Gundowns Application

[gundownisgb 1]

Out-Of-Character:a pigmen

Minecraft Account Name:gundownisgb

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:no

How old are you?:15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:united states central time

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:]im 15 and i enjoy minecraft. on my free time i like to go out to my horses.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:3 hours a day

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.: i think its about making friends and being in guilds and working together and making your character awesome and very well respected

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are. is like saying lol or lmao because you wont use it in real life chat. so make it more fun for other gamers.

What do you expect this server will be like?:amazing

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:mcpvp because i wanna do a role playing server.]

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:yes

How did you hear about us?:youtube

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you? no dont know what that is

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:gundownisgb

In-Character: gundownisgb

Character Name: gundown

What is your Race?:dwarve

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): my character is 15 he is very young dwarve and he lost his parents when he was 4. therefore he is a orphan that roams the street looking for friends. he is courageous. and wants to be like his father one day. he is outgoing and very nice looking. he likes talking to people and very friendly

Your characters ambitions:to be like his father

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?i would help him because 2v1 is unfair

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?i would say just looking but thanks anyway

A screenshot of your skin:

Other Information:please accept my application

[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

DENIED [X]

PENDING [ ]

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

[[X's mark the parts you need to rectify.]]

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [X]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [X]

Insufficient Knowledge upon World [X]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

Powergaming [ ]

Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Status [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Needs Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [X]

Missing Areas [X]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

Your biography is much too short and vague for me to understand or comprehend. It is also very cliched, being too common to be considered an original application. Please implement knowledge of lore of Aegis by reading the 'History of Aegis' on the website www.lordofthecraft.net.

Next, I need you to provide a definition of Powergaming and Metagaming. The definitions are provided in the Laws section of the main website as well.

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account!

<3

You come to Aegis to Develop a Character, not have one Developed already

Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before.

Don't post another application in a period of two (2) days. It ruins our organisation methods.

[Taiga 764]

Moved to Denied Forum