Boogie123456789 Character Application

[boogie123456789 0]

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name:

boogie123456789

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:

no, but i sure wish i did!

How old are you?:

13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

central time, Canada

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes, i am an English speaker

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:i am a normal gamer that loves to RP because its just like acting, and you have so much more options of what you may do. i like to make new friends and i love to share my passions, such as playing bass guitar!

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

14 hours or more a week

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.:

RP is like going into your characters body and you do what they would do in many situations, its and overall fun thing to do in my opinion.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.

Meta gaming is when you talk about something that your RP character shouldn't know, and it can sacrifice role play altogether.

Power gaming is abusing the rules and using the system of a game to cheat and make the game rather unfair, and un fun

What do you expect this server will be like?: Absolutely amazing, i have seen so many great videos and i know what to expect mostly!

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

Massivecraft, why? because the admins don't care, and that makes me feel horrible on the inside.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

i have spent hours reading the stuff on this site, its really interesting

How did you hear about us?:

friends and youtube and minestatus!

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?

Yes, but i refreshed the page and i apologize

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

boogie123456789

In-Character:

Character Name:

Thorin

What is your Race?: Dwarf

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Thorin was born outside of Kal’Urguan, but he knew lots of there culture and the way they had very little respect for the humans and the elves. Thorin had a good childhood, he worked for his father, Glorthal. Glorthal was rather wealthy, but didn't care for any dwarven history and rituals, but Thorin wood always read book of the underground ways of the traditional Dwarves.

Thorin grew older, a child still in his fathers eyes but Thorin felt the need to join the people of Kal'Urguan, Glorthal thought Thorin was mad; Glorthal, angry at Thorin locked him in a dark cellar, but Thorin already knew this would happen, He had been planning this for months, he would be locked in a cellar, but he would remove the false bricks in the wall and he would be taken to a human inhabited city, where he would then find a path to Kal'Urguan. why would he do this? well, his father wasn't just a rich bastard, he actually worked with the Undead, he hated the ways of the traditional dwarven lore, so he joined the evil, but the one he married already gave birth to Thorin, and now, he leaves this evil place and hopefully he may start a new life.

Once Thorin made his way to a normal human kingdom, he already noticed an evil presence upon him, hooded beings were watching him everywhere, probably looking for him! Thorin could see a wagon at the end of this town and he ran as fast as a 5 foot dwarf could, but he saw the undead coming for him with what looked like curved swords of, god knows what shadowy material it was! Thankfully, Thorin was already inside the wagon and he was going to be taken to where he belongs...

Your characters ambitions:

Join the dwarves he has read about long times ago in his childhood, the Dwarves of Kal’Urguan

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?

Thorin knows he would he sliced to bits by the bandits sharp blades, so he takes a stealthy approach, but being a dwarf in heavy clanking chainmail he was easily noticed. Thorin find a large wooden stick and hits the first bandit in the head, only stunning him for a second, for the bandit was very skilled at dodging really serious blows. Both bandits, now trying to slice through Thorins flesh feel very confident that the Dwarf was done, but the elf, surprisingly, uses a ebony dagger to slit both bandits throats with a well executed swipe, and Thorin, being a dwarf, looks at the elf and says "... uuh, i didn't need your help, but where does an elf learn to fight like that?"

the elf doesn't say anything but sits down and grabs a book that is titled "fighting techniques" and the elf passes it to Thorin and finally says "keep it, your worthless at fighting!"

but it was true, Thorin never learnt to fight like other dwarves, but he kept going his way down the road across the cottage.

Your character walks up to a shop in a quiet market. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?

"OI! i need a strong mead and a Delicious meat for my stomach thank you!

the shop keeper replys looking down from the counter to mock thorin

"aah, one of your kind eh? what can i get for you small one?"

Thorin is ferious, but replys assertively: "dont make me cut you in half! give me a drink and i will be on my way!"

the shopkeeper isn't impressed but he gives Thorin the mead, but after the large dwarf heads off the shop keeper realizes that he got no money from what he just sold! Thorin didn't realize this though, he was not a very smart dwarf, but he was happy with the purchase!

A screenshot of your skin: http://imgur.com/8aHIs

other info: i actually took time to right this stuff down on paper, that is how serious i am with this app!

[Rhisereld 317]

Denied.

You have one more chance to reapply, make it count.

Work on your spelling, punctuation, grammar and presentation.

Your definition of powergaming is incorrect.

I am very suspicious of your terrible grammar in the OOC section, yet flawless storytelling in the IC section.

There's no reason or justification for your father being "an evil bastard", it's only stated. And if he participated in Iblees worship, your character would want to run away from that, not something is petty as joining other dwarves.

Your open response questions are great, other than poor grammar.

[Rhisereld 317]

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