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[Katanadude47 0]

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name:Katanadude47

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:I have never been to minecon

How old are you?:15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Eastern Standard Time/U.S.A.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:I do, at least most of it.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I was a strict forum based RPer years ago and have not gone back to it in about a year. I am more used to romance and adventure. I am familiar with the Minecraft itself, however not the best at it. My best friend Ouity, who helped me with this application, convinced me to join.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:1-5 hours per day depending on how much life decides to get in the way.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.: I know forum based RPing, but i am new to game based RPing. Roleplaying is being a character and throwing yourself into a story. It is like improvisation but harder and better. You have to fit in to the world you are playing in, as if you have lived there your entire life.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are:Powergaming is when you overdue yourself, so to speak. When you are overly powerful and you just make the game not fun to play for other people. You make yourself a higher person than everyone else is. You are basically unbeatable. Metagaming is when you do things your character would not know how to do.

What do you expect this server will be like?:Well, from what I have heard quite a bit of jokes, an amazing story, and fairly good RPers.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:This is my first server.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:I have and do

How did you hear about us?:Ouity, my best friend.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?: Yes, 1,396.

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:Katanadude47

In-Character:

Character Name: Brahzin

What is your Race?:Dwarf

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Brahzin has never had too much trouble making every fight his business. He has always tried to pick a fight, even if he will lose. He has lived in the battle field. From his birth to his current age of 25. From the halls of Kal'Urguan to the keep of Al'Khazar.

As a boy, he got in fights with the other children. Sometimes they were older. Sometimes they were even guards. He found a unique fascination with the sword. He starting off using just sticks. He slowly moving onto swords. He is proficient enough to hold his own in a fight.

He slowly moved on through the world. He has traveled through the world, visiting city by city. Brahzin was there when Al'Kazar fell. He tried his best to hold the city. Although his it was his best attempt, it was in vein. The city fell as well as his morale. He was no longer confident in his ability to fight. In the time that has elapsed since, the fall of other cities has made him regain face and even more willing to fight the undead.

Your characters ambitions:To fight until his last day. He does not want power, money or women. He only wants honor.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?: Fight off the bandits to the best of is his ability, for only the sheer fun of battle.

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?: My good man, what food have you got for me to purchase.

A screenshot of your skin:

Other Information:I have to thank Ouity for helping me find out about you guys.

[Rhisereld 317]

Denied.

Your last application was only yesterday. You must wait 48 hours before reapplying. While you are waiting, here are a couple of things you could work on, because this looks pretty decent.

Expand a little on metagaming. What you have now is correct, but there is a little more to it. You can research this in applications that have already been accepted.

Give much more detail in the open response questions. You are a forum RPer, so this should come naturally to you. Imagine it's just a starter scenario that allows you to tell a short story. In these questions you must show that you can roleplay, stick to your character and avoid metagaming and powergaming. At the moment your answers show your character's personality, which is good, but it could be better.

Remember, you must wait 48 hours before reapplying.

[Rhisereld 317]

Moved to Denied Forum