I Would Like To Join Your Server

[O'shassera 0]

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name:

Admir4l9

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:

No, I did not go to minecon or sign up at the LOTC booth

How old are you?:

14 ill become 15 this month

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

+00:00 (GMT) / Netherlands

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am a 14 year old boy, mid size boy whit brown hair. im studying hard and planning to take bioligy and chemistry in my future classes.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

at weekends saturday almost half to quarter of the day sunday ill be online in the morning and trough the week ill be online too

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.:

its having fun with people and play with what you want to be like for me i want to be a maghe with roleplaying i can be it and have fun

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.

Metagaming is when you play the game knowing things you aren’t supposed to know about and then using this knowledge to give you an unfair advantage. I suppose it’s a bit like watching a film – you know what is happening or what is going to happen, but the main character doesn’t.

Powergaming is when you roleplay with another person, but you do it pretty badly, and try and turn the situation to your advantage in a way which just wouldn’t happen in real life. By Powergaming, you would be claiming that an action was successful and not giving the opponent the opportunity to react. For example I walk up to a man and stab him in the heart saying ‘Yes I killed him’. This would be both against the Lore as you would not be roleplaying, as you have not engaged in conversation, and powergaming as you had not given the opponent the chance to flee or otherwise.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

i expect that it will be fun full with nice people and ill be able to have alot of fun the other players

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

i have played on numerous other servers but sadly i have forgot the names of them i left them because almost all of them begun to dry up and i would be practically be the last player and then i would leave too

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

I think that I have read and understood all of the rules and am willing to follow them as I am playing.

How did you hear about us?:

i found it trough a video on youtube about a wedding on your server i thought i would look it up

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?

Yes, I’m vote number 15

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

Admir4l9

In-Character:

Character Name:

O'shassera

What is your Race?:

Human

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

O'shassera was the child of an elf and a human but he came out as a full blood human he has always been a very ambitious boy at the moment he is 20 years old and ready to explore the world he always liked stories that hius mother told him about the mages guild and has dreamt of joining them but never thought he could his father was a farmer and from him he learned his skills and because of that he never failed in managing his fathers farm when he was away every now and then he saw the big city but didn't feel home there because he felt it was too cramped

his father and mother were assassinated because they failed to pay their debts O'shassera decided to go away and travel the world now he can finally fulfill his ambition in becoming an mage

Your characters ambitions:

he wants to join the mages guild and if possible maybe even own a large farm but he accepted the fact that he first has to fight and serve under a lord but he has accepted that

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an Elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?

he sees the enemy's threatening elf and decides that he must save the elf his mother was also an elf and he sees no difference between humans and elves he grabs what he can and jumps up to help him after he beats the bandits he gives the elf some bread and goes with him to the nearest town

Your character walks up to a shop in a quiet market. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?

after the door opened he asked the man where he could find a sanctuary to start his expedition into the wilds and on his search for the mages the shop owner says he can take the boat to the sactuary and with a happy face O'shassera gave him sone money and left the store

A screenshot of your skin:

http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/39608/skyrim/

Other Information:

if you deny me i understand it but if you could say what i did wrong it would be very helpfull if you do accept me i thank you alot if you dont or do accept me thank you alot for looking at my post :)

[Danny 2232]

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I'm sorry, but your application for Lord of the Craft has been...

Notes for applicant:

• Your definition of metagaming is a bit loose where it says "Something you shouldn't know".
• O'Shassers isn't really an elvish name.
• Your biography doesn't tell me enough about your character:- full history, personality, appearance and current state.
• Your open response questions don't tell me enough. I need to know:- what your character would say, do and feel. Detail it like it would happen in-game.
• Your can't be the son of a elvish woman and a human man then come out as a full blood human...

Please note: Whilst you may be angry or irritated at this denial, you need to understand that as a member of the Application Team it is my job to ensure we only have people who made great applications on the server. After you fix the issues that I've detailed in your application, it will probably be accepted.

Where can I get help to fix these errors?

It really depends on what you need – you are not allowed to have anyone else write part of your application for you. As the Application Team we're here to not only accept and deny your applications, but it's our job to give you help for fixing them. We'll help you as much as we can, but we will never write a bit of your application, no matter how much you ask!

The best way to get help, is to contact the Application Team member who denied you, (in this case, myself; Danny). You can contact me either here on the forums, via a PM – or you can also find me on TeamSpeak most of the time, either in the “Application Team” channel or in one of the private channels. Feel free to poke me, or send me a message for any help, and I'll try my best to help you!

I'd also suggest that you do some reading up, depending on why you were denied, as there's some good help out there, already written for anyone who needs it!

The WikiYou provides almost every scratch of lore that we have, there's people dedicated to expanding on it, and making it as detailed as possible. It's possibly the best place to find lore on the website, although you can also find quite a bit in this forum section.

You should also read the various posts that have been made by GM's and Application Team members to help with your applications, and believe me, there are many. The most useful is the “Application Team's Advice” thread. Which can be found

right here.

Can I re-apply?

Of course you can! Often people post as many as 3 applications before they're accepted! Just make sure, that you wait until after 2 hours before you re-apply or your application will be denied. We have the 2 hour wait system to keep the Application Submissions forum tidy, and to ensure that the application team aren't overwhelmed by applicants posting a new application every five minutes.

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[Lirinya 4021]

Moved to Denied Forum