Dafsr2's Submission

[dafsr2 4]

Minecraft Account Name: dafsr2

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Mountain Time Zone (MST), USA & Canada

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm an average 13 year old boy who is looking for a great minecraft server. I'm in all honors classes and unlike my friends, I don't flip out everytime I am killed. I also type fast and have a laggy computer so i may type oddly in chat at times.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I would say about 7 hours of the week and all weekend.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Roleplaying means to basically take a role of a character and play the character as if it were real life and you were actually there but, instead it is for fun not a real life experience.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I've played a couple of roleplaying games like, Fallout 3, Fallout New Vegas, Skyrim: The Elder Scrolls and GTA IV.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta-Gaming is basically out of game information that affect someone's in game decisions.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Well I hate to admitt this but, I don't know what Power-Gaming is sorry.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect it will be a fun faction server but, besides the part of the undead attacking and the nighttime monsters it will be a peaceful server.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: mc.sb-gaming.com, This server was a roleplaying/anarchy server and I left because everyone was hacking and duplicating it wasn't fair or fun.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes I have.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes I do.

How did you hear about us?: Well from Youtube, PetriDaGamerNerd's videos of your server made me want to join so bad.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: No, this is my first one.

In-Character:

Character Name:dafsr2

What Race are you?:Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): I was born in a simple farming village right at the foot of a mountain when they came. They came in waves and destroyed my village leaving all of the villagers dead but, somehow I hid under the floor and watched as my father fought to his last breath and died. I have always been scared sense that day and I promised my father as he let out his last breath that I would seek revenge.

I then grew up as a nomad traveling place to place then, at the age of 22 I set foot in the lands I swore to protect. I was always a loner, keeping my distance and always staying alert as I trusted no one. I later loosened up and began to fight for what i thought was rightfully mine to protect.

What is your Character's ambitions?:To become a well known warrior and mabye once become a prince, king or king/prince's guard.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): My character will never let his dad's old sword go.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? He is an excellent warrior at sword fighting and at archery.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/201/20120429215137.png/

Other Information about your Character: He doesn't take kindly to the undead.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? My character goes and charges the enemies from behind and stabs the first one in the back then continues on to sword fight the other robber.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? "I would like to see what you have for sale today."

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: I would first knock and see if anyone was there, if no one was there I'd take the stuff and walk away.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? I would most likely act friendly but when they turned their backs I would steal an apple or steak.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: I grab my sword and help with the attack but, instead of taking a reward i let justice be its own reward and walk away.

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[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

DENIED [X]

Put on PENDING [ ]

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

[[X's mark the parts you need to rectify.]]

Out of Character:

Missing Areas [ ]

Bad Information [ ]

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

-Insufficient Information in Metagaming Definition [ ]

-Insufficient Information in Powergaming Definition [X]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge of the World [X]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

-Fabricated Places/Large-Scale Events [ ]

-Unreal Scenarios [ ]

Bouts of Powergaming [ ]

Bouts of Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Answers [ ]

Character is Cliche [ ]

Requires a Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [X]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Plagiarized [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

Firstly, a character's name would not be dafsr2 in roleplay. Think of a creative human name such as Ollivander, Rolarn, or maybe Kaelan. This will be the name you will be known as in Asulon.

Secondly, I would like for you to restate the definition of Powergaming. Use the link below for a proper definition of the term. Then, restate it in your next application in your own words.

Finally, I would like for you to read the lore of Asulon/Aegis on the main Website/Wiki. Include bits and pieces of the read lore, such as being born from the kingdom of Oren, or describe how the transition to Asulon affected you character.

Good luck on your next application~

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to

my account!

<3

You come to Aegis to Develop a Character, not have one Developed already

Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before.

Don't post another application in a period of two (2) days. It ruins our

organisation methods.

Definition of Metagaming and Powergaming : http://sm-rp.forumotion.com/t32-powergaming-metagaming-ic-and-ooc

[Taiga 764]

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