2Nd Run

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Out-Of-Character

( I created a new account on the forum because I forgot the password to my old one )

Minecraft Account Name:Master_Archer

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Central time/ United States

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes I do , but I occasionally slip up.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I am just a teenager wanting to RP. If I have free time I mostly stay on the computer, which in turn gives me no social life. Therefore, I play video games allot.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Probably I will get on whenever I have the time, but giving a good estimate from 13-35 hours, unless special plans get in the way.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: I know the basics of roleplaying, like it means that you take on a different character. It also means taking on the lore of you character. To me it means becoming a part of a world where I am who I am not, and can take on the life of someone else. I very much enjoy the idea of roleplaying because it gives you a do over, where you choose what happens.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: Little to none, but have heard and know the basics of it from reading about it. If you count Skyrim then about twenty hours, but in Minecraft zero.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta-Gaming is the act of using out of universe knowledge to help your character in-game. For example if you knew someone was offline and then messed with their base. In short terms it means giving you an unfair advantage that only your person, not character should know then using it to your advantage.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:Power-Gaming is preforming something that is either out of possibility by your character or making it impossible for the opponent to have a chance to fight back. It is simply giving yourself an unfair advantage that would be impossible for example "Finwe Elanesse hits his target in the head from 1000 meters instantly killing him."

What do you expect this server will be like?: I literally have no idea with having no log time in Minecraft roleplaying servers.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: My friends, which ended up dying off.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes, to all the above.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes

How did you hear about us?: MC Forums

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:My link

Have you posted this application on our minecraft forum thread yet? If not, just finish it up on here and then copy + paste is over there. (http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-%E2%96%91%E2%96%92%E2%96%93-the-lord-of-the-craft-%E2%96%93%E2%96%92%E2%96%91-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r/:(

In-Character:

Character Name:Finwe Elanesse

What Race are you?:Elf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race:(

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.:(Finwe wasn't always so moody. He was born only 19 years ago in the deep woods with his three younger brothers and his father and mother. His family treated the forest with respect while taking from it. Along with any elf, he learned how to hunt. His father would take him out every morning to practice his shooting with his bow(which he carved). At first he hunted small things like black squirells, but now to keep his family with gold he is a bounty hunter.

As a bounty hunter he was well known as a good marksman. he won competitions and even got some girls. Then there was one faithful night. While travelling at the young age of 16 he was away from where he grew up and found himself in a little inn after a large bounty was finished. He was greeted in the middle of the night, by someone. He has no recollection of what happened only the strong memory of his hand being seriously injured, now he is a nomad travelling trying to get away from the tormenting fact that he will never be able to shoot as well as he could. Although he knew he could shoot again, no one else did.

What is your Character's ambitions?:To become a famous bowman and bounty hunter. To be respected and known as the deadliest bow in all of middle earth.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc:(His bow of course!

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Talking his way out of anything

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format:(

Other Information about your Character:none

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? He takes a second fires a shot missing, because of his hand. Then runs in the battle taking all the hits letting the halfling run.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?He looks at the stall and responds "thanks but no thanks."

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?With the promise of the tallest tales in exchange for food and ale.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: He immidetly tries to join, not for the money but for the reputation.

[Brokencrowe 111]

Denied.

You had me really impressed right up to the middle of the biography, when you made him a bounty hunter. It was a twist that made me raise an eyebrow. You don't show any lore related material in the biography either. It also needs some expansion, and please do not display any villainy. To be a villain you need a villain application, which you cannot apply for until after being a part of this server for one elvan week.

Your open response questions need expansion. Open repose questions show your mettle as a roleplayer and give us the first taste of how you will play your character. Please put more effort behind them!

You will be allowed to reapply in twenty four hours, if you have any questions regarding your application feel free to drop a PM in my inbox.

Good luck!

-Brokencrowe

[Brokencrowe 111]

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