Chris Arrowknee's Application Number 4

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Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name: My Minecraft Account Name is 123killerfreak

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:No

How old are you?: I'm 13 Years old

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: +1, Germany

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I hope so :) I think i have but its only what i think.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm an friendly and happy Teen. I loves to play Minecraft since i heard about it. I'm good a playing Keyboard(Piano) and I am sporty active.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 7-13 Hours

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.: Live Action Role Playing (LARP) or live role-playing game called an RPG, where players represent their character and physical self. It is therefore a mixture of the pen & paper role-playing and improvisational theater. The game usually takes place without an audience. The participants can improvise in a role that describes our own figures and their properties and possibilities, free.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are. Meta an Powergaming okay.

Metagaming is if you hear something in ts or in OOC or in Teamspeak like ***** is under attack or ***** is getting jailed and you are going to help them.

Powergaming is if you are doing something your character cant do like "Chris Arrowknee killed the king of *****"

What do you expect this server will be like?: I hope its like everyone says that this would be the best RPG server on the whole world.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: hmm i never played really on an other RPG server i just joined and thought "bullshit", but i got an own server were im playing with my friends its very funny.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes i did.

How did you hear about us?: First i searched an RPG map for my server, but then i thought "why didn't i go on an RPG server", then i searched an RPG server and found a Lets Play about this server, then i found your YouTube channel and enjoyed the videos and now i want to play with you

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you? Yes i did, i think it was 3617.

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: 123killerfreak

In-Character:

Character Name: Chris Arrowknee

What is your Race?: I gonna play an Undead Elf but first read my Biography.

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): When Chris was an young Elf he lived in Kal'Bryst, in the History of Kal'Bryst told it got attacked by the undead, the farm of his dad inclusive the house where his family lived got attacked too, they hided us in a little cave near the town, but the Undead found them they killed Chris and his Family. After a few days an Undead miner found Chris, he runs to an Undead necromancer, he thought Chris was an Undead, they summoned him. First Chris killed the miner than he killed the necromancer and runs away. After this he found a small town they accepted Chris as an elf, but after some time he wanted to take a bath in the sea, then he saw himself in the sea, he got black hide and on his body some bones stack out,

The Town Wizard said he should go to the Cloud Temple an now hes here, now hes an 18 Years old Archer with the strange of an Undead.

Your characters ambitions: Hates undead but friendly to other races, Eagle-eye and is a good shooter with bow, got an abnormal strange. My goal i Aegis is to get an high ranked Archer and Warrior and i want to get my revenge.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do? I gonna run into the fight and talk to the bandits "Who are you and why are you attacking him!?" The bandits puts away there weapons because they saw i got an diamond sword. "We are just playing with our little friend here" they said "okay I am not gonna kill you jet, but if i see you again murdering guys i don't have an other choice to kill you" I said 'the bandits pull out there swords and runs against me' "die you *******!" I pushed the Elf away an defended myself.

After the battle i asked the Elf if he got any medical potions to help me up.

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer? "Hallo Mister, i need an new bow and some arrows" I said "The Question is how much would you pay for it" the Owner said "For the bow i gonna pay 50 Minas and for the arrows 2 Minas per arrow" I answered "No, this price is to cheap i not gonna sell you that!" The Owner answered angry "Hmm okay than i go to an other shop, by the way could you say me where the next inn is? I'm on the way to Oren" I asked "No i don't want to help you."

A screenshot of your skin:  

Other Information: I know this is my Forth App. If i get Accepted i say "Thank you" to Lucas who said me what is wrong with my other Apps :)

[Alys 2]

Denied

It's great to see the improvement between your first and fourth application, the difference certainly shows dedication and effort. However, there were some problems here and there. Adjustments you can make to have the best chance of being accepted next time:

- More research on roleplaying is needed. Although you are getting the right idea, the type of roleplay we mean is different from LARP. Showing a great understanding of roleplay could be the difference between acceptance and denial of your application

- Define metagaming in general. It's not quite enough to provide an example, tell us what it is.

- Expand on powergaming. Once again, you're getting the right idea, but more is needed.

- I would suggest a complete redoing of your biography. The "Undead killed everyone but me" story is extremely cliche. Also, you may not start out as an Undead, no matter what the backstory is. You can have as much fun playing an average character, I promise.

- Try to use lore as much as you can. Instead of making up locations and events, poke around the Wiki and find things that have really existed/happened in Aegis

- Tone down on the powergaming. This is both evident in your biography and scenario questions. Keep closely with realism.

-Fix up grammar as best you can.

Please wait 48 hours before reapplying. Take this time to read over your application and make necessary edits. Feel free to PM me any questions you might have. Happy App-ing!

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Application Submissions FAQ|Proper Etiquette * Advice From the Application Team * Implemented Application Section

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