Wizarddude's Application

[Kardel 1054]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: Ziko99

How old are you?: 15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Albania, Tirana, Time zone: UTC/GMT +2 hours

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I have lived in America for most of my life and rarely (if ever) make any grammar mistakes.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am really easy to make friends with and do not disturb others. In my free time, i play basketball, swim, play piano, and play Minecraft. If it happens that I AM threatened, I will not stay without taking action.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 12 hours minimum , only if my swimming practice and piano practice stop me.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Roleplaying is the act of interpreting a given character, such as one from a movie or a book.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I play World of Warcraft on the Argent Dawn Role Playing server.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta-Gaming is any out of character action made by a player's character.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is: Power-Gaming is overpowering a character with the aim of maximising the power the player wields in the game world by way of their character. It usually makes the game boring when someone does this.

What do you expect this server will be like?:I expect this server to be a serious role playing server packed with fun and adventure.

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What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have never played on a Minecraft RP server but the servers i have played on (such as ObsidianCraft and Shadowraze) were boring and had way to much building restrictions.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes, I have.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes, I do.

How did you hear about us?: When watching OMFGCata talk aboit you guys on Youtube.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

In-Character: NO, this is my first.

Character Name: Mendahiv

What Race are you?: Half-Elf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): None

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

As a child, Mindahiv's parents abandoned him because they could not take care of him. Ever since, he wondered the streets of countless cities until he was picked up by a group of bandits, who taught him how to use a blade and how to steal. He helped them rob rich houses and raid villages. Everything was going well until Mindahiv found out that he was just being used by them to do all the dirty work and that they were soon going to turn him in and make a profit from him. On the night before they were going to turn him in, he sneaked into their leader's tent and killed him, using his blood to write a note to the guards on where to find the bandits. Before sunrise, he had already escaped the encampment and was making his way to nowhere.

Just by sheer luck, he stumbled across a barrow-whigh's layer and picked up a golden blade which he thought would make him some money. After escaping and nearly getting killed by the barrow-whigh, he went to Gondor to check how much the blade was worth. When he brought it to Gondor, he found out that it was no ordinary blade, but it was Shadeslayer, blade of one of the great kings of Gondor, and that this blade was said to only be found by one who was meant to wield it. He has wielded this blade ever since.

Description: Mindahiv is a tall, broad shouldered man. He has dark, long hair that is often hidden by his hood. He does not speak much and only takes action when necessary. Most of the time he is seen wandering around the Shire, Rivendell, and rarely Gondor. He has some skill with the bow and is almost unbeatable when it comes to a sword duel.

What is your Character's ambitions?: To find the ultimate adventure.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): The Sword and Bow.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?: He wields the sword very well and knows how to use a bow. Another thing he is very good at is using herbs to cure wounds.

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

Other Information about your Character: Very Sneaky

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Me: Excuse Me?

Bandits: What!?

Me: You should leave that halfling alone and pick on someone your own size.

Bandit: *Turns around smiling* Oh yeah? *Draws sword* Well, how about i pick on you?

Me: Trust me, that is not a good idea. *Draws Shadeslayer, it glows blue* Unless you do not value your lives, you should leave this nice man alone.

Bandit: *Suddenly looks scared, withdraws his sword and frowns in disgust* I dont think you know what you got there, but i'll let you slide this time! *Runs away in fear*

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

Mindahiv: Nothing my kind sire, if you could just point me to an inn it would be nice though.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:

Mindahiv would steal the items and run away quickly, leaving his singature "M" scratched onto the hut's wall.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

Mindahiv: Please, kind sire, would you spare a crumb of your bread for me.

Merchant: Sure, for the right price.

Mindahiv: Please kind sire, i can only offer you labor in return, i have no coins on me.

Merchant: Then scram! *Draws a dagger and points it at Mindahiv* I am a merchant and take no pitty on a lazy bum such as you.

Mindahiv: Sorry for disturbing you sir. *Merchant turns away* Mindahiv mutters: You are going to be sorry for this old man!

During the night, Mindahiv sneaks in the merchant's tent and steals everything that he has with him, leaving an "M" scratched into the merchant's shop's sign.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:

Mindahiv sets up traps among the trees then draws the bandits in. They stumble upon the traps and get caught in them. Mindahiv points and laughs at them as they hang upside down from the trees.

[Thu'um 530]

Your Application has been...

DENIED [X]

Put on PENDING [ ]

Reason(s) Why Your Application Was Denied:

[[X's mark the parts you need to rectify.]]

Out of Character:

Missing Areas [ ]

Bad Information [X]

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

-Insufficient Information in Metagaming Definition [ ]

-Insufficient Information in Powergaming Definition [X]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [X]

Insufficient Knowledge of the World [X]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

-Open Response Questions are Lacking [X]

-Fabricated Places/Large-Scale Events [ ]

-Unreal Scenarios [X]

Bouts of Powergaming [X]

Bouts of Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Answers [ ]

Character is Cliche [X]

Requires a Villain Application [X]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [X]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [X]

Plagiarized [X]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [X]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

Your application all around has a few bit of flaws, I'll elaborate a bit upon the reasons marked above, but will not fully disclose and explain everything right here.

Your character possesses the ability to "steal", this is not possible without a Villain Application-- furthermore, you must remove all villainry from your application.

[Thu'um 530]

Moved to Denied Forum