Application Submission

[danielnewton 0]

Minecraft Account Name: Briggs25

How old are you? 17

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT/ENGLAND

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar? Yes I have good grammar but sometimes I spell wrong due to getting used to my new computer. But can quickly correct mistakes.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a person who likes to have fun, I play basketball and I like to RP, have adventures on Minecraft and takes RPing seriously.

How much time could you be on the server weekly? I can give 24 to 36 hours a week

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Role playing to me is a chance to create an alternative ego and become a different person and meet new people. And to experience my characters strength and weaknesses in the RP server.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any? I have been on multiple RP servers such as Aftermath, Fallout war never changes, kingdom of gloin and GTA SAMP.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: it is when you give people out of character information to use in a in game advantage. For Example :I give my friend information that his RP wife is having an affair with a different player. And he finds that player and he kills him for no reason. The is meta-gaming.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Forcing an action upon someone without giving them time to respond to the action or react. for example: *pushes against the wall and slits his throat* this is power gaming bacause the player hasnt given the other player a chance to speak or even react to the push.

What do you expect this server will be like? I expect the server to be very good with lots of Roleplaying and action.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them? I didn’t leave they were shut down due to lack of players. The answers are in the RP experiences.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? Yes I have read and understood the rules.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes I promise to abide the rules and laws of the server, forum and Teamspeak.

How did you hear about us? Through my friends who play in the server.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application? i haven’t applied for this server before.

In-Character:

Character Name: Elessar

What Race are you? Elf

What Sub-Race are you? (Note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

When Elessar’s haelun was pregnant, his haelun and maln had been taken captive by Uruk and put into a slave camp. When Elessar was born his maln hatched a plan to escape the slave camp, a couple of days later his maln’s plan was ready and they attempted their escape out of the camp. They sprinted through the camp as Uruk chased them shouting and shooting arrows at them. As they were running out the gate of the cam, which had been mistakenly left open by an inexperienced Uruk, an arrow was shot into Elessar’s malns back. Elessar’s maln dropped to the floor, his Maln screamed out “Run!” So Elessar’s Haelun carried on running.

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70 Years Later

It was Elessar’s birthday he was now 70 years of age Elessar was now a very well nourished handsome young elf with blonde hair and blue eyes, he was wearing one of his Maln’s green robes, Elessar was told about how he had been killed by the vile Uruk, but the emotion was only anger, he already being a High Elf grew an incredible hatred of the green skinned Uruk, made him sick. He couldn’t cope with the anger that had been brought to him by this news. That day Elessar started packing his things to move on away from the hatred he now knew, he did not plan to leave right away. Over the next 4 weeks Elessar started training in the art of Archery, so if he ever met an Uruk he could should him where he stood, this made his Haelun worried and she tried to make him stop training, but he wouldn’t. She tried all she could but nothing was working Elessar was fixated on trying to become stronger, his Haelun forced him out of the house as she was scared of him and Elessar walked for miles and miles out into the world of Asulon to see what the world would have to bring him and what Uruk would stand in his way.

What is your Character’s ambition? To advance in life because of past grievances, have adventures on the server and kill a few Orcs on the way.

What is your character’s favourite tool? (Sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): My Characters favourite tool is the sword

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Archery

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character: Wears his Maln’s robe and is a very outgoing person who wants to get things done.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst travelling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Answer:*Hears a scream and looks around*

*see’s a halfling being harassed by two armed warriors*

*Approaches the armed warriors*

Elessar shouts ‘leave it alone and pick on someone your own size’

*Draws sword*

*the armed warriors turn around and charge*

*Elessar quickly dodges to the right and swings at the warriors head*

* The sword makes a loud clang against the helmet and a bend in the helmet appeared and blood drips from the bottom of the helmet. The warrior drops to the floor*

*The other warrior backs off and runs away*

Elessar say’s ‘are you ok?’

Halfling *Gets up and runs away*

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

Answer:

‘Hello Sir do you sell food’ Elessar say’s

‘Yes we do’ replies Merchant

‘Can I have twenty apples please? ‘Elessar asks

‘Yes that will be twenty gold’ merchant replies

*Elessar pulls out his satchel and hands thirty gold pieces to the merchant and replies* ‘Keep the change’

*Walks away*

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?

*looks around for people who might live in the hut*

*looks at the chest again*

*Thinks to himself* ‘shall I or shall I not? ’ he says in his head

‘I shall’ he says out loud

*Grabs the iron bars and golden sword and duffle’s them into his satchel*

* walks out of the hunt and continues with his adventure*

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you in the common tongue, and how do you respond?

Elessar ‘Hello sirs may I trade with you today?’

Trader ‘who sent you and how did you find this place?’

Elessar ‘oh was I not supposed to find this lovely camp’

Trader ‘no you wasn’t’

Elessar ’oh ok well before I go can I trade with you for food my supply is very low, you can what I have in the satchel.’

Trader ‘yes ok you can this beef we have’

Elessar ‘how much is that?’

Trader ‘fifteen’

Elessar ‘Ok I will take it, I will give you 20 gold for it?’

Trader ‘Ok here’ *passes Elessar the beef’

Elessar ‘Thank you’ *passes trader the gold and walks out of the camp*

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offers their support. How does your character act on this information?

Elessar ‘I will help you get rid of the bandits’

Leader ‘we will give you thirty coins for the assistance’

*passes Elessar a satchel with thirty coins*

Elessar ‘Ok lets go get rid of those bandits’

*The town guards and Elessar start walking down the road*

Thank you for reading my application and I if needed to be improved feedback is appreciated

Regards,

Daniel Newton

[ScreamingDingo 20568]

This application has been

~DENIED~

Reasons:

-Spelling and Grammar mistakes.

-Ambition is using OOC information, You cannot call Asulon the "Server"

-Bio doesn't include any lore.

-No skin=No play

-Open responses are dull and quite short

Please fix this up and re-post after 24 hours.

[ScreamingDingo 20568]

Moved to Denied Forum