Gamateam30's 4Th App

[GamaTeam30 0]

Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name:GamaTeam30

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:No and No

How old are you?:18

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Pacific Time Zone/United States Of America

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes. I ace most of my spelling tests at school

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I love to play Gmod and Minecraft Rpg servers.I love to play first and third person shooters.Also I am really good at math.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:Weekends, certain days, and holidays

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.:Roleplaying is playing as a character you made up.There is no txt talk (slang) and you have to act your maded up character.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.Powergaming:

Playing to have your will/way or to win on every level. - so if you cannot win RPwise, you ll try ooc.. you extend the powers of your character beyond whats possible for this character in terms or roleplay - often using ways only the player has access to.

Metagaming:

Using knowledge the player has, but not the character. - that includes knowledge about close communications, diplomacies, secret deals etc. and make it so that they affect the characters roleplay or even activly interfering with it. - it includes pre-emptive strikes based on knowledge one does not have.

What do you expect this server will be like?:I expect there will be friendly staff and no powergaming or metagaming.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Shadowraze, becuase it said that it was a rp server but there was no rp and Medieval ages minecraft, because there was no rp.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes I have read,understood,and agreed to the rules.

Rule of war:

No returning after death. When you die, you lose ~30 minutes of memory. You also can not return to the spot you died for ~30 minutes.

How did you hear about us?:PetriDaGamingNerd (Petri) and candle340 (candle).

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you? Yes I was number 2513

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:GamaTeam30

In-Character:

Character Name:Ka'ki-Dragon void

What is your Race?: Elf

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):Ka'ki, in his toddler stages was cheerful, had short light blond hair,leafy clothes,white skin, and was amazed by magic.Ka'ki was home schooled, because his parents were afraid he would be bullied.As he was 5, he learned to read.It took him 5 weeks to be a beginner at reading.He was reading and he was decent at reading when he was 9 years old.When he was ten, his appearance and personality changed a bit.He had a bit longer hair,he loved reading about lore,He was taller,he wanted to be a mage and also wanted to make his own elven town when he grew up.

As he was ten years old Ka'ki made a bad mistake.He was walking through town and he accidently took a turn to Theives Landing,A elven guild in his town.Three minutes later he asked himself "Where am I?".Then he turned around to go back but he heard footsteps that were not his own.Soon he was being grabbed and he was trying to break free of the elf's grip.He managed to break free of the elf's grip but he was surrounded."HELP!" He shouted at the top of his lungs.He saw knives come out of the theive's pockets and aiming at him.He was almost stabbed when a group of guards made the theives make a dash for there main base.He was taken home and hugged by his mother and father who asked "Where have you been?" Ka'ki said silently "Theive's Catacombs"

He never went back to Theive's Catacombs ever again.He was 130 years old when he went to the dock and headed off for Asulon.He had short hair,wanted to be a mage more then ever,wanted to make a elven town more then his heart could bear,He was kind to everyone except people who attacked him,he haid even leafier clothes that didnt look like they even had leaves, he loved bread, and he always wanted to be prepared.The Journey was long and eventful.The first event he almost was thrown overboard by a wave.Later while he was sleeping he was almost hit by a sword that a orc accidently threw.The second day a bolt of lighting almost hit the boat, and Ka'ki flinched, almost falling down the stairs.The third event he got into a fight with a orc because Ka'ki accidently hit the orc in the face.Ka'ki dodged most of orcs hits and hit the orc hard in the face,causing its nose to bleed.Ka'ki felt more confident and started to punch the orc more.The fight went on for 3 hours and then Asulon appeared.Ka'ki hit the orc in the face and knocked it out.When he was on the island with the monk,he started to look around.He was in Asulon.

Your characters ambitions:Ka'ki wants be the a really good mage and wants to make a elven town.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?Ka'ki quickly walks up to the bandits and says "Hello, Bandits.".The bandits turn around.One gets ready to strike while Ka'ki gets ready to punch the bandit.Then the elf walks behind one of the bandits and slits its throat while Ka'ki starts to punch the other bandit.He jumps around,Confusing the bandit then punchs it in the face.The bandit says "You will die for this!" and pulls out his blade.Ka'ki then says "You forgot the elf.". the bandit says "What do you mean? You are the elf!".Then the elf who owns the cabin sneaks up behind the bandit and slits his throat."Thank you, My kind sir." says the elf."Your Welcome." says Ka'ki.

Your character walks up to a shop in a quiet market. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?"Hello,May I get a Staff?" Ka'ki says."Why yes you can sir that will cost 470 Minas!"

The shop has a nice wooden floor and chairs.Also the shop has a library upstairs."Ok." Ka'ki pays then takes the staff goes to the library and reads a couple of books.

A screenshot of your skin:

Other Information:

Defscape HD Texture pack link

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Mc Patcher (you'll need for HD texture packs)

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[James Undercroft 129]

Your application has been:

Denied

Do not worry though; this does not mean you cannot apply again, quite the contrary! After 24 hours you may apply again which gives you plenty of time to fix up your application, plan it out as well as use all of this advice which I have given you in this post to make your application one of the best. Please check the links at the bottom of this post, they will help you quite a bit.

You have been denied because:

Your definition for powergaming is incorrect.

Luckily for you there are plenty of ways to learn the correct definition. First of all you can look on the lord of the craft wiki and then search for "Powergaming", you can join our Team Speak channel (You can get Team Speak from http://teamspeak.com/?page=downloads ), or you can do a google search.

Your biography does not include enough lore.

Just writing "Asulon" does not consitute as including "lore" into your application.

Please actually read and understand my feedback, if you do not understand then please send me a message!

Examples of lore you can include:

-The escape from Aegis to Asulon (The Destruction of Aegis it is called in the wiki)

-The names of kingdoms, such as the Elven _____ of _____

-The names of cities and towns

-Important people, such as the Wnadering Wizard (although you cannot write he did something that he did not, such as granting you magic etc)

Where you can find the lore of Aegis and Asulon:

First and foremost check the wiki which can be found here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Main_Page

Secondly I reccomend that you go to the front page of this website (www.lordofthecraft.net) and look at "The History of Aegis"

You can also go to the forums and look in the history, roleplay and Town sections.

Your RP situations need some improvement.

While your answer to the first RP situation is alright, it could still do with some improvement. For example, instead of writing "he starts punching the first bandit"; write "He dodges to the left lightly brushing his forearm on the inside of his opponent's arm. He then counters the movement with a quick upset punch to the stomach, although the bandit sees this and quickly moves his arm downwards to interupt the technique."

Your second RP situation also needs some improvement. All you have written is an alteration of your first senario, quite frankly it is too short. You need to be DESCRIPTIVE! Really put that thinking cap on and churn out some ideas. What sort of things does your character do? Scratch his head as he thinks? Tapps his right foot on the dry planks? What does the shopkeeper look like? Etc. Etc. If you do not want to make an interesting situation, at the very least be descriptive.

That is about it, if you need any help PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE send me a PM. If you do not understand just ASK ME. This is your fourth and second last application. If your next one does not become accepted then you will be banned from applying for a couple of months.

Look here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42229-gamateam30s-app/page__pid__299215#entry299215

For links and what not :)

[James Undercroft 129]

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