Application

[Bradster 12]

Out of Character:

Minecraft Account Name:

-My Minecraft account name is: Bradster103

How old are you?

-My age is 12

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

-My time zone is Pacific Standard time(Canada, British Columbia)

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?

-I can speak English very fluently

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

-I would like to join the "Lord of Craft" because I always enjoy Role playing games. I personal enjoy Minecraft because you can get a nice view of making interesting buildings, and battling it out with other city's and just have fun. One of the reason I like Rope playing games is because you can't have noob's running around not knowing what to do wasting their self not even knowing what to do that's why I want to join.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?

-I can laying any time all I want unless on vacation.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:

-What Role playing is to me, is having fun with the fun with the game being realistic, sinking in water with armour on, that would be my definition of Role playing, being a true medieval warrior.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:

-My experience in Role playing is playing some servers on minecraft where it's basicly realistic, and also playing a bit of Skyrim.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:

-I don't know much but what I have read is something like one character has a advantage over another example: You tell your friend on Skype where this thing is.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:

-Power Emoting is when one character is basicly being a god and not giving the other character a chance to Role play.

What do you expect this server will be like?

-From what my friend has told me and what I expect is basicly a real nice resistic game of the medival ages but with creature and battling city's.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

-I have played on faction servers on minecraft but I leave them because people are fooling around and it's not that fun. Besides what I wish there was is basicly this server with battling city's all different sides of a Fable.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

-I have read the Rules (Law's and Guidelines) and yes I have agreed to them.( They are easy to follow unless your a complete tool)

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:

-Yes I will follow all sets of Rules.

How did you hear about us?:

-I heard about this server from my friend tim0717.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:

- This is my second application. Link to last: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/61560-application/page__p__481538__fromsearch__1#entry481538

In Character:

Character Name:

-My In-Game character Name would be: Belak

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!)

-Dwarf

What Sub-Race are you?

-N/A

Biography

-Bio- My character is a Dwarf his parents died and he is the only one left in his family. He wanders the empty caves searching for anything to find: food, ores, anything to get gold for eat. He makes his way above ground to a Human city trying to get away from his family's cave and away from most Dwarf's, to not remember much of his family. His age is about 18 (Human years not Dwarf years.) He earns his trust with several humans. He battles along side of some city's helping the king.

His appearance he is a taller Dwarf, short black hair, blue eyes, never takes his armour off. He his caring to his friends but his un-helping to his foes. He is stubborn to people he doesn't trust. It his hard to get his trust. He is yet very loyally to his king and friends. He will only risk his life for only few he knows. He is sometimes a coward but has courage other days.

What are your Character's ambitions?:

-His goal(ambition) is to be a warrior that can deal deadly strikes to his foes and succeed without dying.

What is your character’s favorite tool?

-His favourite tool would be a sword.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?

-My characters talent is medical skills mining and a bit in sword fighting.

A screenshot of your skin

-Skin- Front-http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/9875/20120705174214.png -Back-http://img846.imageshack.us/img846/8254/20120705174226.png

Other Information about your Character

-Other Information about my character is just a basic Dwarf, and he is afraid of Endermen, he also dislikes water but can manage barely to get through it. He is also not afraid of caves at all.

Open-Response-Questions:

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

-If a halfling is being robbed I would: First see on what type of weapon and armour they have. If there is some sort of building or tree I can hide be-hide nicely, I would sneak up be-hide him and hit him but hopefully he will think is friend hit him and not me, so while the two are fighting it out I save the halfline and once there's one bandit left I quick kill him. If there isn't a building I would run up to them both hit one and make it so that there in a line and I'm only hitting one. After I kill them off I would give the halfling it's stuff back.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?

- I would response to " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" asking him if he knows any nice Tavern to stay in for the night, and ask him what he has for sale.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?

-If I stumble upon a chest I would search around the hut and look if anyone is there and ask them if I can have it, if I can't find anyone I would walk away.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?

-If they greet me nicely in I would ask them for any extra supply's that I can have like: food, water, clothes, a extra bed to rest in.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?

-My character would help out the guards as best he can to defeat the bandits outside there. I would not want the reward but just a simple thanks.

Anything else you would like to say?:

-One thing I want to say is that this took a long time...... Now it was eay the second time just putting the questions in...

P.S. I have an idea for Bandits you should put a pumpkin on your head for a mask!

[Cappy 1599]

Reasons:

• Your role-playing definition is incorrect and needs to be expanded.
  
• Your metagaming definition needs to be expanded.
  
• Your powergaming definition needs to be expanded.
  
• Your biography needs to be longer and expanded to explain some of your other answers. For example, why does he want to be a great warrior when your bio says nothing of any combat training whatsoever? Where did your character obtain his medicinal skills.
  
• You need to include more server lore in your biography. Show us that you are at least a little familiar with the places and major events of the world. You can research the lore on our wiki here.
  
• Your skin could use more detail.
  
• Your Open Response Questions need to be expanded. They are required to be at least one paragraph, and written in full role-play. Some ways to expand on them would be to explain in more detail what your character does, and also explain why they do it, and "what's going through their head" at the moment. You should also include both detailed actions and dialogue in your answers. In addition, do not use things like "If". You are narrating an encounter, not listing the possibilities.
  
• Your answer to the first Open Response Questions is a little confusing. How would one bandit think his friend hit him if you hit him from behind?
  
• Did not use the correct formatting.
  

Please use the correct formatting in your next application as it makes the application significantly easier to read. You can do that by finding the application format here, and copying everything inside the white box. Then paste it somewhere, and begin filling in your answers outside the tags, like so:

[b][color="#add8e6"]Minecraft Account Name:[/color][/b] <Your answer here>

Do not change the application format in any way.

If you have any queries relating to this application, please do not hesitate to PM me on the forums!

I'm not that scary and usually don't bite.

You may reapply in 24 hours from the time of this post.

Why not browse the forums or read up on some helpful guides while you wait?

[Cappy 1599]

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