Savlon's Application

[savlon1000 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:savlon1000

How old are you?:14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:London

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Well,my grammar is not bad but its not good when i say that i mean spelling mistakes are probably going to happen but yes good grip on English and OK grammar.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

i am i person who likes playing guitar and dose not troll because that for idiots who have problems i like minecraft allot so i would have a great time on the server.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

well 17 hours a week because i have a lot of homework to do but a long time to do it.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Roleplaying (in my opinion) means using your imagination, and all the resources at hand to create an awesome experience for you and people arround you and u can be who ever you want to be like a raider or a king.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

not much i don't relay play role playing servers/games but i have had some expediences like i have a thing on role playing games too robe all the stuff i can but don't because its just wrong too and i do play 1 minecraft role play server but it shut down it was not amazing but you could say it was a role play experience

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Meta-gaming is when you use out of character info in character like if i was on your server and said ''i had a great dinner last night'' that would be meta-gaming .

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:

power-gaming for example is when you stab someone puling out the players heart not giving them a chance to do anything.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I think it will be fun with some nice buildings/towns and nice people i expect to see my friends on there that would be nice and get raided that would be fun but I hope it'll be a great RP experience.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

My first role play server was just full of trolls who just came on too troll and when they did not people just did not role play and talk about the park they went to last night a '12 o'clock' then i went to fined so good role play server but they where all bad so i gave up played skyrim for 6 weeks and then i came here.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

yes, I did read them and I do understand

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:I do promise to go by the rules.

How did you hear about us? Did someone refer you?:

a friend he is emo6000 he said it good just not for me so i looked for u and well now im here.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:Minecraft Account Name:its the one in brackets it is long.

savlon1000.)

How old are you?:

I am 14.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

I live in London.

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Well,my grammar is not bad but its not good when i say that i mean spelling mistakes are probably going to happen but yes good grip on English and OK grammar.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

i am i person who likes playing guitar and dose not troll because that for idiots who have problems i like minecraft allot so i would have a great time on the server.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

well 17 hours a week because i have a lot of homework to do but a long time to do it.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

Roleplaying (in my opinion) means using your imagination, and all the resources at hand to create an awesome experience for you and people arround you and u can be who ever you want to be like a raider or a king.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

not much i don't relay play role playing servers/games but i have had some expediences like i have a thing on role playing games too robe all the stuff i can but don't because its just wrong too and i do play 1 minecraft role play server but it shut down it was not amazing but you could say it was a role play experience

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

Meta-gaming is when you use out of character info in character like if i was on your server and said ''i had a great dinner last night'' that would be meta-gaming .

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Gaming is:

power-gaming for example is when you stab someone puling out the players heart not giving them a chance to do anything.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I think it will be fun with some nice buildings/towns and nice people i expect to see my friends on there that would be nice and get raided that would be fun but I hope it'll be a great RP experience.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

My first role play server was just full of trolls who just came on too troll and when they did not people just did not role play and talk about the park they went to last night a '12 o'clock' then i went to fined so good role play server but they where all bad so i gave up played skyrim for 6 weeks and then i came here.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

yes, I did read them and I do understand.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

I do promise to go by the rules.

How did you hear about us?:

a friend he is emo6000 he said it good just not for me so i looked for u and well now im here.

In-Character:

Character, biography, ambitions, tool:

he is a dark elf.

he was living in a cave homeless he knew how to hunt and made a bow out of a tree stick and lived in the cave for one more year before he went to search for food and got lost in the woods and came across

a villa with a man being raided by bandits so he got his bow and shot them in the nee so the would run of he went to check on the man to see if he was all right and the where both an elf so they talked and hi said to live with him in his villa so he did and got a diamond bow from his new dad on his 15 birthday.He got a place in hunters school and lived there for 1 year. When he got back his dad's house

was in a mess wood on the floor his work massed up as he went to his room a blood trail went in he was hoping it was not just not his....it was his dad was there laying with a dagger in his chest he fell to his nee's crying out ''why...WHY'' that day he said to himself he will track down the person who did this and make sure they would suffer his first trip sky-haven. at the sky-haven palace he went to a lady called Marendie she had a lot of leads with bandits,robbers and assassins he met her at hunters school she told him she would be here if he needs help.She was very nice but evil she said after he told her what happened ''i think i know the man, he lives in black forest but its dangerous'' he ran out of there with no answer he toke a house and rode away.At black forest he looked a scouted it all out he saw a cabin witch in side was a man this must of be the man he got his bow out but just as he was going to shoot a tiger came and attack him he hit it with the bow getting it of him he got a arrow and it hit right in the eye the man heard and came to see what it was he saw savlon and ran as he tried to run he shoot him in the leg making him trip he savlon said in a angry tone'' you killed him.. why WHY ANSWER ME!'' he said back'' killed him and now I kill you''got a dagger and almost stabbed him

he moved away and savlon shoot him right in the face dead in 1 shot with nowhere to go savlon went back home and just got on the floor and went to sleep.The next day he went to adventurer and got to a kingdom thats the day he started his new life in the kingdom the kingdom's name asulon.

Comments: i might get a villain app but first i want to see if i get on the server.i hope its better than last time.) that's the end of my old app

Have you posted this application on our minecraft forum thread yet? If not, just finish it up on here and then copy + paste is over there:yes i have but only 3 or 2

In-Character:

Character Name:Ker_main

What Race are you?:dark elf

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):not have one

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):he was living in a cave homeless becuse his mum died giving birth and his dad was a bandit. he knew how to hunt and made a bow out of a tree stick and lived in the cave for one more year before he went to search for food and got lost in the woods and came across

a villa with a man being raided by bandits so he got his bow and shot them in the nee so the would run of he went to check on the man to see if he was all right and the where both an elf so they talked and hi said to live with him in his villa so he did and got a diamond bow from his new dad on his 15 birthday.He got a place in hunters school and lived there for 1 year. When he got back his dad's house

was in a mess, wood on the floor, his work massed up as he went to his room a blood trail went in to his dads room. he was hoping it was not just not his....it was his dad was there laying with a dagger in his chest he fell to his nee's crying out ''why...WHY'' that day he said to himself he will track down the person who did this and make sure they would suffer. his first trip sky-haven. At the sky-haven palace he went to a lady called Marendie she had a lot of leads with bandits,robbers and assassins he met her at hunters school she told him she would be here if he needs help.She was very nice but evil ,she said after he told her what happened ''i think i know the man, he lives in black forest but its dangerous'' he ran out of there with no answer he toke a hours and rode away.At black forest he looked a scouted it all out he saw a cabin witch in side was a man this must of be the man he got his bow out but just as he was going to shoot a tiger came and attack him he hit it with the bow getting it of him he got a arrow and it hit right in the eye .The man heard and came to see what it was he saw savlon and ran as he tried to run he shoot him in the leg making him trip up, savlon said in a angry tone'' you killed him.. why WHY ANSWER ME!'' he said back'' killed him and now I kill you''got a dagger and almost stabbed him

he moved away and savlon shoot him right in the face dead in 1 shot with nowhere to go savlon went back home and just got on the floor and went to cryed .The next day he went to adventurer and got to a kingdom thats the day he started his new life in the kingdom the kingdom's name asulon.

What is your Character's ambitions?:he likes hunting

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): a bow

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?: archery

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format):

http://s1155.photobucket.com/albums/p549/s4vlon/?action=view&current=2012-05-10_143204.png

http://s1155.photobucket.com/albums/p549/s4vlon/?action=view&current=2012-05-10_143223.png

Other Information about your Character:not much only that he is not a assassin the last person got confused and thought he was an assassin but yes that's it

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?:I would go and help warrios intimadate the halfling to give use goled and his items on him get my bow and black mail him i may kill him.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?: '' yes can i have piece of string my bow snapped and i need some string to fix it''. ''i was out hinting when a bandit came and attacked me i blocked his attack with my bow then ran ,and as you can it did a lot of damage .

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:i would take it all loot the place and then run of with it all and i would keep the sword and sell the iron.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?:'' yes hello have you got any food i'm hungry and cant get back home i was out hunting for food then i got lost now i need food or i will starve to death''.

]You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:i would offer to help but i would to have more money then the others and tell the guard that i can give info if he gives me more money .

comments: i hopefully will get a villain app soon but this is my 3 or 4 app so lets hope i can even get in.

[Goliath 384]

Denied.

Please, before you post an application, reread and iron out any spelling mistakes you see, to the best of your ability. It seems to me that this application has been rushed and has not been proof read, reflected in the repeated questions and messy format. Now, I will highlight the areas you would seriously need to tackle and change accordingly.

Meta and PowerGaming definitions-

Your MetaGaming definition is somewhat correct yet poorly displayed. We see MetaGaming as an advantage to individuals, not just commenting on a nice dinner the previous night. You will need to use the correct definition with appropriate examples. Try to make it a little more than a line or two. As for the PowerGaming definition, is, again vaguely correct, but there are other definitions for it and again, your example isn't the best one to use.

Biography-

Your biography is unloreful, please read over the servers lore. It shows hints of villainy, for example killing your fathers killer. Seeing as you set out purely to kill him, and he did not throw the first blow, you would need a villain application, however, you could only apply to become a villain after 1 week of acceptance so please seriously reconsider your character. Also, tigers are infact unloreful, and if they were, your biography isn't what I'd consider realistic.

Your ORQs are far too short.

I would consider completely revamping this application to have a chance of acceptance.

If you have any questions, feel free to PM me.

Please reapply in at least 24 hours after denial.

[Goliath 384]

Moved to Denied Forum