:

Dwarves: Below age 150 is considered young; age 700 is considered relatively old.