My 4Th Application

[zachzilla1211 0]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name:Zachzilla1211

How old are you?:12 years of age.

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Central

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Believe I do.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I am very spontaneous. I tend to be greedy when it comes to treasure and things. I am generous and am willing to do the right thing.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:14 to 15 hours maybe more maybe less.

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you:To act as and pretty much be a character you imagined. To be a hero a villian, just be who you want to be (Except for the fact it is fantasy and not real life.) You give a character a back story and make the character more interesting.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?:Not much only games like Skyrim and Oblivion

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is:Being out of character and saying something you know and not your character or going around and purpisly leveling one skill.

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is:Doing something to someone without them being able to react, for example "A elf shoots a dwarf in the back of the head and kills him." What you should do would be "A elf shoots at a dwarf and misses.

What do you expect this server will be like?:A lot better than the other servers I have played on. The others where badly greifed.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:It was a were bad faction servers. The admins terrorized the other players sometimes.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes I have.

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:Yes I promise.

How did you hear about us?:I saw a video by petri and it looked cool.

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?:Yes I have.

In-Character

Character Name:Zachariah

What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) :Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):N/A

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

When Zachariah was young he lived in a small village named Retus. There his parents where farmers. He helped with the animals, his father worked the crops, and his mother made the food. He knew many peole in the village. His best freind was Jaron. One day a his friends house was robbed and his family was killed. Zachariah always knew jaron was haunting him. He was angry. He got a sword and trained for a couple of years.

When he was 16 he went to get a job of his own, unexpectingly he joined a group of bandits. They would loot houses and burn buildings. he didn't like the burning part. while raiding a house he was captured and taken to jail. He tried many times to escape but gave up. When he got out he became a merchant. many times he would muscle people into buying stuff.

He descided to do some thing better than be a merchant so he became a guard. He was always in the guard tower waiting for something to happen. One day the undead attacked the village he left his new home to save his old one. He fought his best but he was defeated he managed to escaped. He has always done the right thing, but from that day on he hated the undead, suprizingly no one was killed.

He bought himself armor and a tunic and went to the cloud temple to start his journey.

He is very Generous and will always do the right thing and he is never going to pass up and offer to get loot. He doesn't like to rob or kill. He has a hatred of the undead because of his past encounters.

What are your Character's ambitions:Hunting, training, and a good friendly competition.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc):Sword

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?: His swordsmanship

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( http://tinyurl.com/Lotcscreenshot ):http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/my-skin-1164508/ this is a link to see my skin I failed to do it correct sorry

Other Information about your Character:

Open-Response-Questions

Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP.

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?"Oye!" "Whats the big idea!?" "Leave him alone(Slowly unsheath my sword)." Hoping they would back down. If not I would hit one with my sword to make them back down and even fight them if I have to.

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? "Do you have blue wool by any chance It would be much apreciated." "I will need it for my tunic."

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: I would go by and take the items and wait for some one to come if not I would leave. From time to time I would go see if some one was there. If there was I would sneak them in or just keep them.

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you in the common tongue, how do you respond?"Hello, Do you have any food it would be much obliged." "Do you have a map I could use to find my way to the nearest town."

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?:I would go to the leader of the and say "I heard you are in need of assistance to take care of a bandit problem, could I join?"

Anything else you would like to say?:

[Cappy 1599]

Reasons:

• Your metagaming is partially incorrect and needs to be expanded. Don't be afraid to search the internet to find the definition, but make sure your response is written in your own words! Plagiarism is a bannable offence. I have also written a rather comprehensive guide to avoiding it, which you may wish to read. There is a link to it in my signature.
  
• Side note: games like Skyrim and Oblivion are role-playing games (RPGs). There is a very big difference between role-play (what we do on this server) and role-playing games (RPGs), despite the name similarity.
  
• You need to include more server lore in your biography. Show us that you are at least a little familiar with the places and major events of our world. You can research the lore on our Wiki here.
  
• Lore inconsistencies in your biography. The Undead have been trapped in Aegis (our old world) for over 50 in-game years. We currently reside in the world of Asulon.
  
• I can't reach your skin screenshot.
  
• Your Open Response Questions need to be expanded. They are all required to be at least one paragraph, and written in full role-play. Some ways to expand on them would be to explain in more detail what your character does, and also explain why they do it, and "what's going through their head" at the moment. You should also include both detailed actions and dialogue in your answers. You should not include "if"s in your response. You are narrating a scenario, not listing the possible courses of events.
  
• Beware of powergaming in your Open Response Questions. One man defeating two armed men is a very difficult feat.
  
• Incorrect formatting.
  

Please use the correct formatting in your next application as it makes the application significantly easier to read. You can do that by finding the application format here, and copying everything inside the white box. Then paste it somewhere, and begin filling in your answers outside the tags, like so:

[b][color="#add8e6"]Minecraft Account Name:[/color][/b] <Your answer here>

Do not change the application format in any way.

Since this is your fifth application, you are hereby banned from applying for three months.

If you have any queries relating to this application, please do not hesitate to PM me on the forums!

You may reapply in 3 months from the time of this post.

[Cappy 1599]

Moved to Denied Forum