Tolf

shadowmage1291 · January 27, 2012

out of character:

Minecraft Account Name:

shadowmage1291

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the lotc booth:

no i did not attend minecon sadly

How old are you:

15

Time-zone/country of residence

Astrailer EDT

Do you have a good grip on the english language/grammer:

my skills are average

2-3 Sentence Description of your self:

I injoy gaming reading fantasy books such as lord of the rings and others, i injoy listening to music type thrash metal and watching animes

How much time could you be on this server a weekly:

10-20 hours

what do you know about roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means:

Roleplaying is when you assume the roles of character and interact how he/she would act E.g a man holds you up and tells you to hand over all your money, your action would be what your character would do, not what you would do in real life.

In your own word, describe what metagaming and powergameing are:

metagaming is when you use ooc [out of character infomation] E.g. nametag reading and giving coordinates to locations.

Powergaming is using power without giving the other player a fair chance to react. e.g, i jump out from a bush and i tie up the bandit with rope. i would have to warn them and give them a fair chance to react.

What do you expect this server to be like:

I have heard good things about this server so i expect high fantasy role play server with a good community

What other servers have you been on and why did you leave them:

I've played on many small servers. I could be considered a server jumper.

have you read and understood, agreed to the rules?:

yes i have read and agreed to all the rules

How did you hear about us?:

a few youtube vids

Have you voted for the lotc on minestatus? which vote number were you

yes i have voted, number 2,401

What is your the lotc fourm account name?:

proshadowgamerhd

In character name:

tolfdear

Charecter name:

tolfdear

What is your race?:

Human

Biography 1-4:

1 History:

this is from one of my older app's, I fixed it up

I was born on a farm to the north in a small snowy village called snow vale, my pa worked on lord cabrea's farm tending to the crops and animals wile my ma taught me to read and rite.

at the age of 10 i took up a job working on lord cabrea's farm. I spent most of my spare time reading books and learning of the wold outside my small village. wile i was doing errands for lord cabrea i found a journal on the road it told of an old ruin to the west of the village, being the curious type i went to check it out. when i arrived at the ruins they were little more then an old wall with a door in the side of a hill, i walked over to the door it was old and dusty i opened the door i saw steps i began to walk down them it was dark the steps came to a dimly lit room. the room was bare exept for a chest curiousty filled me i raced over to the chest and opened it. It contained a black robe with a symbol on it and some notes these notes were riten in some strange lauge i could not read.

i decided to take the robe and the notes home i put them in a chest a few years past and i had Forgotten all about the robe and the notes one day wile i was tending to the crops i saw smoke coming from my house i ran but i was to late by the time i arrived it was but ashes my ma and my pa were dead burned alive in the blase the only thing that survived was a chest i went over to it and opened it i saw the notes and robes from so many years ago. not knowing were to go from there i set out for cloud temple of agis looking guidance from mocks but i arrived in the middle of Iblees attack, I followed the others, and soon I was on a ship to Auslon i do not know what awaits me.

2 appearance:

blue eyes, black hair, skin pale, but you cant see this cause he wears a black robe

3 personality:

keeps to himelf, prethers to talk over fight. he holds knowledge high and he will respect those with it ,will fight only if there is no over way or if somthing he holds dear is at stack.

4 Age: 26

Your characters ambitions:

to find guidance in Auslon and find a place were he belongs

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?: I would try and avoid them later i would feel sorry for the elf but i know i would not have been much help in combat any way, no point in geting both us killed.

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?"good day shop clurk im am in need of some food" shop owner " we have bread for only 20 minus" crow "ill take it" [shop clurk hands over the bread and i give him the minus ] crow "oh i almost forgot would you happen to know were a libary is" shop owner "its just up the street left from the pound" crow "thank you for your help and here some thing for your troble" [i hand him three minus and walk off to the libary]

A screenshot of your skin:

I had problems with uploading a image, so i have a link i hope it does not cause a problem

http://www.minershoe...231832315823160

Other Information:

the type of character im trying to run is some one who values knowledge highly and is willing to brave the odds to gain it, thanks for looking at my app

James Undercroft · January 27, 2012

Your application has been:

But don't lose hope! After two days you can re-apply which gives you plenty of time to fix up your application and plan it out, as well as use all the advice I am about to give you to make it spot on. Also check out the links at the bottom of this page, trust me they really help.

Your biography needs some work, and I would also reccomend you work on your grammar to make it more understandable. I reccomend this website: www.spellcheckplus.com all you have to do is paste your entire application in there and it will explain to you all the spelling/grammar mistakes you have made. We would like you to include some lore from the world of Aegis and/or Asulon such as names of towns and people, or even events which have happened before and your characters connection to the event. You can find all about the lore of Lord of the Craft here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Main_Page,'>http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Main_Page, or in the lore/history sections of the forum and website. For example you could write my character was born in the elven kingdom of . . . or near the human fort of . . .

Your answer for the first RP question could do with some work. Instead of saying that your character would avoid it, write about what your character was doing and how he stumbled upon the situation, then what he does (like does he crouch in a bush and watch what happens then slowly creep away?). Use your imagination, the possibilities are almost limitless.

The link to the skin in broken, but we prefer you to embed the picture of your skin rather then just giving us a link. You can do so by reading the following tutorial:

Do not post another application within 2 days or that application will be skipped.

If you need any help don’t be afraid to send me a PM on the forums.

Good luck :)

Here is some further reading material that can help you get accepted:

To understand the questions being asked better look here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/

The guide of a Game Master to accepted server applications:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/13144-petyrs-guide-to-accepted-server-applications/

Tips to definitely include on your application:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/

A must-read guide to the world of aegis:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/9868-an-extensive-guide-to-the-world-of-aegis

How to avoid role-playing as a terrible character: