Indian09's Second Application

[Indian09 0]

Hello Lord of the Craft This is My Second Application

Thank you for your time and consideration once again.

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: Indian09.

How old are you?: I am 13 years old, soon to be 14.

Time-zone/Country of Residence: Eastern Central/ USA

Do you have a good grip on the English language/ good grammar?: I do for the most part but there is still alot of words I forget or I don't know how to spell.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of Yourself: Hello there Lord of the Craft my name is Ian and I am into all different kinds of sports. I play Baseball, maybe Football soon, and I used to play Soccer. I also like to play video games during my free time, one of them happens to be Minecraft.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I could be on the server about 8 hours a week usually.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: I know that everybody in the world does roleplaying at somepoint. Roleplaying is acting in a certain role, we use roleplaying in our everyday lives.

What experience have you had in roleplaying, if any?: I have had experience in middle age roleplaying alot and that is the background from what I come from. I play lots of Skyrim and Oblivion and those are based off those times. I roleplay with sword fights and bartering things like that is how I roleplay.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-gaming is: Meta-gaming means to learn information unrealistically and not learning it in person. For example "Kevin knew there was going to be a dreadful storm the next day" that would be an act of Meta-gaming. Here is an example of not using Meta-gaming "Kevin heard on the news that there was going to be a horrible storm tomorrow".

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is: Power-Emoting is where there is no struggle or attempt to do anything it just happens, then the next event etc. So you have to play as if it was real life.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I think the server will be a server full of adventures and mysteries, and those are my two types of genres so to me I think this server will be amazing, interesting, and challenging.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played on all different kinds of pvp servers from hardcore to build an empire. I have left them because they stopped hosting the server or everybody left it and only me and the owner would be the ones on.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes I have read, understood, and agreed to all the rules. To show that I am trustworthy I will post a rule and tell my opinion of it. "No use of hacked or modified clients that give you an unfair advantage such as X-raying and Flying." I totally love this rule I would hate to be attacking another Lord of the Craft player then all of a sudden they are about to die then they fly 20 feet in the air and shoot arrows down at me. So I wanted to say that was a good rule to pick.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes I do promise to abide to the said rules and laws.

How did you hear about us?: I heard about you on www.planetminecraft.com

Have you previously made an application? If so could you link us to your last application?: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/63370-indian09s-application-1/page__p__494844__hl__indian09__fromsearch__1#entry494844

In-Character

Character Name: Orvin Zarroc

What Race are you?: I am a Wood Elf

What Sub-race are you?: I don't have one my parents were both Wood Elves

Biography: I am now 40 in elf years but this is my most important moment in life. The sun was just rising over the horizon and me and my parents were out of energy, we had traveled all day and night. We were going to set camp in about 10 more miles, we had seen a sign 5 miles back that said "100 more miles until you reach the Cloud Temple". We were coming from our hometown, we had decided to go see how spectacular this is supposed to be according to every human in Asulon. We all climbed in a tree and set up our beds and fell asleep in a matter of seconds, we were awake by noon and were all well rested. I was about 6 at the time my father helped teach me the ways of the bow everytime we stopped, which wasn't alot but I was still making alot of progress. "Don't think about anything but you and your target" he would always say to me, I got my strong arm and keen scences from him. I got my pure maple skin from my mother, and my surprisingly dark brown hair from her also.

I was shooting my targets when I heard my mother scream my name, I then ran to her for whatever reason she needed me and there were bandits tieing them up. They were dreaded Dwarves I looked at my father and we got eachothers eye contact and I knew what I had to do. I started to climb a tree halfway up one of the dwarves saw me and tried to warn the leader but he was drunk as most dwarves usually are, so he didn't pay attention to his party member. The member then tried to strung a bow and shoot me but I was already up and hidden in the trees. He tried searching for me but I struck him in the chest with an arrow first. The party leader then came to his scences and got all of the party to look for me with their weapons drawn, but first they turned to my parents and killed them both with there axe. Right before they died my mother said "Orvin always remember we love you and will always be with you.". I started to tear up Then my father said "Don't forget to practice that archery!" he said with a twinkle in his eye then the dwarves sliced through their necks. "NO" I shouted and was so fast with my aim I got both the dwarves who had just killed my parents within 3 seconds!

All that was left was the party leader "Big mistake" I said, then aimed carefully and shot him square in the back of the head. I jumped down from the tree and ran to my parents bodys, they were both definitely dead I gave them a proper burial then threw the dwarves in the trees. I packed up the rest of all the things and headed my way back home. On the way back home I thought about my new personality from that event, I went from a calm-minded kid to a somewhat calm-minded man and crazy mad when I get angry.

What is your Character's ambitions?: I plan to make a small elf town when I grow up and become an amazing farmer. Hopefully when I am on my adventures I will bring some people along with me to start the town.

What is your character's favorite tool?: My favorite tool is the bow because my father taught me all about the way of the bow. I almost saved his life with it but I didn't have enough training. I love it so much because I can take out enemies from short distance, to medium, to long.

What is one of your Character's most skilled talent?: I have incredible speed, I can go from just standing there to 20 miles in a matter of 10 seconds. I have this power because all elves get amazing speed when they grow up. I got extra speed because I have ran my whole life wherever I go unless it's in the same building.

A screenshot of your skin:

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? "HEY stop it!" I shout, trying to get the soldiers away from him. The guard turned to me and raised his sword, I stood there waiting and watching. He struck down I dodged it to the side and tryed to grip his hand, I got a hold of it and twisted it. The guard then dropped the sword and sat there holding his wrist in agonizing yells. I fumbled for the sword on the ground as it bounced, I finally grabbed it and lifted it uneasily from its weight. The second guard charged me, as this was happening the little halfling ran into the ally, I turned back onto the guard he tryed to slice at me but I was much faster than him, yet he still skimmed my arm but it was only a little scratch. When he was done attacking I took my turn I charged him fast he was stunned at how fast I was, I then took that oppurtunity to strike him on the chest with the hilt of my sword. He fell on the ground I then realized what I had done I dropped the sword on the ground and fled the Cloud Temple to never return.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? "I'll take a look at your traveling boots." I say interested in what he has to offer. "Here they are!" the clerk said surprisingly very happy, there was one leather pair that caught my eye. "How much are those right there?" I ask, "Those are 60 minas." he exclaimes. "I'll take that pair" I say questioning myself if this will be worth it. "Ok here they are! thank you for your time, come again!", "I will keep that in mind." I say as I walk off wearing my new comfortable traveling boots. That was totally worth it I say in my head.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: "Hmmm why would someone leave these two perfectly good tools lying around? I think in my head, "I suppose I will wait a day and come back and if no one has claimed them I shall take them for myself" I say smiling with my good idea. As I am about to leave I hear something in the woods I stepback and pull out the golden sword and wait for the creature to enter. It is only my old friend Arrick from school. I laugh as I out away the sword and give him a handshake, " What ye be doing out here Orvin?" I shrug " Just exploring and found this hut and found out it is yours." " Yes well you need to go back now for I am very busy." "Ok see you around." I say and head home through the woods

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? "Hello do you have a place where I can eat and rest?" I ask very weary, one old woman says "I have extra room in her tent.". "Thank you." I say, she says "It is not free thought 20 minas per a night." "That is fine with me thank you for awaring me about the situation." I say gratefully, I automatically ask "Can I rest now?". "Yes but pay me now." she pronounces, "Ok here you go." I say handing over the coins. She shows me where I can sleep moving things out of the way for me, "Thank you again." I say, she just nods and then leaves. I fall asleep instantly and as always wake up before everyone I roll up the bed and I put it in the corner of the tent. Then I head off in search to find home, with some of the food I got from the woman.

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?: "I WILL HELP YOU!" I shout over the crowd, the crowd immediatly goes silent. The party leader looks at me "Did you say that you would help me and these men?" he asks shocked, "Yes I did my name is Orvin Zarroc and I pledge to help you until they all leave or are dead." The leader is now happy and has a smile on his face "Well then lets get you some armor and a weapon and we'll go!" he says loud enough for everyone to hear, the crowd goes wild and chant my name "ORVIN, ORVIN, ORVIN!". The leader gives me a helmet and chestplate then we go off outside the walls of the town to confront the bandits. "Well well well if it is old Captain Baron haven't seen you since last month!" says what seems to be the head bandit with a smirk on his face. "Leave this town in peace, leave right now, or die your choice Henry!". All the bandits laugh Henry says "Why don't we fight and see who gets the town!", I could see the captain struggling with the situation "Fine then lets fight!". The bandits charged and hollered we stood our ground and waited for them to get close, I had a bow as always and I fired an arrow in one guys chest and he fell of his horse. The captain had killed one guy dodging and parrying with excellent swordsmanship, and the other guys had killed one guy there was only one guy left Henry. "Ok Captain you win let me be." said Henry trembling and trying to run away, "As you wish but never return." said Baron then Henry ran away. We went back into town and everybody cheered everybody in the partys name, I was last and my reward was a Diamond sword! "Thank you but I have to go now good luck with anymore bandit problems." I said, "Thanks to you I don't think there will be anmore attacks well good luck with your adventures!" Captain Baron said. Then I was offon my adventures once again.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Incorrect Power-Emoting definition. You can find more information on the forums and wiki. Be sure to write it in your own words.

Your bio displays powergaming. You state your character to be a six-year-old - this is extremely young for an Elf. Your character 'got both the dwarves who had just killed my parents within 3 seconds!' and then 'aimed carefully and shot [the bandit leader] square in the back of the head.' There is no way a six-year-old Elf could dispatch three bandits this easily.

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[everblue2er101 906]

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