Application

[DarkDue 1]

b]Out-Of-Character: human warrior

Minecraft Account Name: DarkHunneydue

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?: no

How old are you?:14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: estern time America

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: not really

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: well i am a calm person i only play to have fun i don't like when people cheat i do have a temper i like playing hockey and i like to skate board i hang with my friends a lot and i like to play video games. i am an active person i am always doing something and i don't really like it when people are rude.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: almost every day

What do you know about Role playing? Give a definition of what it means to you.: i think role playing is to assume a role either unconsciously to fill a social role or consciously to act out a chosen role .like to if i was a dwarf i would have to act like a dwarf i would have to dig holes and to love treasure.

In your own Words, describe what Meta gaming and Power gaming: meta gaming is the highest level of strategy in many complex games, metagame refers to any aspect of strategy that involves thinking about what your opponent is thinking you are thinking. power gaming isa style of interacting with games or game-like systems with the aim of maximising progress towards a specific goal, to the exclusion of other considerations such as (in video games, boardgames, and roleplaying games) storytelling, atmosphere and camaraderie. Due to its focus on the letter of the rules over the spirit of the rules, it is often seen as unsporting, un-fun, or unsociable. This behaviour is most often found in games with a wide range of game features, lengthy campaigns or prize tournaments such as role-playing, massively multiplayer or collectible games.

What do you expect this server will be like?: i expect one good team work two a lot of war and action three good sports man ship sometimes and last four for something

What other servers) have you played on and why did you leave them?:i have bin on a lot of servers and i leave them because no one can or will help one another two people are always mean and rude last people are just no good sports they all normally cheat.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: ye i have read understood and agreed to the rules

How did you hear about us?: you tube

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Mine status? Which vote number were you ? no

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: DarkDue

In-Character: human warrior

Character Gabriel

What is your Race?: human

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.)my character Gabriel history: the day he was born his parents new exactly what to call him. Gabriel which means man of god but just because his name means man of god doesn't mean his life was easy he had a hard life his parents where poor and he didn't see that smutch of his dad because he was working in the army and his mom has a job as a shop owner . she makes just engulf money to pay taxes she didn't need money for food and water because she gets that from the shapeable has been in trouble a lot and he has been beaten smutch more . my character Gabriel life :he lived in a village called Belgrade with the love of his life untill he went to war with the elfs and together they where fighting the dwarfs one day the general of the roman army said leave the village of Belgrade let the Hungarians take it and gab rial said we are going to help the town and he attacked the general and ran they soon found him with his lover the general took her away and sent him to become a gladiator untill he was rewarded with freedom he soon had engulf money for his lover to be sent to him, but she was killed by bandits after 4 years he was free then he join the human army he was the best because of the skills he had . my character Gabriel age:28 my character Gabriel appearance: he has a scar on his chest and one small one on his face he has black short hair a beard and he is a medium sized man . my character Gabriel personality: he is i nice man, but will kill when he needs to, he is silent, he has a very high temper a big patients.

Your characters ambitions: to become a sage

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do ? he walks up to get a better look and when he sees what is going on then he shouts stop bandits they looked at him and laugh then they continue moving forward to the elf so he said im coming to help you elf so he runs toward the elf when he got there he ran infront of the bandits and said dont take a step forward the bandits luaghed agen and the charged he stood stronge and then he said elf you get the one on the right ill get the one on the left so when the bandits got near him and the elf they charged at the bandits it was a long fight with swords clashing. back and forth they battled then the elf and him had to fallback so they ran depper into the forest the bandits stayed back to loot the house the elf and him came back to the house to see what is going on they see the bandits looting the house so the elf and him say put down the stuff or elts the bandits said why dont you come take them from us and they went up to the bandits and started fighting agen they clashed swords agen and agen before some other adventuer came by and asked what is going on i said help so the adventurer said im coming to help the bandits see the three of use and got scared and ran off. the elf thanked him and the adventurer for helping they said back no problem i was glad to help.s o shall we part ways good bye them elf and you to adventurar.

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer ? he says hello to you to sir after that he says hows your day sir the shop owner said back good expt the food dilivery is late agen. but never mind that what would you like today my good sir the shop owner said he said i would like to buy a sword some bread and 2 torches plese. the shop owner said is that all he said yes thank you my good sir good day.

[]MBA screen shot of your skin: (sorry if the link doesn't work if it doesn't tripe in the website and go to page 4 name of skin is gladiator skin person its by DanSoldHisSoul

http://minecraftfreeskins.com/skins/?skinid=131754

Other Information:my caps lock doesnt work that good its hard to get it to work for just one letter sorry.

[marimbamonk 1501]

Your application to LoTC was...

Here's why:

• Okay. First of all. You need to spread out your paragraphs. No one wants to read a clumped blob of text (also notably called a "Wall of Text")

Could you please space it out more; making a new paragraph with each new part in your biography, each new part in your scenario answers and such?

• Secondly, there are no Romans, Hungarians or Belgrade in Aegis. They never existed. That's like saying there was a race called the Bananawoggers a long time ago. They just don't exist in that world.

• Thirdly, from what I could peace from your application, I can't really see any progression. I understand where your character came from and such, but why does he want to become a Sage? I will better understand if you could please space out your paragraphs.

• Your answer to the bandit scenario is considered powergaming. You definitely couldn't do that in an actual role-play situation unless you managed to role-play it out.

Please, if you need any help at all, message me. Just go to my profile and send me a message. I would also recommend that you look at the "Implemented Apps" section to see what a good application looks like.

Please post a new application after 48 hours.

[marimbamonk 1501]

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