Parsifal's Aplication

[parsifal 1]

Out-Of-Character

MinecraftAccount Name:

PARSIFALE

How old areyou?:

16

Time-Zone/Countryof Residence:

Belgium Eu west

Do you have agood grip on the English language/good grammar?:

I have the grip but not the grammar cuss I have dyslexia

Small 2-3Sentence Description of yourself:

: I’ve been told that I’m a cheer full guy and easy going and the rest I think you guys should figure out foryour self’s wen u meet me in game .

How much timecould you be on the server weekly?:

Every day for an hours or two more ifthere is an event or because I want to

What do youknow about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: itbuilding an new life in another world true out the actions that u do and the

Do you promiseto abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, andTeamspeak set Rules:

Yes I read them and I agree to them

How did youhear about us? Did someone refer you?:

online in search of an fun Rp server

Have youpreviously made an Application? If so could you link us to your lastApplication?:

Yes I’m trying to get on the server sinceSeptember 2011 I got the link of my recently made one but it was on the old format

Here is the link http://www.lordofthe...parsifal-aplly/

Have youposted this application on our minecraft forum thread yet? If not, just finishit up on here and then copy + paste is over there. (http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-%E2%96%91%E2%96%92%E2%96%93-the-lord-of-the-craft-%E2%96%93%E2%96%92%E2%96%91-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r/):[/color] il make it so

In-Character:

CharacterName:

Dorimar

What Race areyou?:

Dwarf

What Sub-Raceare you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Well I got 3 options and I think fatewill choose form me

Biography(Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history ofyour character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality,etc.):

Dorimaris an 4.9 feet tall dwarf who is 366 years old. He has an red beard tiedtogether at the end and wears an iron armor for in the mines. He has an ironhelmet at all times, because you never know what you can stumble upon in thedepths of the earth. I grew up in the Great Halls of Kal’Urguan named after thegreat dwarven master Urguan. My dad was an simple black smith and my mom didthe household chores so eventually I was forced to join a mining Group at theage of 16. My dad said the earlier you work and the more experience, thebetter. Later, my desire for the riches of the underworld lead me to a questgiven by my (uncle Mardir) from the mining group. Which used to tell me storiesabout Urguan and Iblees the daemon of evil. The quest brought me threw out thebasic parts of the mines of Kal’Urguan. when I reached the age of 100 I wantedto go to the deeper places of Kal’Urguan which I could not, so I continueddoing the normal mining until I was 250 years old and went in to the tradingbusiness to trade stuff and with the money I bought lots of gems to satisfy mygoal to go to the depth's of Kal’ Urguan witch i still wasn't able to go to sothat's one of my main goal's like exploring the world.

What is yourCharacter's ambitions?:

Rich’sof the depth’s

The lore behind the Daemons and Aenguls

Andbuilding the most impressive underground structures

What is yourcharacter’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):

The pickaxe it swings bluntly destroyingall in its path . but in the hands of a skilled builder u can carve and createthe most beautiful structures

What is one ofyour Character's most skilled talents? building underground structures’and Fighting off anything that endangers the structures’

A screenshotof your skin (must be in proper format):

my skin is also in the attachments

OtherInformation about your Character:

Nha the rest will develop as my pathcontinues

Open-Response-Questions

Whilsttraveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by twoarmed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does yourcharacter respond?

I ‘move closely towards the guards . I notice they haven’tnoticed me so I continue moving towards them. At one point one of the guardsturned around an looks around . my heart is beating really fast . I’m startingto sweat but I manage to calm down my nerves. When The guard focus his attentionon the Halfling again. I think this mychance to get away . so I choose the coward way so I run down the pathcontinuing my journey .

Your characterwanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressedman is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you andsays in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?"What is your character response?

I look at the well-dressed man .and askhim if about the quality of his goods . the man says that his goods are of royalquality . I look at the silk and touch it it feels soft and of good quality . soI bargained whit the well-dressed man and I bought two pairs of silk whichcloud be useful

Whilstwandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looksabandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a goldensword. How would your character respond?:

Dorimar slowly draws his axe and move’saround the small hut . and uses his building skills to decide the shape of thehut .Ahha hut made by a forest dwarf . the walls look like’s they have been overgrown by plants on purpose . that means it’s still inhabit by the forest dwarf .Sodorimar puts his axe back on his back and move’s on continuing his journey threwout the world of Asulon

Hungry andlost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled amongthe forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do yourespond?

Dorimar stumbles towards the trader. Ogff Traider can u help me I’ve been lost in the wilds .and I have lost track of time . but I’m not going to beg u for food .dorimarsearches in his belongs in the hope to find something of value . The trader said. no need my dwarf friend u will get some bread for free .Dorimar looks up at the trader and thanks him whit whole his heart.

You hear wordthat bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying.The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminatehem. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer theirsupport. How does your character act on this information?:[/color)

Dorimar walks to the crowd to seewho is volunteering. Agh are they kiddingme there going to send farmers and citizens to do a warrior’s job . a guard approaches’ dorimar and asks. Aye u look like u can hold a weapon. Are u interested in joining the towns force’s .u will get a nice reward .Dorimar reacts it’s going to be a blood bath putting up common people versus a scum . dorimar turns around an leave’s thet own .

hey i don’t knowwhy some words are stuck to each other it just happened when I pasted it in they aren’t spelling faults

[Haelphon 407]

Please reapply in 24 hours.

Your application was denied for the following:

We still need you to try in terms of spelling, look up words if you have to~

Use of abbreviations such as 'u' instead of 'you' is unacceptable~

You need to rephrase and complete some of your answers; they're confusing~

You're missing your Meta-Gaming and Power-Gaming definitions~

On the bright side, your ORQ's look good. Just go and fix up your app, get spelling help from a parent or whatever you wish to do. Everything else looks good. Best of luck~

[Haelphon 407]

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