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[danielnewton 0]

Minecraft Account Name: Briggs25

How old are you? 17

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT/ENGLAND

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar? Yes I have good grammar but sometimes I spell wrong due to getting used to my new computer. But can quickly correct mistakes.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I like to play Minecraft a lot with my friends; I play basketball one night a week with my local youth club and friends and will hopefully joining a team. I like to RP allot on servers even if they aren’t even Role-playing servers just for fun.

How much time could you be on the server weekly? I can give 24 to 36 hours a week

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Role playing to me is a chance to create an alternative ego and become a different person and meet new people. And to experience my characters strength and weaknesses in Asulon.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any? I have been on multiple RP servers such as Aftermath, Fallout war never changes, kingdom of gloin and GTA SAMP.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: it is when you give people out of character information to use in an in game advantage.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Forcing an action upon someone without giving them time to respond to the action or react.

What do you expect this server will be like? I expect Asulon to be very good with lots of Roleplaying and action.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them? I didn’t leave they were shut down due to lack of players. The answers are in the RP experiences.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? Yes I have read and understood and agreed to the rules.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes I promise to abide the rules and laws of the server, forum and Teamspeak.

How did you hear about us? Through my friends who play in Asulon.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application? I haven’t applied for Asulon before.

In-Character:

Character Name: Elessar

What Race are you? Elf

What Sub-Race are you? (Note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): High elf

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

When Elessar’s haelun was pregnant, his haelun and maln had been taken captive by Uruk and put into a slave camp. When Elessar was born his maln hatched a plan to escape the slave camp, a couple of days later his maln’s plan was ready and they attempted their escape out of the camp. They sprinted through the camp as Uruk chased them shouting and shooting arrows at them. As they were running out the gate of the cam, which had been mistakenly left open by an inexperienced Uruk, an arrow was shot into Elessar’s malns back. Elessar’s maln dropped to the floor, his Maln screamed out “Run!” So Elessar’s Haelun carried on running.

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70 Years Later

It was Elessar’s birthday he was now 70 years of age Elessar was now a very well nourished handsome young elf with blonde hair and blue eyes, he was wearing one of his Maln’s green robes, Elessar was told about how he had been killed by the vile Uruk, but the emotion was only anger, he already being a High Elf grew an incredible hatred of the green skinned Uruk, made him sick. He couldn’t cope with the anger that had been brought to him by this news. That day Elessar started packing his things to move on away from the hatred he now knew, he did not plan to leave right away. Over the next 4 weeks Elessar started training in the art of Archery, so if he ever met an Uruk he could should him where he stood, this made his Haelun worried and she tried to make him stop training, but he wouldn’t. She tried all she could but nothing was working Elessar was fixated on trying to become stronger, his Haelun forced him out of the house as she was scared of him and Elessar walked for miles and miles out into the world of Asulon to see what the world would have

What is your Character’s ambition? To advance in life because of past grievances, have adventures in Asulon and kill a few Orcs on the way.

What is your character’s favourite tool? (Sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): My Characters favourite tool is the sword and the bow

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Archery

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

This is my skin with a link.

Other Information about your Character: Wears his Maln’s robe and is a very outgoing person who wants to get things done.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst travelling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Answer:*Hears a scream and looks around*

*see’s a halfling being harassed by two armed warriors*

*Approaches the armed warriors*

Elessar shouts ‘leave it alone and pick on someone your own size’

*Draws sword*

*the armed warriors turn around and charge*

*Elessar quickly dodges to the right and swings at the warriors head*

* The sword makes a loud clang against the helmet and a bend in the helmet appeared and blood drips from the bottom of the helmet. The warrior drops to the floor*

*The other warrior backs off and runs away*

Elessar say’s ‘are you ok?’

Halfling *Gets up and runs away*

*Elessar notices a small satchel on the floor and picks it up*

Elessar ‘Your satchel’ he shouts

*The Halfling doesn’t come back for the satchel so he walks away as he walks away he opens the satchel and in the satchel is thirty five minas, he closes the satchel and continues his adventure through Asulon*

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

Answer:

*notices a small stall with a well dressed merchant standing behind the stall*

Merchant say’s ‘ello there, what can I do you for today?’

*Elessar walks towards the front off the stool*

‘Hello Sir do you sell food’ Elessar say’s

‘Yes we do son’ replies Merchant

‘Can I have twenty apples please? ‘Elessar asks

‘Yes that will be fifty Minas’ merchant replies

*Elessar pulls out his satchel and hands sixty Minas to the merchant and replies* ‘Keep the change’

‘Thank you kind sir’ merchant replies

Elessar ‘you’re welcome’ *and walks away from the stool*

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?

*looks around for people who might live in the hut*

*looks at the chest again*

*Thinks to himself* ‘shall I or shall I not? ’ he says in his head

‘I shall’ he says out loud

*Grabs the iron bars and golden sword and duffle’s them into his satchel*

*as he walks through the door he hears a loud bang and quickly turns around*

*he sees an n eight legged monster in the corner of the hut, it hisses at him*

Elessar ‘foul beast’ *draws sword and charges to the eight legged monster*

*as he swings the monster jumps into the and Elessar cuts on of the monsters limbs off*

*The monster lets out a huge cry, but continues to attack Elessar*

*Elessar quickly recovers from the swing of his sword and swings again and hits the monster on his head*

*as he removes the sword from the monsters head it makes one last cry and he wipes the blood off the end of the sword*

* Walks out of the hut paled faced but has to continue with his adventure to HAELUN'OR *

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you in the common tongue, and how do you respond?

Elessar ‘Hello sirs may I trade with you today?’

Trader ‘who sent you and how did you find this place?’

Elessar ‘oh was I not supposed to find this lovely camp’

Trader ‘no you wasn’t’

Elessar ’oh ok well before I go can I trade with you for food my supply is very low, you can what I have in the satchel.’

Trader ‘yes ok you can this beef we have’

Elessar ‘how much beef you have?’

Trader ‘fifteen’

Elessar ‘Ok I will take it; I will give you forty Minas for it?’

Trader ‘Ok here’ *passes Elessar the beef’

Elessar ‘Thank you’ *passes trader the Minas and walks out of the camp and carry’s on with his adventure to HAELUN'OR*

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offers their support. How does your character act on this information?

Elessar ‘I will help you get rid of the bandits’

Leader of party ‘ok great’

Elessar ‘will I be rewarded if I help you people?’

Leader of party ‘Yes you will be rewarded and given anything you want within reason’

Elessar ‘well I am in need of food and thirty Minas’

Leader of party *passes Elessar a leather pouch with thirty Minas and asks what food he is in need of?

Elessar ‘I am in need of beef and some bread as well?’

Leader of party ‘very well we will get you some beef and bread when we get back?’

Elessar ‘that will be fine, let’s go get rid of those bandits’

*The town guards and Elessar start walking down the road*

Thank you for reading my application and I if needed to be improved feedback is appreciated

Regards,

Daniel Newton

[Blawharag 277]

Take time to expand upon your character, proof-read your application, read up on server lore and rules and fix the problems with your app. Do not repost you application within 24 hours, use this time to build upon it and ensure perfection. Feel free to contact me on either the Teamspeak channel or through the forums if you have any questions, comments or concerns.

1. You were denied and asked to add lore to your bio, you came back with the exact same bio.

2. While your story concerning your time in Orcish slave camps is certainly more original than most we get, you extreme aversion towards Orcs poses a minor problem. There is nothing wrong with being racist, but you must demonstrate a clear and complete knowledge of the server rules before being accepted. In particular, I would like you to include a summary of the 'No-RP Killing' rule under the 'Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?' question. Accuracy of this summary is imperative so long as your biography includes the severe racism currently present.

To build off the above, you must also demonstrate that you are aware of the Villain Application rules and understand that these protections apply to Orcs as much as any other race. Spontaneous murder, even that which is RPed before hand, is not acceptable without the appropriate accepted Villain Application. Please include a summary of these rules under the 'Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?' question. Accuracy of this summary is imperative so long as your biography includes the severe racism currently present.

[Blawharag 277]

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