1St Application Submission

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Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: Delmodan

How old are you?: 24

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: eastern standard

time/USA

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good

grammar?: yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I’m

a happily married military wife. I have been writing fan fiction

since I was 10 years old. I’m a very social gamer.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

three to four days out of the week. The amount of hours per day would

be depended upon my college work load.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition

of what it means to you: Role playing to me is similar to

writing fiction

stories. The difference being that in role playing you can live them

out with others. In turn making the whole role play experience more

exciting and unpredictable than fiction you create by

yourself.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if

any?: I have a light amount of role playing experience. I role played on

another server with a few close friends.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming

is: Its mainly cheating. It’s using out of character information in

character.

In your own Words, define what the act of

Power-Gaming is: it’s basically forcing something to happen without

giving the other person a chance. Example: say I swing my sword and

just say that I hit your arm, without giving you a chance to react.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I have

friends who play on lord of the craft. They are always talking about

how much fun it is. I look forward to having a fun role playing

experience and having fun with them and everyone else.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did

you leave them?: I played on herocraft with friends a year ago. I

haven’t played on any other multiplayer servers since we stopped

playing on herocraft.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

yes

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This

includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: yes

How did you hear about us?: I heard about the server

through two of my best irl friends.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could

you link us to your last Application?: no

Have you posted this application on our minecraft

forum thread yet? If not, just finish it up on here and then copy +

paste is over there.

(http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-%E2%96%91%E2%96%92%E2%96%93-the-lord-of-the-craft-%E2%96%93%E2%96%92%E2%96%91-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r/):

I will once I finish it here.

In-Character:

Character Name: Alatariel Rosefire

What Race are you?: Elven

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to

have a sub-race): Wood Elf

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs

long. This must include the history of your character and his life as

well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Alatariel is

a 50 year old dark brown haired elven maiden with piercing icy blue

eyes. She came from a small elven kingdom deep in the northern woods

of Aegis, isolated from the rest of the land. She was the youngest

princess of her royal family. She had two elder brothers, who were

twins. They were great warriors and died in battle alongside their

father defending their kingdom. The kingdom fell to the Undead, but

Alatariel escaped. Before the war Alatariel often dreamed of life

outside the rules of her royal duties.

Although she loved the trappings of her upbringing, her heart was not

in to marrying a noble brat prince. She just wanted to practice

archery with her brothers and live among the common people, and maybe

one day marry for love and not duty. After the total loss of her

family and her kingdom she was able to seek shelter in Asulon with two

kind ladies who became her dearest friends, Vailoen and Lillith. They

are also the only ones who know of her royal birth, but keep it a well

guarded secret, as she does not want that life any longer. Although

still young and at times naive she is kind and loving, if sometimes

bull headed. She is very fun loving and free spirited.

What is your Character's ambitions?: Work in a common

life and find her place in this world.

What is your character’s favorite tool? : She has some

experience with a bow, but is learning to mine and help collect

resources while helping her friends. (sword, pickaxe, shovel,

etc)

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

She is still discovering what she is good at, but she is starting to

find she might have a talent at blacksmithing.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format): http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/rpg---elf-female-4---dress-3/

Other Information about your Character:

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a

small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to

be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

She leaps into action to help the halfling. Although not well

skilled in

her bow, she first tries with words to out wit these brutes to leave

the halfing alone. No one deserves to be bullied.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a

small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s

offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh

accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your

character response? I see you carry many fine treasures. What would

you happen to have in the way of gems?

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes

across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest

containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your

character respond?: In fear the hut may still belong to someone, it

doesn’t feel right to steal such treasures, so she would move along.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across

a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you in

the common tongue, how do you respond? “hello friends, I’m afraid I

must have taken a wrong turn on my little adventure away from home. I

was unprepared for such a long venture and wonder if in your kindness

you could spare some food. I don’t have any money on me but I would be

happy to exchange for some work for food and directions to help me

back home.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside

the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered,

and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of

the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How

does your character act on this information?: Although not skilled in

the bow very well, she offers to make weapons to for any who help with

her recently discovered talent in blacksmithing to help do her part to

help her town.

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Why did I deny you?

Quite a good app, fix up your grammar and spelling a bit, it was lacking in areas.

Also, your ORQs were a bit lacking in detail and roleplaying. Your character is there right now, what is she/he doing, smelling, thinking, seeing and feeling in that situation?

Elves are generally not blacksmiths, why is your character? Give us a reason.

Some Places That May Help You

Avoiding Bad Characters: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/27643-how-to-avoid-making-a-mary-suegary-stu/

Fixing Formatting: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/42682-a-guide-for-applicants/page__p__303005__fromsearch__1#entry303005

Some Tips: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/

A Question Analysis: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/34777-in-depth-analysis-of-the-application-form/

A FAQ: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/30081-application-submissions-faq-proper-etiquette/

Server Rules: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/?page_id=8

Latest Format: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/43580-official-lord-of-the-craft-application-format/

Definitions (Seriously Useful): http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/45364-roleplayingmetagamingpowergaming-definitions/

Please WAIT 24 hours before reposting, failure to do so will result in denial.

If you have any questions, add me on Skype, or PM me on the forums.

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