Arthas 2Nd Application

[arthas 0]

Minecraft Account Name: arthas

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?: No

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: United States of America

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes I do.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: i love roleplay its very fun for me,i am very likely to help a person in need very hard for me not to my conscios would kill me

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 50-55 hours a week

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.: Roleplaying is when you are playing a specific role of a certain person or thing, basically you put yourself in their position.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are. Metagaming is when you talk like your talking to a person in rl not roleplaying, Power gaming is when you have a character that can do everything extremely well and has no flaws what so ever.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I'm expecting a fun and enjoyable RP enviroment

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: i was on a couple other servers one the host killed so i couldn't get on. The other broke down to were every man wanted to kill each other.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes, yes, and yes.

How did you hear about us?: YouTube thought it would be a great server to join.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft? Yes.

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: arthas

In-Character:

Character Name: arthas menthril

What is your Race?: human

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Age: 48

Appearance: hes a handsome man,but is hard for him to always stay heathy since the curse,he looks like a villian but really is a very loving and kind man

Personality: hes an out going person if he sets hes mind to it he will not stop till either hes dead or victories.

Backstory: he was promised a very happy life.to bad the wasn't true.he was a very kind young man.he was born of a man who's was very holy. he was starting a great army called the order of the paladin.he had some willing men who were friends.hes fathers name was terenas menthril. well he wanted he son to carry on the title of holy guardian.

well one day during training orcs attacked there small village the only survivors were arthas and a man named morgraine ashbringer which was captured and turned into what hes father called a oathbreaker.arthas ran to a near by fort were he was sent to a Oren orphanage when he turned eighteen and left he went to teach himself in the way of the paladin by the time he was done which took plenty of time cause he barely remember anything.he was about 24 then he left to do what he saw holy but was something that could brand him a oathbreaker.

he found the village of the orcs that slaughtered he's village, and did the same. men,women,children,even babies that were probably only a couple months old.when he learned that the scourge or undead was tied with the attack so he sent out on another quest to kill again he didn't enjoy it but i wanted revenge which weren't in the ways of the paladin but he thought it was justified.

when he finally found the undead that got the orcs to do so. the scourge was a officer. he killed him swiftly and saw the armor that the officer was about to put on. he didn't know why but he couldn't control him self for some reason he put the armor on and then he went unconscious he saw a women scourge she was chanting something to him he didn't understand what she was chanting to him about,but when he woke up he was cold as ice,and had blue glowing eyes that's when.

then he went looking for the oathbreaker morgraine.He found him and the oathbreaker thought he was the officer which was hes mentor.when he got close enough he said"good bye old friend" then he killed him.he gave him a proper burial cried and left.

after that he went to a priest he confessed everything the village slaughter,the scourges armor, the vision,and him killing hes best friend.the priest baptised him and tried to get the armor off the some potion but alas nothing worked the priest told him it was bound to his soul.

and said that he would die in a couple years,but arthas was a paladin and he fought it and is surviving way longer then the priest said he would

now he wants to find men that will give there life for what hes father built and fought to protect. to bring the kingdom that his father was going to name lordaeron.to find a successor for him.and try to find a cure before he dies.

Your characters ambitions:to bring the order of the paladin and rise the kingdom named lordaeron.

A screenshot of your skin: http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/lich-king-from-wow-/

Other Information:hes a skilled blacksmith and a very religious man. its hard for him to tolerate orcs since they are the ones who killed my parents,friends,and the rest of my village

[Alurid 99]

Sorry, but your application does not reach the expectations of Lord of the Craft. Please improve these errors in your next application:

- 50-55 hours? That seems unrealistic. But if you can play that long, then so be it!

- Fix your definition of metagaming and powergaming. Your powergaming definition was close however.

- YouTube told you it was a great server to join?

- The skin you provided won't fit in with the server. It looks cyborg-ish. It doesn't match the appearance you wrote for your character in your biography.

- I do not understand you backstory. I can't read it because you didn't put spaces after periods. I constantly got lost reading it.

- What was your vote number?

- In your ambitions, you wrote "to bring the order of the paladin and rise the kingdom named lordaeron." Where is he bringing the Order of the Paladin to?

- Work on your sentence structure. I can't tell who's point of view it is as it keeps switching back and forth. For example, in the Other Information section, you wrote "its hard for him to tolerate orcs since they are the ones who killed my parents,friends,and the rest of my village". The point of view switches.

Again, I am truly sorry that your application hadn't been accepted. Please reapply in 48 hours.

[Alurid 99]

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