Sirxzavier 4 Share Posted July 21, 2012 Out-Of-Character Minecraft Account Name: MohawkBoi How old are you?: 16 Time-Zone/Country of Residence: EDT, United States. Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Very good with English. Okay grammar Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I enjoy role playing on Minecraft. It just feels like the perfect game to role play on. I love playing sport and I love`hanging out with my friends. But sometimes I like to kick back,relax and play some Minecraft. Me thinking single player mc is boring. I spend a lot of my time on Multiplayer servers. And it is kind of hard to find a good survival server. So I love to find a good role play server and just role play for a while. I have been on quite a couple role play servers, such as Book of Halegron (shut down) Skyrim role play (Changed to a survival server with low players) Fall out role play (Lost the ip) Jades flame (Shut down) and Agoria still going on. But it is not the greatest. Now I really want to play on a big server. That hopefully will not shut down. And I will always find the ip. This server is huge. And I have been reading on the wiki the lore is amazing. The options you have is just extravagant. I would really enjoy playing on this server and rping with the others. As I flew around as a wandering soul, I saw that the world is just tremendous. I can already see myself role playing in a world like that! So I am determined to get into this server no matter how long it takes me. How much time could you be on the server weekly?: A lot of hours being I'm on summer vacation! But when school starts again, I will be on maybe 6-8 hours a day. What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Role playing (In my mind at least) Is when you take the position of someone or something you are not. You would also probably do something you would not do in real life. With your role play character. What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: I have a lot of experience with role playing. I used to play roblox role played on there. I role play on minecraft,role play on Tera sometimes and I role play on Psu (Phantasy Star Universe an xbox game) In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Meta gaming is when you take information OOC and use it to benefit your character IC. In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is: Power-emoting or god-emoting (or at least what I think it is) is an act of forcing the result of one's actions on another character, typically without the other player's consent and not giving the other character a chance to do anything about the emote. For instance, "Player1 kills Player2", "Player1 hits Player2" and "Player1 steals X gold from Player2" are all power-emotes. What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect this server to be amazing and very time consuming. Because the lore just pulls me in and gives me so many things I can role play about. So it is just endless fun. With this massive world, I hope there will be lots of role play events my character can take part off. What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Skyrim role play,fallout role play,Book Of Halegron,jades flame and agoria. All of them shut down except for agoria witch is still going but the lore is not good. The players do not role play good and the options are very low. They accept so many people with the dead parents thing. And the skyrim role play server changed to a survival server. So it shut down also. Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes. Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules:Yes. How did you hear about us?: Well before Book Of Halegron was made people from lord of the craft joined and one person asked are you from lord of the craft the other person replied yes. So I looked it up and it looked amazing now after Book shut down I wish to join this one and stick with it. Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: Not very recently a while ago actually. I cannot find the application anywhere I am sorry. In-Character: Character Name: Aeru Dark What Race are you? (You may only be Human, Orc, Elf or Dwarf!) : Elf What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race): Wood Elf Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long. This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): Aeru is a 8 year old wood elf who was always happy,brave and encouraging. He loved his mother and father dearly. one day when he was 6 his father set out on an adventure but Aeru was to young to come. His father swore he would return but never did. Him and his older brother would wait outside everyday for his fathers return. Eventually Aeru became 8 and his brother was 17. His brother grew tired of waiting for his father and left to join the Phoenix Rangers. later news returned home that his brother was jailed and will be hung for committing many assassinations in another nation. After that his mother became so stressed she never talked. She just lied in her room. The only time she would encounter Aeru is when she made food. And that was running low,so Aeru taught himself to use a bow and he hunted the animals and brought home food. Slowly his mom was recovering and was being more normal. She became even more happier when she found out that Aeru's brother Ventu escaped. And then they finally got a letter from there father. Saying that he is having a great adventure and he will return soon. Aeru was happier then ever and things were going great until his mother fell ill and passed away. His father still never returned so Aeru left the house hoping to become a strong man and be able to protect anybody. He wanted more then ever to be great with a sword. This was an unusual wish for a wood elf. But Aeru was different. So Aeru set out to find his father and maybe his brother. But for now Aeru wants to be adopted so he can be raised strong but he is still out on the roads exploring the world of Asulon! What are your Character's ambitions?: My character's ambitions are to find his father and his brother. To become strong with a sword and become an amazing gentleman. What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): My character's favorite tool is a sword and a bow. What is one of your Character's most skilled talents? My character has great hunting senses such as eye sight smell and hearing. And he is very well at sword fighting. A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format, if you do not know how to acquire one, copy and paste this link into your browser: ( ): (I kind of messed up this part because it deleted something but there is the picture of my skin) Other Information about your Character: Aeru no matter what is always trying to be happy and is always trying to make people happy. He also is very brave and loves to be on the danger side. But aeru has sort of a short temper so you can get him mad easily. And he is terrible with crafting stuff. Open-Response-Questions Each and every question must be answered with a minimum of a single full paragraph and entirely in RP. Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond? (My character would be 14) Aeru: Hey leave the halfling alone! Warriors 1: Aww the little elf is trying to be a hero! Warrior 2: Isn't that sweet Hear that punk the elf is trying to be nice! Aeru: Look just let the halfling go and there will be no trouble I will count to 10.. 1! Warrior 2: Is this guy kiddi- Aeru: 2! warrior 1: This guy is funn- Aeru:3 Warrior 2: Get Him *Aeru unsheathes his sword and jumps to halfling and grabs him and runs with him* Warrior 1: HE IS GETTING AWAY GET HIM! warrior 2: I KNOW CHASE HIM *Warrior throws a knife at Aeru's leg and Aeru falls and the halfling falls out of my hand* *Aeru crawls towards the knife and the warrior kicks him and then places the blade through the halfling killing him* Aeru:NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *Both warriors laugh and walk away* Aeru: I must get stronger to avenge the evil in this world! Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response? (Aeru would be 9) Aeru: I'm sorry sir I don't want anything. Merchant: Come on kid we have plenty of good stuff like a uh knife.. Ummm here we got a strong drink,Oh! Here we have a little wooden toy *Merchant puts it at Aeru's face* Aeru: Umm It is broken and I have no money to spend *Merchant looks around* *Merchant looks at Aeru with a mischievous smile* Look kid you can pay me with work Aeru: Umm No that's alr- Merchant: SHHH! I'm speaking kid! *Aeru holds on to knife father left for him at home* Merchant: Now I got this guy who never paid for this ring.. I need you to get him and you know get rid of him... Aeru: What do you mean get rid of him.. Merchant: You know like make him go... Aeru: Oh... *Nods his head*. Merchant: Yeah so you go- Aeru: I have no idea what you are talking about sir.. Merchant:*Yells in rage* I NEED YOU TO KILL HIM FOR ME KID HE WON'T SUSPECT YOU BECAUSE YOU ARE JUST A KID CAN YOU KILL SOMEONE HUH OR ARE YOU TO STUPID!?!?! *Everyone looks up and hurries away* *Guards come* Guard 1: You are a danger to this town! Hiring little kids to do your dirty work! Guard 2: You sicken me! Guard 3: Take him away! *gaurds grab him* Merchant: WAIT WAIT WAIT WOAH WOAH! I did not do anything tell him kid. *merchant stares at kid with a devilish angry face* Guard tell the truth Aeriel is watching you. merchant: Yeah tell the truth or Ibless will corrupt you *Merchant says with gritted teeth* Aeru: *Tells the truth to the guard's* Guard 3: TAKE HIM AWAY! merchant: STUPID ELF KID *Merchant jumps out of the guard's hands and runs at Aeru with a knife* *Aeru jumps to the side pulls out his tiny knife and stabs the merchant* *Merchant is badly injured but not dead* *Guard's grab him* guard 1: Good job kid maybe one day you could join us *Guard's smiles and all the guard's take the merchant to jail* Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: (My character would be 8) Aeru: Woah a golden sword! *picks it up and swings around with it*Aeru: This is great I feel like a warrior! *Runs outside with it and starts hitting a tree* *After a while tires and walks back to the hut. What else is in here *Take out the iron bars* Aeru: Woah these are heavy. *Man runs into the hut out of breath and shuts the door* *Aeru shocked drops the Iron bar on his foot before the man even notices that he is there* Aeru: *Yells* OUCH *man turns around and quickly takes out a sword and jumps at Aeru* man: WHO ARE YOU! Aeru: *Breathing Heavily* Uhh- Man: ANSWER MY QUESTION *has sword to Aeru's neck* *man squints in the darkness and see that Aeru is just a kid* *Man throws his sword on the ground* Man: why are you in here? Aeru: I a-a-am A- Man: Speak like a man do not stutter chin up high voice loud and clear. Aeru: *says a little louder without stutter* I am Ae- Man: More clearly I can barley hear you speak up kid. Aeru: *Says in a yell* I am Aeru! man: Better but you did not answer my question why the hell are you here? Aeru: Well I Sa- Man: Hurry up and tell me I don't have all day *Man pulls out a drink and start drinking it* Aeru:*Says quick and loud* I SAW AN OPEN DOOR AND SOMETHING SHINY OUT OF IT SO I WENT OT CHECK IT OUT1 *They both hear voices outside* Voices: HA Maybe he is in here hiding in the crappy hut! (Hut is made out of sticks* Man: *Says in a hurry* Too Loud kid get down! *Man grabs kid and they hide behind the chest* *Hammer pops through hut and the whole thing collapses* Guard: HA THERE HE IS GET HIM man: Jumps at guard with sword and they engage into battle Man: KID GET OUT OF HERE *Aeru stays and cannot leave* *The man counter attacks the guard and stabs him in the back and flips over another guy and elbows him in the head,disarms him and chops both of his arms clean off* Guard 1: MY ARMS MY ARMS! *Guard eventually dies from blood loss* *Aeru stares at man amazed and scared* man: I thought I told you to run kid *man looks at him with a steely glare right in his eyes* Aeru: Why were those guys after you man: *says the truth* They dislike me because my father was stronger and always kinder to people. Everybody always liked my father more. He would always be brave to help anyone always clear and was never afraid of anything. He was so kind.. I miss him. So they thought they have to kill me to. So they are after me now. Man: You should get out of here kid I am dangerous to be around. Aeru: But what about yo- Man: Don't worry about me... Just go. *Man passes Aeru the sword and some money* man: I saw you using the sword you are pretty good keep training. Aeru: But don't you need this stu- Man: Yes, but that doesn't matter a gave it to you now accept it and go bye kid stay safe. Aeru: uhh o-ok man: *Says with a smile* What did I tell you don't stutter chin up and speak clearly. Bye kid. Aeru: Bye.. *Man jumps up the tree's and travels quickly through them* Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond? (My character would be 8) Aeru: H-hello. *Tall elven man appears* Elvish man: Hello child what is your name. Aeru: My name is Aeru.. Whats yours? Elvish man: My name is Nandaro. Sit down child. Aeru: Okay *Aeru sits down nervously by an elven girl about his age* *Everyone smiles at Aeru and greets him warmly* Aeru: So uhh what goes down around here. *Aeru turns to the elven girl and sees that she was staring at him and sees that she quickly turns away and she is blushing* *Nandaro sees everything and smiles* Nandaro: The girl next to you names is Apropis. Aeru: Uh cool. *All of the elves around the camp fire laugh* *Some of them laughing saying Apropis thinks the new guy is charming!* Apropis: *Says blushing* Stop laughing! Nandaro: Settle down everyone! Why don't you two go by the pond and wash up. Aeru: The umm pond? elvish lady: That way. It is where we clean off after the hard day *she says with a gentle smile* Aeru: Umm okay. Apropis: Follow me I will take you. *she says smiling* (They arrive at the pond) Aeru: So Uhh do I just dive in? Apropis: Silly go over there behind the trees and bathe but not with your clothes on. Aeru: Oh right! Right I knew that. *Apropis giggles and looks at him smiling and then blushes and looks away* *Aeru bathes in the pond and walks back to The girl side* *Aeru sees apropis fully dressed waiting with her hair wet but looking beautiful* *Aeru dumb founded says* Um h-hi a-apropis. Apropis: Hi... You want to go back? Aeru: *Aeru stares at her not saying a word* Apropis: Aeru. Aeru: *Stares at her more* Apropis: AERU! Aeru: Woah what? Hi! How you doing? Apropis: Want to head back? Aeru: Umm yeah sure. *Apropis goes the wrong way* Apropis: OH NO! Aeru: What? We are in the wrong path! This is the long woods and it is turning night! There is probably demons crawling around here! Aeru: Don't worry about it *says bravely* Just stay by me and you will be safe. *as they walk through the dark woods aporpis grabs Aeru hand and they held hands all the way through the long woods without getting hurt or being scared* You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character act on this information?::(Aeru would be 16) Aeru: I would like to join to help protect this town. Guard: You seem a little young. Aeru: Does it matter your men are low you need all the help you can get. Guard: You in it for the money? Aeru: No I'm in it to save these people. But a little money would be nice. Guard: *laughs* I like you kid. Are you sure you want to do this. Those bandits are strong. Aeru: Bring it. Guard: Ok. (Later that night) *All of the guards gather at the road* -Crack,Crack- *Arrow hits a guard in the head and the guard dies* *Followed by more and more and more arrows* *More guards drop rapidly* Head Guard: CHARGE! *Everybody charges* *Sounds of swords clashing screams of pain and bodies dropping fills the air* *Aeru jumps and stabs a bandit in the chest rolling to another one grabbing him and using him as a shield for another sword* Aeru: *says silently* Born to fight, *stabs a guy in the chest* Trained to kill! *jumps over a guys sword and trips another dude and breaks his neck* Prepared to die! *Gets stabbed right in arm* *falls down in pain* *rips of shirt and wraps it around arm and stands up slowly and wincing* Never will! *grabs * Keep low, move fast! *ducks under a sword and stabs him in the back quickly* Kill first, die last! *jumps and sticks a sword through another bandit turns and sees a guard die* One stab on kill1 *stabs a guy through the chest and kills him* *Jumps at the last bandit* No luck! *punches him and cuts him up* Just skill. *Looks around and sees all the bodies some of guards most of bandits* *and wipes blood of and walks back to the village with sword on hand* (This last little fight where I killed everyone with ease does not mean I'm going to power game! I just wanted to make it sound like my character is a good fighter and it went with the little words he was saying as he was fighting. I do usually let my character loose like you see in the first one of the role play responses I lost. So sorry about that little power game thing I will not do it in actual role play) Anything else you would like to say?: Sorry for turning how do you respond into a whole role play story. And sorry about some of my grammatical fails! I am in quite a rush for my cousins birth day party! I am a quick typer and I hope to get into this server!The rhyme in my last role play response goes like this, Born To fight,trained to kill,prepared to die, never will,keep low,move fast,kill first,die last,one stab,one kill,no luck just skill. I made it up when I was playing Team Fortress 2 but instead on one stab one kill it was one shot one kill no luck just skill. Anyways thank you for reading this again sorry for my grammar fails I use grammar always in role play but I have to get going now! Have a great day. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rom 59 Share Posted July 22, 2012 Denied, Your ORQ's are a little power-gamey, an eight-year-old elf picking up a halfling and running away with him? And also, many of the scenarios you have devised are a little far-fetched. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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