Fixed Koria App (Fixed The Edit Thing)

[Angel~ 34]

Out-Of-Character

Main Minecraft Account Name:mas0n99

Alternate Minecraft Account Name:None

In your own words, define what the act of Roleplaying is:Role Playing Is..A Somtimes complicated thing to do IF you Do it the wrong way , Like overpowering yourself in the situation , or powergaming , But Role Playing is In its Basic Form You Acting As Someone you Either Want/Wish to Be , Like an orc or a elf! , But You Could Take it even farther by playing AS That Person And Its Nearly Like a way to express yourself in situations and/or how you feel

In your own Words, define what the act of Metagaming is: Meatgaming is Where you Know Somthing OOCLY But you Act like you Know It ICLY , Which Is Mostly Like Cheating To Know Like Classified information

In your own Words, define what the act of Powergaming is: Powergaming Is Where your As i said in the roleing defining is where you OVERPOWER Yourself In The Situation Your in Like , Say your cuffed you cant just say "-Breaks His/Her Cuffs With Her/His Mind" OR "-Breaks Cuffs By Pure Strength-"

In-Character:

Character Name: Koria_Antonlin

What Race are you?:Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):None

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Koria Is 16 Years Old , Has Blond Hair And Light Blue Eyes , She Wears A Type Of Formal Shirt and pants , She Was Born Into a Middle Classed Family , Always Got By In The Harshest of times . She Trained Secretly in agility and acrobatics but always had the best eye in bow ability's and would sometimes get in trouble for climbing the roof's and such . She Always Wanted To Settle down with someone but never meet a true person she would like . Once She Gather'd Enough Coin She Would Try to explore as much she could!. She Now Wants To Wonder The Land And Make a decent living in World. The Story Comes To you The Creator (TheServer) And Though's She Meets

What is your Character's ambitions?:She Wants to settle down in the world she loves to do Acrobatics and agility Tests , She Loves The Wild For The Reason Of The Trees She Can Do Her Acrobatics on

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):http://i1232.photobucket.com/albums/ff372/mas0n99/NewSkin.png

I Hope This is ok :l

Other Information about your Character:She Can Be Fast , And some times flirty

Open-Response-Questions

Answer at least three out of five listed

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?: Koria Would take out her bow and quiver and load one arrow and then Yell At them And When They Turn around she fires the arrow at one of the mens chest hitting him , She Brings out a Small Dagger and runs at the other man dagger ready and then jump just enough to go over the man and land then stand the man in the back of the neck

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?: I Would Like some Iron Dagger and a couple of apples

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:She Takes the iron bars but leaves the gold sword cause she has no need for a sword

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:She Accepts The Offer But Asks Only For Foods , Some Coin , New Boots , And Two Iron Daggers

[Thu'um 530]

Denied, Please Re-Apply AFTER a 24 Hour Period.

Your Powergaming Definition is Incorrect.

You are leaning towards the correct concept, but I am not convinced you truly know the term powergaming. Overpowering your character is not the definition of "powergaming". Be specific with your definitions.

Your Biography incorporates little to no lore, also is a tad strange.

You mention 'The Server', I am rather confused why you are mentioning such strange concepts and ideals in your biography. Your biography should be about your character's life and how he/she got to Asulon. Re-write it, and implement some lore (Racial Aggression, Asulon, Existing cities/kingdoms) into your biography to ensure it is of good quality.

Your Open Response Questions Lack a great amount of detail and effort.

You did close to the minimum requirement 4/5 ORQ (Minimum -> 3/5). Not only this, your responses are either 1-2 sentences or perhaps a bit more, and lack detail. Use these responses to expand your character's personalities and ambitions to further develop your character, be creative, and these also should show no signs of metagaming or powergaming.

Your Open Response Question #1 Contains Evidence of Powergaming.

Please read upon the term Powergaming and remove the Powergaming in your first Response.

[Thu'um 530]

Moved to Denied Forum