Maximis's App

[Maximus53 0]

Contact me at [email protected] if you have any subjetions for me

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name: Maximus53

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?: No

How old are you?: 10

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Eastern time zone United States

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a clever young boy who loves the idea of construction. I mathematics and social studies.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: About 4-6 hours

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to : Role playing is to me acting. For example if the server was a mid-evil time I would say to someone “Hello sir what a fine day we are having?” It is playing a role that is similar to the time period and setting.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are. Powergaming is working with the game to complete a specific goal. In other words it is working to a specific goal in the game. Metagaming is using your own knowledge on your character to accomplish something inside the game.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect this server to be like a nice peaceful place with some monsters so I can gain experience. I think everybody will be nice

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on the server, Minecrafteir and Minetown .

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes

How did you hear about us?: My bother Wacko59[Grimlin Skysword] and a friend Pinser99.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus?: Which vote number were you? Yes NO.13

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Maximis

In-Character:

Character Name: Toren Skysword

What is your Race?: Elf

Biography: His name is Toren Skysword. He has an elf for a mother and dwarf for a father. He is the brother of Grimlin Skysword. Once Wilson found out his brother left when he was 10 Wilson knew he would follow in his footsteps. 40 years after Toren knew (50) he left for his journey. He went to Ravenhold in Malinor and got a mining permit and a small cottage. Soon he becomes an archer in Malinor’s army. Wilson acts like a brave warrior but on the inside he is very lonely. He makes a good salary and eats a good amount of food and lives a good life but knows something is missing. When he went he sleep one night he woke up in the middle of the forest and saw 4 dark figures. They say find your bother follow in his footsteps. Soon he wakes up and goes out in search of his bother, He encounters some challenging optical but he will never stop looking. Soon he will find him but not yet… He also wants to become part of the army. He wants to become an archer. He wishes to make his dreams come true on his journey.

Your characters ambitions: He wishes to find his bother and wants to become part of the army.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do? I go and take out my bow and fire at the bandits and will try to kill them. If I am successful I will give the elf some food and be off.

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer? I say Hello my good sir I would like to purchase some bread. Do you have some stock?

A screenshot of your skin:

Other Information

[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

DENIED

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [X]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [X]

Insufficient Knowledge upon World [ ]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

Powergaming [ ]

Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Status [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Needs Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [X]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [X]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

Your application was lacking a Screenshot, and your definition for power/metagaming was incorrect.

Please correct it and resubmit an application in two days.

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account!

<3

You come to Aegis to Develop a Character, not have one Developed already

Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before.

Don't post another application in a period of two (2) days. It ruins our organisation methods.

[Taiga 764]

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