Deadlyspacepig's Character Application

[DeadlySpacePig 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:deadlyspacepig

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Canada,Ontario,Toronto

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Good enough not the best at times but good usually.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I am a fun and outgoing person who loves various nerdy activities.For example Magic The Gathering,Dungeons And Dragons,Video games,Etc.I also like other more active activities such as track and field,break-dancing,soccer,etc.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:Every other day,Sometimes Daily depends on how busy i am but usually i can get on the server for a decent amount of time.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:Roleplaying is being your own character,Acting a role of a character that you wouldn't be in real life.Acting with your imagination,making a story for yourself.For example i'm Ogruk the orc druid who practices nature magic to protect the great magic tree of souls.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:I play dungeons and dragons every other week with my friends and i go to a dungeons and dragons camp with my friends.Also i am currently learning the ropes of becoming a dungeon master to create amazing stories for my friends.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:Meta-Gaming is Gaining out of game knowledge,Knowing things that your character shouldn't know,etc.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:Power-Gaming is Forcing actions on another character,not giving the other player a chance to react to a emote you did.

What do you expect this server will be like?:A fun roleplaying server where i will get to roll out my characters story and lead him to adventure,glory and newly found allies.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I left a server named darkcraft,a normal survival server because me and my friends stopped playing.it was because we got bored of playing normal minecraft survival server.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes,I have read the rules in great depth

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:Yes i do

How did you hear about us?: I used google search to look for a good roleplaying server to play on and it said 1# roleplaying server so I decided to give it a try.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:I have made a application before but it was quite a while ago and i don't have the link anymore.

In-Character

Character Name:Ralof Nightshade

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):N/A

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

Age:23

Personality:Charismatic,Devious,Mischievous.

Appearance:Black Hair,Dark Brown Eyes,Medium Sized Body

Gender:Boy

Family: Mother:Elizabeth Pine,Father:Desmond Nightshade,Sister:Ramona Nightshade,Brother:Cornelius Nightshade

History: Ralof was born like any other human commoner in aegis he grew up in a medium sized house in the human city with a normal family and 2 siblings.Almost everyone had a normal life,some grew up to be merchants,blacksmiths,guards,etc.Ralof didn't want to be like that.Ralof wanted to be different from others,He wanted to have his own style and stand out from the regular people.He didint quite know how to do it yet though.Everyday he would think to himself how he could be different and one day he found it.Ralof wanted to be a clever spell-casting wizard.Not just any type of wizard though.He wanted to be a warlock and control dark magic.

Many people laughed at him and said he was crazy,Ralof didn't care.At the age of 15 everyday after school he would secretly go to a hidden area in a cave to train dark arts with a warlock trainer. Ralof's trainer's name was Gammon Magicka,He taught Ralof every spell he knows now.At the age of 18 Gammon decided Ralof knew enough about the dark arts and decided to train him in alchemy. After 2 years he had learned a fair bit about alchemy. Soon enough Ralof said goodbye to his two siblings his loving mother and father and his warlock trainer Gammon Magicka.He used his alchemy skills to become a alchemists assistant and he made a decent amount of money for a healthy and happy home.3 Years later he remembered that he wanted to be different and stand out so he quit his job knowing that he must reach his goal.He decided to try to expand his knowledge of what he knows about aegis and start a new adventure. Before he goes his old friend Gammon Magicka says to him "I want you to have my staff use it with pride and glory".Ralof thanked him took the staff and went off. That was the start of his adventure into the wide world of Aegis.

What are your Character's ambitions?:Learning more about Dark Magic and alchemy. Expanding his knowledge of the world.Standing out from regular people making a name for himself.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):Warlock's Staff

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? Dark Magic

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):

Other Information about your Character:He is known to have spells fail at times.Example would be blowing himself up with a shadow bolt.

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?I turn my head to the alchemy ingredients.I ask him for herbs and other ingredients.I bargain with him and say "I will buy the herbs and ingredients for a much higher price if you can throw in a magic artifact".If he refuses I take my coin bag and leave slowly to see if he changes his mind.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?:I would check the hut for traps,You can never trust a random small abandoned shack.If there are no traps I would proceed to take the iron bars and gold sword and sell it to a merchant for good money.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?I ask for food and directions to civilization.If they refuse or become aggressive i attempt to cast a charm spell on their leader.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:Ralof would join them as long as the reward is nice enough and he could get a fair bit of magic practice on the attacking bandits.Ralof would attempt to hamper or weaken the bandits with his dark magic.

Anything else you would like to say?:Nope i'm done I hope you accept me thank you :)

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Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied [Correct the X'ed Areas]:

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-Fabricated Large-Scale Events [ ]

Incorrect Lore [ ]

Power/Metagaming [ ]

Contradicting Statements [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Villain Application Needed [x]

Incorrect Definitions of Power-emoting [ ]

Incorrect Definitions of Metagaming [ ]

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Other Comments: Please note that as an applicant you cannot preform any magic of any kind.

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