Xeniums 3Rd Applications

[xeNium 1]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:

xeNiums

How old are you?:

12 (31 March)

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

West Java, Indonesia (GMT+ 7)

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Of course, but I am not sure about that. Sometimes I cannot speak english very well.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am a professional gamer in FPS, but that does effect anything because I am newbie in roleplay. I more like to try anything new, I more love adventuring than build a building for only a view, but sometimes I getting bored to adventuring, so I will call someone to build something with me.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

Dependent the time, I am still go to school so I will see my schedule how many hour I can get for playing a games in that days. Mostly 3 hours minimum and maximum 6 hours.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Roleplaying is like making what we do become more detailed but that makes we getting restricted from doing something and something but If we know what we must do it will be very fun.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

I do not have any roleplaying experince (I think) but I am sure soon I will have a roleplay experince, but I already play Seal Online and Ragnarok Online for a longtime maybe Seal Online and Ragnarok Online roleplay system is same like LotC roleplay system, so Maybe i will just need to improve my roleplay experince in LotC server.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Meta-Gaming is the use of information and characteristics of the player himself, rather than the character that represents him/her. An example of this could be when a player calls another character out by their screen name without them having introduced themselves in the game.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:

Power-Gaming is acting through means that are unrealistic in role play. An example of this could be claiming to have untied your hands after an authority had restricted them. In my opinion, this is the most common flaw found in role play games, however this server appears to be very strict about its players.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

Nothing, this server already give anything i want about a server.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

iPlay, This server is a survival server that let player to do what they want but with some restrict but I do not like this server because for a longtime I already play at this server that makes me boring because every time the server get ddos they prefer to remake the map ... I hate it because I already make a good thing on that server but they just like easily erase it...

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Of course! I do not want get banned thats my reason reading the rules.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

Yes.

How did you hear about us?:

I forgot, but maybe from minecraftforum.net I already trying to enter this server for maybe a couple month or a week (1 - 2) but I too lazy to writing an applications.

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?:

No, I want voting if the server is fun for me, I want to see the server first.

In-Character:

Character Name:

xeNium

What Race are you?:

Elves

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

What did you mean about Sub-Race? I do not quite sure about this but I think better i write it. (Orc)

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

xeNium, Is a elves that born in Prontera, Ragnarok Capital City. Prontera is a beatiful town, xeNium live there for a 17 years. Unfortunately the day of xeNium Birthday the Orc attacking the Prontera, Every elves preparing their weapons for war, unfortunately elves lose the war because the elves is unprepared for a war on that days, everyone is having fun each other. xeNium parents died in the war, but xeNium is survived by unkown man and this man lead xeNium to the Asulon.

xeNium was feeling sad and trying suicide because his parents is died in his birthday, he promise If he become a warrior in Asulon he will kill those orc without forgiveness because those orc attacking prontera without forgiveness, the orc attacking them brutally.

When xeNium is 22 years old, xeNium trying to leaving the Malinor he starting to adventuring the Asulon world, He promise will comeback to Malinor when he have more experince in war to help elves to win the war from orc.

What is your Character's ambitions?:

His goal is earn more power and money to vegeance to orc of what they do.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

Diamond Sword, Diamond Pickaxe, Bow and a TNT

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

Unlike another elves, this elves more loves to adventuring the world this elves is a smart elves once he learn something he will become a professional of what he learn (If he like it)

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character:

Nope, I just hoping you will accept my applications because I already tired to write this applications

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

I will use my bow to shoot those armed warrios and hiding behind a tree. I bet they will search for me, then i will use my sword to kill those armed warrios.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

Hello, I need some speed and strenght potion and a steak please for my journey to Alras, by the way did you have a map that will lead me to Alras?

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

I will put a sign somewhere around the hut and asking who have that hut, If no one respon that then I will take the iron bars and that golden sword and leave a message that say "Thanks for your items, If you want it back just search for me, xeNiums"

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

Oh, my friends can you help me? I very hungry and thirst, did you have some food and a water please? I will pay for it.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

I will search those bandits, If i found those bandits I will ask the town guard to help me eliminate the bandits, I will provoke the bandits to catch me and the town guard do the rest.

[James Undercroft 129]

Denied.

There are a lot of errors in this application, but I shall start with the first and foremost.

-The language barrier is going to make it very difficult for communication on the server. I think that perhaps a full english speaking community might not be good for you until you learn better english.

-Your current definition of roleplaying does not describe what roleplaying is.

-Your definition for metagaming is very unclear and does not represent the example you provided.

-Your definition for powergaming is unclear and needs a lot of improvement. I suggest that you look on the Lord of the Craft wiki or join our Team Speak channel and ask around.

-The subrace you have selected is not a sub-race, but a completely different race. Please look at the lord of the craft wiki for a full list of sub races for elves.

-xeNium is not an RP name, change it to somethig which fits the time period.

-Your biography needs a lot of improvement. The towns in your biography are currently not in Asulon, please only include towns from the world (you can find these by looking at the forums or the wiki). You have not included any story of your character. You need to include a description of your character, its personality and age.

-Your answers to these questions need improvement:

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

You need to explain to us why you made the choices that you did, and why your character is so good as what they do.

-A "diamond sword" is not a type of tool, rather a specific material. We are talking about Swords, hoes, crossbows, bows, hammers etc.

-Your answers to the open response questions need a lot of improvement.

Please write at least a paragraph for each one, in full rp (which means write it like a story rather than if someone was asking you a quesiton).

If you need any help understanding my feedback please send me a message.

[James Undercroft 129]

Moved to Denied Forum

[hypercrit 237]

Banned from applying.

You copied your definitions from this app: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/46276-armedbyblades-application/

It is illegal and uncalled for, both on the server and in most law systems today.